MY FIRST FAN FIC...........

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hi everyone,this is my 200th post in this forum,nd my 1st fanfic,hope u will like nd gives me a feed back so that i can create the other. I hope you will enjoy this.

pratigya was beautiful girl of 23. She was Post Graduate and had finished her studies just a few months ago. She was totally free and she got bored sitting idle in home. She consulted her mother nainaji😆 and her mother advised her to join some artistic class. She got agreed and very next day she went to an art school and joined an art class. There she was enjoying very much. There were many students and teachers of all ages. She was taking too much interest in her work. Her teachers were very happy with her. She became an apple of all the teacher's eye. One day there came a boy and a girl and got admitted over there. The girl was very much pretty and boy was also very handsome. pratigya was very much impressed by them.
She tried to make friendship with them but both of them were not interested. After all she left trying and got indulge in her work again. After some days she noticed that that boy was taking interest in her work. His name was krishna. He wanted to become her friend. But pratigya was noticing that her friend whose name was dolly was not happy with it. She always felt uneasy when krishna came close to pratigya.
Slowly slowly they came closer to each other😛😛 and they began to love each other. dolly was also aware of this. But pratigya was now feeling that dolly was a bit worried. She always looked sad and unhappy. One day dolly came to pratigya and said, 'pratigya! I wanna talk to you." pratigya was surprised because it was first time when dolly was talking to her.She told pratigya that she loved krishna very much and he knew it. 😭😭😭😭
give me ur feedback nd the next chapter of this story will be based on ur comments
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GunDaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u all don't like my first ever fanfic,so sad i hv worked hard for an entire day😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi Amit...

Good start...

Whatever may be the story...

pls bring in a lot of KriYa scenes...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life

hi Amit...

Good start...

Whatever may be the story...

pls bring in a lot of KriYa scenes...

thanx,but if i get gud responses then i will make this story very interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hv nt got the desired feedback so story closed.........😭😳

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