FF- PYAAR KE LIE (8june) part 23, pg 99 - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm happy for Geet let her move on with her life good girl let Maan realize his own if he really loves Geet pls let her be strong woman awesome update soon thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

loved it

geet is leaving

maan doesn't know

hope he stops her

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-15

Next morning:
Maan woke up n is ready to leave for the college. he comes down but saw noone on the dinning table. he asks servants where everyone is???

Servant: beta,, wo handa mansion gye hai...

maan thinks why so early they go to handa mansion???

suddenly his phone rings up,, n its sam on other side...

SAM: hey sweety... where r u??? can u please pick me up for the college???

MAAN: sure sam... i'll come at ur place in 20 min...

SAM: no maan,, plz come in 10 min... i have to go somewhere b4 college... plz plz...

MAAN(he doesn't want to go because he first wants to go HM ,,he don knw why he feels something bad is gonna happen,, but what???but) ummmm,,, k sam, i'll come....

he cuts the call n went to his car,,, he looked at HM n thinks:
MAAN: i don know why,, muje aisa kyu lag rha hai ki me kuch khone wala hun,, why my heart is not allowing me to go,,, what is bothering me??? y m feeling low??? aisa kyu lag rha hai ki mera dil aur dimag mere sath nahi hai??? oh god,,, what's wrong with me...
(isse pehle ki wo kuch aur guess kar pata,, that idiot SAM called him again😡)

MAAN(hits his forehead): yes sam,, m cuming...
n leaves half-heartedly...

AT HM:

everything is packed.. they are all set to leave.. prerna n Dadi are trying their best not to show their tears to geet n rano,, same with RANO n Geet... geet is feeling really very bad...she never imagined one day she has to leave this house ,, leave prerna, dadi, Aunu n espicially MAAN... but she has no choice,, she has to...
Meera n picky both are there with her...
they reached at station...
geet wanted to see maan last time.. but he is not here...
geet thinks: maan y u r not here??? kya tum mujse last time milna bhi nahi chahte??? tum kyu nahi aye??? least she knw ki maan ko to pta bhi nahi hai....

Rano: maa,,, maan khan hai???

Prerna, Aunu n dadi are hell shocked,,, because they forget to tell maan about their departure...
Rano n Geet lokked at them questionly...

Rano: kya hua prerna???
Prerna: Rano,, shayad hum maan ko batana bhul gye hai,, tumhare jane ka...

Dadi: han,, use to pta hi nai hai ki tum ja rahe ho....

Geet becomes upset... GEET(self-thought) :babaji,, maan ko to pta bhi nahi hai ki me ja rahi hu,,, shayad acha hi hai... me uske samne kese ja sakti thi.. par fir bhi me kyu use akhiri baar dekhna chahti hu?? nahi,, i need to b strong...

the train vl leave after 10 min..
Aunu called maan...

Maan n saM reached college...
In college:
YASH n ADI: hi maan,, hi sam...

SAM: hi..
MAAN: hi

YASH: maan tu yahan kya kar rha h???

MAAN: what do u mean???

ADI: maan , tuje to station par hona chaiye tha na???

MAAN: station??? kyu??? me to kahin nahi ja rha???

YASH: abe hum teri nahi geet n rano aunty ki baat kar rahe hai???

MAAN: who is hell confused: matlb??? tum kya bol rahe ho muje kuch samjh nahi aa rha???

YASH n ADI: what??? tuje nahi pta???

MAAN(now got very tensed ): kya nahi pta??? tell me fast...

YASH: geet n rano aunty mumbai ja rahe hai,, hamesha k liye....

MAAN is shocked after listening this... Yash's last words are echoing in his mind,,, he felt like his soul leaves his body...
his phone is ringing,, but maan doesn't hear it...
yash: maan, Aunu uncle ka phone hai,,but maan is still lost...

YASH picks the call: yes uncle,,

AUNU: yash,, where is maan???

YASH: uncle he is here only...

AUNU: plz give him the phone... actly train ka time ho rhaa hai, wo itni jaldi yahn aa to nahi sakta,, to atleast phone par hi baat kar le...

YASH: wait a min uncle...
Yash turns towards maan,, but maan is nowhere to be seen...

YASH: adi,, ye maan khan gya????

ADI: wo shayad station gya hai,,, he was driving very fast...

YASH: uncle,, wo shayad station aa rha hai,

AUNU: k beta...

Aunu tells everyone that maan is coming,, n they all know he can't reach on time,,, because it took atleast 30 min from college to station...

On the other side,, maan is driving really very fast(crazily),,, he just wanted to stop geet... how could she leave her best friend for life... he just can't imagine life without her...
he breaks all traffic rules,, crossed all signals...

AT station:
After knowing that maan is cuming to station,, she somewhere felt happy that atleast maan is caring for her as a friend... but she knows very well, he can;t reach on time...
Train is ready to leave...
Rano n geet hugged everyone...
Dadi, prerna, picky n meera al are having tears in their eyes...
geet wiped everyone's tears.. n all wiped her tears...

Aunu put the luggage in train(hope u knw he is going with them to settle them )....

they barged into train... n train started....

they bid last goodbye with teary eyes to each other....
(a very touching scene,)

maan reached to station,, he ran towards train,,, n stops...

train already left.................................................

first time in his life,,, he felt he lost everything,.... his breath,, his life,, .....................................

dadi, prerna saw him standing like statue...
DADI: maan beta,, aap yahn...

MAAN: dadi,, geet khan h???

DADI: beta,,wo to chali gyi,,, hame maaf kar dijiye,, hum sab aapko batana hi bhul gye...

MAAN: kyu dadi,,???? y u did this to me??? aapne bhi muje nahi btaya.... aur geet,,, geet ne bhi muje batana jaruri nahi samjha??(he felt miserable,, something breaks in him) tears rolled down on his cheeks...
MAAN: usne muje kyu nai btaya maa,,, she is my best frnd...

Prerna understands maan,, n hugged him,, n trying to console him...

Prerna: m sorry beta... she pats his back...

they left station.... MAAN is still not believing that geet left him.....



PRECAP: leap....................

n bubbly geet is back.... but what about maan????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part.........
Looking forward for the story take-over.
Con soon........
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan.. felt bad for him.. hmm leap sounds gud.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it................thank u u kept ur words and did diff than wat i thought..................

cant wait for the leap..................

wondering if maan wud hv got engaged or married to sam...............

r u serious that bubbly geet is back i mean did she overcome her feelings for maan did she move on....................

pl can u update a long one next..................this suspense is killing me
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ............ plz cont soon cant wait for leap 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear,,, poor maan,, and really bubbly geet is back???????????

cant wait for the next part....

con soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so maan didnt see geet he deserves it and the precap is awesomeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhh no....can't believe that geet left....but i am really excited abt the leap...

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