Tasfia's os gallery...(updated) page 20

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Aww.. Very adorable Tasfia.... Childhood crush soo sweet..😳

I loved the way Mayank described her... Very cute...

Awesome one shot u should write more....This was great, I especially loved this line...

Samne laddo hai par apko dibetics hai aur ap use kha nahi saktey

Very funny...

A great os, i loved the way you wrote it the style of writing, very nice...

The confession was so cute.. beach par....😳

But loved it... very well written do write more...

-Laiba

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

first of all thanks a lot for writing me such a lovelu os.i loved it......😊
concept was too gud.......specially whn u used certain movies names.......👏..
love ya.....

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

omg its superb tafsia...

loved the way in which u narrate the story..

its really nice and sweet..

thnx for the pm

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

ufuu...akair woh waqt ahi gaya jab apny OS likh dala

lovly dear

it was completly like u....jasi tum ho thori pagal, thori sweet...seems like mayank ke jaga tasfia narration day rhi hoo...

sweet concept...

lovly dialogue....the ladoo wala specially

do write more n more..

luv ya

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey buddy🤗

congos for your new gallery👏🥳

and what an OS yaar

Mayank was sooooo cute😳... loved the way he described her😍

Gunjan bechaari side table banke reh gayi😆

and proposal was soooo romantic😍... haaye...

thanks for de pm🤗

Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Congratz on ur new gallery!

i loved ur first OS

do write more soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

ur first try

ur first os

if the first one is tht much rockinggg

what about the next one

so do write another one sooon

will love reading it =)

awesomeeeeeee

amazingly written

loved ur writting wtyle dear

really ver well written

or kya bolon???

really cute n innocent story

yet fun reading it =)

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

awwwwww such a cute and romantic os

simply beautiful

mayur were soooooooooooo sweet

lovely os

do write more !!!!!!!!!!!

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

congrats for your os gallery

aww that was such a sweet and adorable mayur os

it had all the elements in it

just loved the way you described thier feelings

gr8 start

do write more

thanks for the pm

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Tasfiaaaaaaaaaaaaa
it was very very very very veryyyyyyyyyy sweet OS
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
mayur ki payar ko tou wah wah karna chaiye- love at first sight
hayeeeeeeeeeeee it was super cute.............
tasfiiiiiiiiiiiiiii plzzzzzzzzzz do write more OS.