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Posted: 14 years ago

BLIND LOVE

Giltz, glamour, gorgeous….OMG…..here she comes…so many photographers, screaming fans, flash lights and sounds of shuters..

A girl in her early 20s descent down from the stairs of the hall, after wining yet anothere beauty pagent

Nupur, beautifl, is a small adjusctive a complete under estimation to what she is in realitiy. Long black hairs, a Barbie doll figure and dark black eyes riched with khol…she was lookin no less than a goddest.

She waved everyone and was surrounded with press reporor one she came out.

Rep: so Ms. Nupur…howz the feeling

Nupur: its gr8…I am feeling one the top of the world

REP: u r being claimed as the most beautiful girl ever won ths peagent …..wht do u want say abt ths

Nupur: sounds gr8…but it will sound perfect if people will have same kind of words for me as a person too

Rep: so r v seeing u onscreen also

Nupur: I cant say ths yet ..i have some other plans too

Rep: evry1 loves u soo much..dnt u feel the luckiest …so u should

Nupur: yes I know evry1 love me n I am thnkuful …but right now I have sum personal work to finish than I''ll decide wht to do…thnku

Saying ths she rashed towards her car with the help of her security gards….

Few…..finally out of this noise….she lookd outside too see screaming faces….

"so many people loves u …don't u feel lucky "

Nupur: sigh…pyar tu ek se hi mil jay buhat hai…..

Far from this lights, nosie and materlisum, a man in his mid 20 was watching all this on telvison with a smile on his listening her voice…alwsys create such effect on him..

He is person who is obessed about her, a person who advice her, is amentor ..the greatest camponion she has…

Lost sumwhere in her voice he came out whn her laptops'chat room alert starts to buzz…he smile n shock his head …n put on his head phones

Mayank:: hello..n many congratulation to u

Nupur: thnaku so much …it was so noise here I tell u

Mayank: chuckled….nupur ur part of the nsie…where evry u go screams are slways there…aur abhi tu shayad tum wahin hogi aur mjhyse baat shooro hogai..cant u wait ..to reach home

Nupur: no I cant ……

Maynk:: kyun

Nupur: kyun k I want to talk tou

Mayank: kya hua

Nupur: mayank mein tum se milna chahti hoon….

Mayank: kyun….nuour..nhi….yeah

Nupur: yeah kya mayank..plz ek baar ….mein tumhary ghar ajao gi plzzz ek baar …pls

Myank: thik hai per…

Nupur: per kuch nhi..mein kal arahin hoon bs…bye

Mayank, a very well know composer by profession whom no1 has seen yet…a soft calm n life for him is just loving hs music…loner who found the ths beauty as hs best friend, support a person who fills hs silence with her voice

Nupur and mayank are net friends. It was strange…strange because nuour was never a person who spend hours on net , chating n doing other stusff… n mayank was never a person who force sum1 to get into sumthing….nupur join chat club as her manger wants her to interact with her fans….a day surfing here n there..nt finding any thing to do ….she joined a chat club n found mayank there…

He was a voice chatter n she was not sure of doing ths..he convinced her by saying ..if ur words can speak with me why cant ur voice…it's the same thing….his voice when first interact with her ear drums she couldn't sum how denie talking to him.

They have been friends for past 2 years now, but never have asked abt each others personal contact. No meetings, no phone nos, no address, all they know abitu each other is precisely EACh other…the first she has asked him to meet was today.

NUPUR:

I want to meet you mayank, its hight time now. I know u will never ask me too do this no mater how much u want it. I know it will be difficut to make u understand wht I want to tell u….but than I will make it , I promise tht too

Mayank and I share a strange relationship, when we become friends ti companions to me now he is everything.

I have ben loved by every1. rather it will b better if I say, eber1 loves my beauty. Today when I stand infront of mirror, I found a curse on my face. For people maybe it's a blessing , for me sumhow it is….but its turning to be my worsed night mare.

From childhood to teenage to now when I am a young women…no body has seen me neyond this beautiy…..i lost friends because they find me arrongant. I was not but become whn evry1 just cant see beyond my face, excpt u. I own this feeling to you…if you would'nt have been there, tried so much to break my apprehensions n talk to u……I wouldn't have felt tht my soul exisit for sum1

You came into my life as a metor, support. You light up dark with ur love n care

You never said that I am beautiful, cauz u nevr saw me at all, u always excepted me as a natural person, a person that I am , bad or good wahtevr….. combination of everything ….i still remember when I ask u how found me as person…..you laughed n said " a roller coaster ride ur"

Nupur: matalb

Mayank: matlab….tum jab dayny par ati hoo tu sab kuch daydo….aur jab mangny per aaooo tu kuch na mango…..ghusaa aay tu sari duniya jalado….aur yeah bhi na socho k us duniya mein tum bhi ho…she chukled….n u know I hate tht in u….u hurt ur self also

Nupur: aur pyar kero tu….

Mayank:: tu dhar sara….per thora sa return mein khud bhi chahti hoo….imeed lagati hoo…

Nupur: yeah tu sab chahty hai…kyun tum nhi chahty

Mayank: nhi…he said straightly

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: kyun k asa kuch khabi ho nhi sakta

Nupur: yeah kya baat hoi

Mayank: yeah hi tu baat hai….jab haqeeqat se samana hota hai tu pyar kam per jata hai

Nupur: aur mjhy tumhari yeahi baat sab se bori lagti hai…itny positive ho …per is baray mein itny negative kyun hoo

Mayank: pitful laugh

Nupur: tum pyar se dartay kyun hoo

Mayank: tum nhi darti kya

Nupur: nhi …pehly lagta tha ab nhi

Mayank: pehly nhi lagta tha….ablagta hai

Mayank:

The thing I was scared of the most …..is gonna happen now…I don't want to loss the only person in my life…the only person tht is my life

Reality seems to be exceptable to u but itinst Nupur..it is not dear…living with the fact is not tht easy

Nupur: tu…I am nt sorry for it…it maybe matters for u..n I know it must ….but for me it doesn't…could change my relation with u

Mayank: im nt sorry Nupur for ths..per tum asa kaho gi I didn't expected

Nupur: tum jantay mjhy tumari yeah baat achi lagi

Mayank: kya??

Nupur: han …..kyun k is wajaha se jasa tum mjhy janaty ho wasa koi nhi….jo tum dekhty ho woh koi nhi dekh sakta…aur sab se bahr ker tum woh nhi dekhty jis se mjhy nafrat se hoti ja rahi hai…

Mayank: achaaa…changing mood..wasay chating k koi against tha…

Nupur: ha nab bhi hoon….kyun k hum teenager is k galat is tamal ertay hai….

Mayank: hmm yeah tu hai…samhjdar hogai ho

Nupur: ap ki mehrabani..

Laughed

I know y ur cuming …..if I would have been dum1 else ..he must have been celrbating , he would have decorated his house with flowers, made just the way u love..n welcum u with open arms…me too want to do this but…

I know initially u might be able tolive withit but soon u 'll ralize as it ur biggest mistake…n tht moment I m gonna die….distance wch we share today ..i can live with it but….clooseness leading to separate ways I cant…I cant Nupur….


Mayank: hi how r u

Nupur: I am fine…andar nhi bolao gay

Mayank: aao na….per ghar ko maat dkh na…tuhari tarah safi pasand nhi hoon mein..i m a mess u know tht

She looked around the house all mesmerized…it was beautiful…the most colourful house ever she has seen….but done evry decently…evry colour was contrast perfectly ….

Nupur: waooo…u have beautiful imagination…

Mayan: thnku …so howz life

Nupur: incomplelt

Mayank: kyun …ask relectanly

Nupur: kyun k mein jis se pyar kerti hoon…..he loves me too..but darta hai khabi bolay ga nhi

Maynk: phir tu bhol jao us ko….woh tumhara sath nhi day pay ga

Nupur: nhi …yeah tu us ko bhi nhi pata k sirf woh hi hai jo mera sath day pay ga…..kyun do ga mera sath…

She forwarded her hand to wich he close his eyes..n turn his back to avoid her let her see his expressions

Mayankl: yeah nhi hosakta

Nupur: kyun hi ho sakta..meri taraf dekho…..kya tum mjh se pyar nhi keraty

Mayank: nupru ur getting blind

Nupur: nhi for the first time I am seeing beyond the sigh

He turn around n hold her from shoulder

Mayan" kya tumhara dil nhi chata k main kaho tum khubsorat ho…tum per yeah acha lagta hai ..yeah nhi….tum asay raho asay nhi

Nupur: nhi

He left her

Mayank: nupurs ..tum sab se khubsarat ho sab ko dkh ta hai ….mein desire nhi kerta

Nupur: per jab tum mjhy dekhty ho tu mjhy lagta hai k mein khubsorat hoon

He hold her tight n said in anger

Mayank: per mein nhi dkh sakta….i cant see…n thts reality

Nupur: nhi tum jasay mjhy dekh saktay hoo wasa koi nhi..

Mayank: u cant deni I m blind…tum yeah sab kuch abhi buhat asan lag raha hai..life long is handle kerna possible nhi

Nupur: I m nt denying anything…yeah realtiy tum mjhy buhat pehly bi bata chuky ho…aur us wat bhi mein nhi kaha tha….its nt gonna change my feelings

Mein janti hoon yeah asan nhi …..but imposiible bhi nhi…mjhy apni zindgai mein sahmil honay k ek chance tu doo…plz….

Mayank: jis din tum ko is baat k ehass hoga us din tum is rishtay per buhat pachtaoo gi….us din hum tum hamesha k lyan akelay hojay gay…kyun rishto ko uljah rahi hooo

Nupur: mein sirf rishto k muqamal ker rhi hoon

Mayank: loog media ..tum jinay nhi day ga…

Nupur: hum yaha rahy ga…tumharay ghar..sab se door…

Mayank:mjy kamzoor maat kero…

Nupur: mjh per ek bar wasy hi bharosa kero jasay tab mein ny tum per kiya tha ..pls…

She came fowrede n hugged him tight…..he close his fist controlling his emtoins…btu thn he gave it out….he soflty encircled his arms around her…to wch she smiled ina relief….soon he hugged are tighly diiging his fingers in inside her…nazling in her….feeling her fragnace in him….

Mayank: I love you …she whispered….dnt let me regret my confesion pls….i cant see u walking away from my life…pls….i really love u a lot…just ur precence means everything to me…pls don't leave me…

Nupur: trust me…I cant..i need u more than u

She is sleeping like an angel beside me…..how I know tht…I can scence her…closing my eyes I touched her face..tracing each n every curve of her face…her peacefully closed eyes….her forhead having a slight lines of shiver due to my touch…her lips curved in a smie with a blush

I know she is awekn ..just pretending to be sleep….her blush n shiver is increasing as my finger trace her jaw line…with a reflux she hugged me…hiding her face from …

Strange she know I cant see her…btu her act always make feel a can…n sum how its always true for her…


Siting on a sofa infront of him…she was buszying in gaze at him..when he was buzy in composing sumthing on his guitar..her gaze was filled with passion n ozzing out love….

He just normally put his guitar a side…n slided his hands around her waist to pull her close towards him….she was stunned at his act ..she'll be caught red handed she didn't though

Mayank: kya baat hai ….aj buhat pyar arha hai…

Nupur; kisi

Mayank: achaaaa..yeah itni dair se mjhy pyar bahri nazaroo se kaun dekh raha tha

Nupur: mein tu nhi

Mayank: dkeho…meri biwi kahti hai k mein us ko placing his hand on heart ….yaha se dkhta hoon….aur us k baray yeah baat sach hai bikul …so chori pakri gai

Nupur: nt fair….

Mayank: hmm… I know….lets make it fair…saying this he leaned down to claim her…

God knows how this is possible bit it is always….maybe our soul are connected so tht I can see u right through …may be I am blind but our love can see in the darkness….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
BY GOD what a beautiful update
awwwwwwwww the way u desribe mayurs feelings, mayanks hesitation and nups support everything just perfect

i adore their bonding of love
it was so touchy so touchy so touchy- GOSH i just loved this OS

thank u so much jaan for giving us such a nice OS
love u loads

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
first of alll thank u shoo mch for writing such a gr8 os for me...........😊
terrific yar......the way u describe the moments, feelings 4 eachother.....damm gud...

i know u r not feeling well and inspite of being ill u updated ths.. heartly thanks......⭐️

take care.
love ya😊
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love u
always at time
n y u reserved..am i updating sumthing
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Posted: 14 years ago
its wonderful, amazing and mind blowing OS....
BEAUTIFUL
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved for Thodi se bewafi

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i am angry with you for this one
how can you do this??
why???????

ok but it was awesome
you know what they both were not at faults
nupur was taking mayank's concern in other way
and mayank couldnt show his love the way nupur wanted
but nupur shouldnt have gone to adhiraj....thats the thing she did wrong

but its an awesome os
pls iska sequel likhna
aur MN ko milwa dena
plsssssssss

love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved for BLIND LOVE

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api i dont know what to say.....
its the best os u have ever read....
how can you write so well
i love you api and for this one......
dont know what to say.....
may be i am too young to say anything about this one
but this os define the sonf perfectly

Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Manga
Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Diya
Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola
Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya
Tu Hi Dhoop, Tu Hi Chau
Tu Hi Apna Paraya
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Rab Ne.. Bana Di Jodii.....

awesme os
just loved it....
its not blind but its true love and true love is always blind

love
tasfia



Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

VER VERY NICE UPDATE .

LOVELY.
VERY NICE👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is a really emotional os. i could relate to mayank's fellings. good job.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely...
I'll say true love :)

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