Tasfia's os gallery...(updated) page 20

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hello guys...😎shocked to see me...ah! dont be...kisi ne kaha hai ki mai to pagal hoon kabhi bhi kahin bhi dikh sakti hoon...🤣ok so the main reason of me here is that i was thinking from a long to open a so gallery but couldnt come up with it.but finally i have opened it😛i hope you guys like my os as you all liked my ff...whenever i come with a os i will post it here
pls be my support guys...😳
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tasfia

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index

kuch is tarah...page-1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/39309211

does love need words...page-5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/39589722

the hate letter...page-10
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40216876

Dream Girl...page-14
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40625919

The Confession

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

ok i want to dedicate this os to my sweett sister maha(drmaha)😛
i dont know di ap ko kaisa lagega😆...but i tried my best......
hope you like it😳

kuch is tarah

i was in 10th when i first saw her.....she was in 8th i guess....the school hour was over....i was heeding back to my home.....when i saw her.......she was eating pani puri with her friends...the pani puri lookd really appealing when she was eating it....i was so much lost in her...her eyes....they were so innocent....her smile....it can kill thousand of people...she looks like a barbie dool.her pony which was long to her wrist...she looked so cute.....mayank sharma..the academic champ was noticing a girl...wow!!!..the whole school now has a topic ..hey wait school se mujhe dekha ki yea ladki to humare school ki hai...!!!haha...kya kismat pai hai mayank sharma tune....ok but there are more than thousand student.....aur mai ek ladki ko kaise dhundhunga....aur kya tha.mayank sharma ko 10th stnderd me love at first sight hogaya tha.....

aur uske baad kya tha....raat guzar ta tha uske khaylo mein aur din use dhundte uye....par iska yea matlab nahi maine apni padai par dhyan nahi diya....akhir ab to mujhe aur bhi bada kuch banna tha...akhir shadi jo karni thi mujhe usse..haan shadi...u know what i used to blush like an idiot thinking about me getting married and that too with my angel...par phir maine realize kiya jisse mai shadi ke sapne dekhraha hun mujhe to uska naam tak nahi pata ...aisa lagraha tha jaise ab uo mujhe milne se rahi....board exam agayen aur mai exam me busy hogaya...socha ki shyed uo mere kismat me hi nahi......itna dhunda par kahi nahi mili..board exam ke result ayen and as usual mayank sharma topped in his school...ok i was happy but somewher i missed her....i still remember her first sight....

i started my 11th...ah! mayank sharma aur girls..na! yea thi mere sare frnds ki soch...salo ko pata hi nahi mere dil me meri angel basi hui hai...like every night i was thinking about her...and guess what i realized us din uske saath meri behen bhi thi...i got up and smiled..ha! mayank u are a fool....itne dino se tu usse dhund raha hai...uo to teri behen ki frnd hai...i didnt waste a single moment and went to my sister..i stooped in mid way....what will i ask her?...i mean i even dont know my angel's name....shit!!!!.....i mean yea to uahi baat hui na...samne laddo hai par apko dibetics hai aur ap use kha nahi saktey...aur kya phir se mera masoom sa dil tut gaya........

jab har taraf se maine har man li thi tab god ko finaly mujh per daya agayi....i was leaving for my badminton practice when i saw her....oh god!..is she really here??...i couldnt believe my eyes...i was feeling that i will faint anytime...ofcourse with happiness....she cutely smiled at me....hayee...mai to mar jaunga iski smile se hi..i blushed...aww.....i was bheaving like a chessy teen age lover boy...haha..i know and i like this mayank....itna bhi bura nahi hai....
"gunjan hai?"....she asked me...hayee koi kaise itna sweet ho sakta hai.....iski awaz bhi iske jaisi sweet hai....aur maine bhi chance pe dance mara..."ap kaun?"....i asked her..agar aise naam puchta to joote marti....dekha hai maine apne frnds ko joote khate uye...."mai nupur uski frnd".....hayee naam bhi utna hi pyara hai..."ao na baitho mai bula ta hun usko"..
aur yeahi thi meri aur uski dosti ki shurwaat......dhire dhire uo gunjan ki kaam aur meri dost jyada banti gayi...gunjan to bechari side table banke reh gayi...uo meri behen hai par...nupur to meri uo hai...waise uska naam nupur bhushan kuch acha nahi laga tha mujhe..nupur sharma......hona chahiye na......

pata hi nahi chala kab aur kaise hum kareeb ane lage.....uski maths thodi weak thi...i used to give her maths tution..actually she used to do her sums and i...ah! i used to drool over her...she is just to cute.....pehle pehle to usko samajah nahi ata tha par phir anelaga....i mean uo notice akrne algi ki mai usko ghurta hoon....mai dar gaya ..par jab maine dekha she used to blush.....i was so happy.....hayye.uske tamatar jaise gal........mai na fidaa ho gaya hoon.......

uska ana jana humare ghar roj ka hogaya......sach kahun to mujhe uski adat pad gayi thi...aur shayed use bhi.....pata nahi kya tha...par yea bacjpan ka crush to nahi tha...bilkul sacha pyar tha.....akhir mujhe usme rab jo dikta tha.....

10 saal beet gayen....pata hi nahi chala kaise..uske saath...uo 10th ka mayank multination company ka CEO ban gaya...aur meri nupur doctor ban gayi...amazing combo na?...guzarte waqt ne mujhe yea ehsaas dilaya ki jo mai uske liye feel karta tha....karta hun uo koi crush ya attaraction nahi hai....love hai true love...aur kahi na kahin mujhe laga ki shayed uo bhi mujse..pata nahi....par shyed jo baat 10 saal se dil me rakhi hai ab use bata dena chahiye......

that day was her birthday.....i wanted to propose her....pata nahi surprise lagega ya phir shock....jo bhi ho aaj to bolna hi hai...
i took her to the beach.....har saal uske birthday ke baad mai use beach pe lata hun...sirf hum dono...nice na..ya i know....so kahan tha mai......
haan mai use beach par legaya....
we were sitting side by side......how romantic na..uske saath aaj bhi mai uo 10th ka mayank feel karta hoon....i took a deep breath and turned towards her..she was glittering in the moonlit...she looks more beautiful now....sirf bahari nahi andar se bhi uo utni hi khoobsurat thi....na jhagda na ladai....har kisi ko khush rakhna aur khud bhi khush rehna...kabhi kabhi lata hai ki kya mai uske layek hoon....??

mayank se mai pehli baar gunjan ke ghar mili thi...pehli nazar ka pehla pyar tha...hai...uski smile bohot sweet hai...gunjan humehsa apne bhai ke bare me kehti thi...sach kahun to mujhe milne ki tamanna hoti thi...akhir jiski itni tareef suni ho usse milne ka dil to karega na...achanak se gunja ke ghar jana rojana hogaya...sahyed mayank ki wajar se....use milne me bohot acha lagta tha...maths meri weak nahi thi...par mayank se tution lane ka acha baha tha...mujhe uske saath time spend karna acha lagta tha...maine dekha tha uo mujhe ghurta tha...pehle pehle samajh nahi aya par jab aya to acha laga tha...may be i also used to blush

dhire dhire mujhe mere pyar ka ehsaas hone laga..aur dar lagne laga...agar uo mujhse pyar na kare to...khone ka dard sabse bada hota hai.!..par apna dost khona nahi chahti thi isiliye kabhi keh nahi payi..par kahin na kahin mujhe umeed thi ki shayed uo bhi mujhse...pata nahi......

m-nupur...he called her.....she looked at him..and smilled..n- haan mayank bolo...m-umm...mujhe...actaully i want to tell you something...her heart beat started getting fast...she looked down...n-hann..hann bolo.....mayank got up and nupur also...n-kya huya mayank...mayank looked at her and bent down on his knees....nupur was shocked..n-mayank yea tum....m-nahi nupur mujhe bolne do...nupu ai yea nahi kahunga ki mujhe nahi pata kab kahan aur kaise balki mujhe mujhe pata hai..jisdin maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tha usi waqt mujhe tumse pyar hogaya tha.....haan nupur mai tumse bohot pyar karta hoon ..tum meri zindagi ki pehli aur akhri ladki ho...kya tum apni puri zindagi mere naam karna chahogi?
nupur was happy..tears were flowing fronm her eyes......she also bened down and hugged him....as tight as she could....mayank smilled and hugged her backed....they broke apart.....
n-itni der kyun laga di..pehle nahi keh sakte the....she said compalining
mayank smilled at her....m=sorry..he said holding his ears...she shyly smiled and hide her face on his chest.....
to kya mai haan samjhun...mayank asked her.....she looked at him and nooded....mayank smilled broadly and leand to place a soft kiss on her rose pink lips...he placed a soft kiss which soon turned into a passionate one....they brok apart...nupur shied and hide herself on his broad chest while amaynk smilled at her mischesviously....

m-happy anniversary mrs sharma...mayank said in her ears as she opened her eyes to see her husband smilling at her....she also smilled and gave a peck to his dimples....n-same to you....she said as she huggeds him...
n-mera gift?....she forwarded her hand......mayank looked at her and then back to her hand...m-uo to mai bhool gaya...n-kya?..bhool gaye?..she said shocked plus sadly..she turned her face around..n-mujhe tumse baat nahi karni.....he smilled and forwarded her a samll box....she excitedly took it...n-thax...she opened it and found a beautiful pendent in it..her eyes filled with tears.....she looked at him...n-i love you mayank.......thanks for coming in my life...mayank smilled and took her in his arms....m-i love you too....and thaks for let me come in your life......

tumse milke, aisa laga tumse milke...
armaan huyen pure dil ke
aye mere jane wafa
Saath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaa..

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and pls do comment😳
suggetions are more than welcome😛

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Killer_DeviL

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Posted: 14 years ago

nics job gr8 keep it up👍🏼

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umaima

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Posted: 14 years ago

ohhhh dat ws really really sweet....congo for making a gallery......loved it alot......plzzz keep adding more n more😊😊

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aswathy

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Posted: 14 years ago

very sweet os dear........

it was not so different os i have ever read..but it has its own cuteness and sweetness in it.....

as i am little weak in hindi, i have to read it two times....

i juz loved it soo much..

one of the most cutest os i have ever read....

nice work dear..keep it up

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tukun2009

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Posted: 14 years ago

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏briliant.mjht ki yade taja ho gayi

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daniella

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Posted: 14 years ago

cute and adorable os!!!

do write more

thanks 4 the pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

fantastic os .

tasfia. very lovely. i really liked their love story........... very nice . very nice.......... amazing.............................. "phir wohi raat hai .... phir wohi iiiiiiiiiiiiiii. raat hai khawabo ki. raat bhar khawabo mein dekha karenge tujhe.

phir wohi raat hai ..................."

your os was truely very nice

"jaane kaise kab kaha

ikraar ho gaya

hum sochre hi reh gaye aur pyaar ho gya....."