OS:Maan taking care of Geet Noe on page 1

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey every body I am a silent reader on this forum i have never ever written a OS or a FF but today I came across a post in which somebody said silent readers should post as well lol so I thought I should give it a go so am posting a very small os its of maan taking care of geet at night I don't know if its good enough if it is not plz close the topic I wont mind at all.Plz forgive me for any mistakes I make am just trying it out ok no am going to shut up and write the OS.

Geet was tossing and turning she could not sleep at all tonight she found it quite difficult anyways with the pregnancy but today she had done too much running around and was afraid to tell Mann that her back was hurting because she knew he would get cross at her for not resting and he was very tried himself.

Geet turned around and saw Mann fast asleep "ah he's asleep am going to get the back palm hopefully he wont wake up" Geet got out of bed and tiptoed to the wardrobe to look for the balm it was hard because she couldn't but the light on.

"at last found it" Geet said she then went and looked over at Maan to see if he was still asleep yep she was right her hard working husband and to be daddy of her child was asleep. She then tiptoed to the bathroom "right now to get this silly balm on my back" Geet unzipped her night kurti and then put some palm onto her hand and tried putting it on her back Geet kept on trying for a good few minutes but she just could not put it on her back by now her arms were aching as well as her back and legs. These hormones weren't helping either she felt like crying and she started sobbing. She then wiped her tears and took a deep breath "oi geet stop being silly it's only just a bit of pain you can take it" Geet thought to her self

By this time Maan had turned in his sleep and spread his arms out to give his lovely wife a cuddle as he had come to bed before her and fell asleep waiting for her he didn't even give her a good night kiss he thought "ill give her a kiss now" to find her not in bed he sat up in bed and looked around the room putting the bedside lamp on.

Maan then got out of bed really worried were Geet was he now felt a little cross with her he had told her if she needed anything to let him now he also knew that his lovely wife was very tired he saw her eyes when he came back from work today but did not say anything because he did not want to say anything in front of daddima because then daddima would also get cross at Geet for not resting.

He then saw the bathroom light switched on he knocked on the door but their was no reply Maan then went inside to see his beautiful wife crying leaning against the wall and trying to but something on her back he quickly ran to her worryingly was she in pain? What had happened? Why was she crying? Why does she never listen to me? Argg this woman I love her but she drives me mad!

Geet then opened her eyes to see Maan staring at her really worried ah she also so some anger in his eyes. She then stood up straight to face him not realising that her dress was unzipped she stepped away from him "Geet what happened why are you crying? And if you are in pain why have you not woken me up? Mann didn't realise that in all of this Geet had come away from the wall by now.

He then looked at her and saw her kurti unzipped he came to look at her from the front her slowly placed his hands on her waist at first Geet let out a sharp breath he knew that her body responded to every touch of his and he loved it. But he didn't care about making love to his wife tonight he wanted to now what she was so distressed and upset about. He but his hands on her back and pressed his balm in the middle of her back were her spine was her head full forward onto his shoulder all of a sudden his shirt felt wet and he panicked her looked at Geets face and she was sobbing "Geet what's happened plz tell me" "do you need a doctor" "come on lets go" Geet stopped all his movements and said "no no" Geet could see that Mann was panicking she hated seeing him like this and all because of her she took a deep breath and said "Maan its nothing" Maan looked at her and then in a very stern voice said "this is not nothing why would you be standing in the middle of the bathroom at 2:30pm if it was nothing and CRYING". Geet could tell that Maan was getting upset so she decides to tell him.

"Maan am in so much pain by backs hurting and i didn't want to wake you up because you were so tired today and i didn't want to tell you i haven't listened to you and i haven't rested today" Geet said this all while she was sobbing like a little girl and she was talking so fast.

Maan took another deep breath and said to him self "I LOVE THIS WOMAN SO MUCH!" HE LIFTED HER CHIN AND WIPED HER TEARS he then said ok my lovely am going to take you to bed and we will get this back better soon"

Maan then picked Geet up to her surprise .she clung onto his neck and rested her head onto his shoulder she felt better already she just needed a cuddle from her Maan. He then gently put her sown onto the bed and gave her a soft kiss on her lips and then on her forehead he gently turned her round so she was on her side he went and got the balm from the bathroom and then stared rubbing it on Geets back Geet smiled and said " am so sorry Maan" "what are you sorry about Geet" "its not your fault your backs hurting" Geet said "so your not cross at me then" "I am cross that you haven't rested, you didn't wake me up when you needed me but no am not cross about rubbing your back or spending so time with my gorgeous wife" Maan said with a big grin "I like rubbing your back" Geet blushed. Maan and Geet chatted a way for a while Geets back was better soon and she asked Maan to stop he then turned her around and gave her a cuddle he said "Geet I am your husband whenever you need me plz just ask me and I will be their" this stared Geets tears again "am sorry I promise I will tell you if I ever need you no matter what time or day" this made Maan feel better he wiped her tears and zipped up her kurti he gave her some more kisses and then they cuddled up[ and went to sleep.

The end (i know the ending wasnt very good sorry )
Authors note: This OS Maan and Geet have already made love but i did not add much X-rated scenes because to be honest am not very good at them lol sorry if this is not good enough plz let me know all comments are welcome plz be truthful and I hope I haven't bored any one plz over look any spelling mistakes I haven't been able to correct them all as i am very tired after a very long day at work!
I cant reply to everyone i just want to say a big thank ypu for likeing my OS it means a lot thank you so much! Your lovely comments worked i feel like writing another one lol 😉

Lots of love safy plz plz leave a comment

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyy hun
This is really good x
I loved it...it was really really cute x
Loved how you wrote it and is was like awwww to myself lol
Pls continue xx
Naina x

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Posted: 14 years ago
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34 views somebody plz say something i ahve never ever written a OS before and am really nrevouse plz plz tell me if it was really bad or ok thankxx
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Awww...that was really very cute! Lovely!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much for commenting and taking time out ot read it thanks means a lot
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

Awww...that was really very cute! Lovely!

Thank you so much ype i wanted it to be cute i did try really hard lol thankxx again 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww that was soo cuteee! :)

Honestly, you shouldn't be so nervous..that was a great attempt at writing an OS. I like the way you stuck to the same character of Maan and Geet on the show because I could imagine each scene while reading your OS.

Do write more whenever you get the chance! :)
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U r a very good writer, keep writting more scenes 😊
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Awhh awesome OS
love it..
very cute
Keep writing

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hi for a first attempt this is really cute. i hope that you will continue to write :) :)
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