Life Without You #2#

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Hi Friends..
Well Neefa gave this FF back to me.. LOL..😃 so Im here now to write this! I actually missed this FF😆 because this is one of the first ffs I wrote! and I love it...😳 And thank you to everyone who encouraged me to write this once again.. 😳😊 Because I really thought people would become angry because of this writer changing every 5 updates!😛😛 But this Time I promise.. Not giving my FFs Anymore! LoL!😆😆😉
Thanks A Ton to everyone who loves this FF and convinced me to write this again!
Here Is The Link To the First Thread:
And here are the rest of the updates I have done till now!
Im posting all of it here.. So that I can start again PROPERLY😳😳
Here Goes All The Parts I have Already Written
Love,
Manjari
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-- Index --

1. Part 28 -- Pg 1
2. Part 29 -- Pg 1
3. Part 30 -- Pg 1
4. Part 31 -- Pg 1
5. Part 32 -- Pg 1
6. Part 33 -- Pg 1
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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They turned around!

N amd M: SAMRAAAT!!!!

N: tumhari aur gunjan ki toh date thi na... itni jaldi khatam ho gayi??

S: hamari chhodo tumhari date kaisi thi?

M: hello! Hum date par nahi gaye the! Bas esehi...

S: Haan haan! tumlog toh time pass kar rahe the!

N: tumlogo ki date kaisi thi?

S: (sad recalling his date! Gunjan must have been soo angry!! He wished he could have planned it in a better way!)

N: samrat...

S: haan? woh.. theek thi..

M: dude whats wrong? N gunjan kaha hai?

S: so rahi hai!

N: what? Itni jaldi!

S: woh actually.... (not willing to say it..) she got drunk!!

M and N: WHATT????

S: guys! Relaxx..! kal tak theek ho jayegi!

N: tum uska itna sa bhi khayal nahi rakh paye samrat!!

M: uff ho nupur! Samrat ki kya galati thi..

S: nahi yaar! Mujhe hi uska better dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha..

N: very bad samrat! Anyway.,. main uska dhyan rakhlungi! Bye!!

S: ok.. goodnight.. (on reaching the main door) well.. you guys enjoy!!

And he ran out!

N: yeh samrat bhi na..

M: (holding nupur's waist) toh galat kya kaha usne..lets enjoy!

N: Mayankk..!! tum bhi na!

Mayank's phone rings...

M: hello ma!

MM: beta tu kaha hai?

M: ma woh main bas aa raha hoon! Bahar gaya tha nupur ke saath.

MM: ok beta! Please jaldi aa jana!

M: ji ma! Abhi nikal hi raha hoon!

MM: ok beta.. bye

M: bye..

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N:Enjoy karne ka moog khatam ho gaya?!

M: sorry nupur woh mom ka phone aa gaya! Next time chhodoonga nahi!

N: dekhte hainn..!

M: bye..

N: bye.. goodnight!

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THE NEXT MORNING...

Riddhima woke up to find Armaan in her room..!

R: ARMAAAAAN!!!!!

A: shh..!!

R: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? Paagal ho kya?

A: tumhe dekh raha tha!

R: tum ander kaise aye?

A: khirkee se riddhima!

R: tum paagal ho armaan! Agar bhai ne tumhe yaha'

S: riddhim'

And he came in..

A: crap! (he sed under his breath)

S: TUMM!!!!

R: bhai woh'

A: samrat.. dude..

S: What? Yaha itni subah kya kar rahe ho?

A: woh main.. main.. main..

R: (under her breath) kya hua? Ab aawaaz nahi nikal rahi?

S: what main main? Bakri ho kya?

A: nahii.. main toh bas riddhima ko jagane aaya tha!

R chuckled.

S: mujhe phone kar diya hota main jaga deta! Tumhe takleef uthane ki kya zarurat thi!!(clenching his fist)

A: dude relaxx..! waise teri date kaisi thi..

R: haan.. bhai date?

S: date... (again his mind was diverted to yesterday.. would gunjan be angry with him in the morning! How would he face her! After all what happened last night... how would he go in front of her! She was drunk but what was he doing..)

Suddenly he heard riddhima laugh! He came back to his senses seeing armaan missing..

R: bhai armaan toh gaya!

S: Woh college main bachkar kaha jayega!!

And he went out to get ready..

At Bhushan's.

N: Good Morning Madam!(drawing the curtains)

G: hmm.. dii.. please sone do na..

N: chup chaap uth ja gunjan! Mujhe kal raat ke baare main jaanna hain..

G: kal raat... kal raat kya tha?

N: Tumhari aur samrat ki date!

G's eyes opened.. (thinks) kal raat kya hua tha? Main yaha kaise aayi? Mujhe toh samrat par kitna gussa aaya tha and.. OH ...MY... GOD!

He jumped off her bed... Her head was heavy and aching..

"Ouchh.." She said.. holding her head...

"Disprin ka paani saamne pada hai.. pee lo!" nupur said in a harsh voice.. Dad tumhara wait kar rahe hain..

"DI! What? You told dad everything!!! How could you! You know he will get angry! Nd disprin is not agood idea!" She practically screamed her lungs out! How could nupur tell her dad!

"Gunjan! Just calm down! Aur maine dad ko isliye bataya kyunki kal raat jab woh tujhe dekhne aaye toh tumhare moo se alchohol ki smeel aa rahi thi..!! Nd disprin ki jab baat aati hain.. woh toh tujhe peeni hi padegi! Get that!!"

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Precap: A new workshop-- Camping!

Hey.

Please do give your comments!

Love,

Manjari!



Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Nupur was on the breakfast table when gunjan comes out! She was very nervous as to what her dad would say?! He would be so angry!

N: dad.. gunjan!

Dad: goodmorning.. ab sar kaisa hai?

G: m..ain..woh. thee—k hoo..n.. (she began stammering)

Dad: baitho yaha..

She came and sat down next to her dad.. ready to get a shouting!

Dad: soo..? kal raat mazaa aya?

G: (thinks) What? Dad ko mujhpar gussa hona chahiye! Woh mujhe kal raat ke baare main kyun pooch rahe hai? Di ne unhe bataya nahi kya? Di shayad mazak kar rahi hogi!

D: and i hope tune woh disprin ki paani pee hai?

G: aapko pata hai?

Dad: kyun tu nahi chahti thi ki mujhe pata chale?

N: maine tujhe bataya toh tha ki dad sab jaante hai!!

G: aap gussa nahi ho?

Dad: hahah! Toh tum isliye dar rahi thi.. pagal.. par waise samrat ne tumhe peene diya?? Main toh usse gussa hoon!

G: dad woh main gussa isliye thi kyunki ......

She tells them the whole last night incident. (excluding the part where she acted like a kid and kissed samrat almost 100 times!)

D: oh! Par gunjan.. tumne toh kaha tha na ki uske dad..

G: haan.. hes no more.. wohi sab business sambhalta hai!

Dad: tab gunjan tumhe uska saath dena chahiye.. gussa hone se kya milega tujhe! Uspe kitni responsiblities hai! He has to do his work properly and obviously uske liye work comes first!

G: I know dad.. i acted very foolishly! I will apologize today..

N: you better! Tune usse kitna dukh pahuchaya hoga tujhe pata hai??

G: di will you just stop!Kab se mujhe tang kar rahi ho! Kaha na im sorry!

N: mujhe nahi samrat ko!

G: eough yaar di.. dont make me feel more guilty!

N: Gunj—

Dad: stop it you two! Kya bacho ki tarah lar rahe ho! Nd nupur dont do this! Get it?

N: yes dad..

G shows her tongue to nupur!

N:Argghh..MAIN college ja rahi hoon!

And goes off...

G giggles..

Dad: tum bhi na! Usse chidane main bohot mazaa ataa hai!

G smiled apologetically!

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Riddhima Entered College Thinking Abt Armaan and The Indcident That Occurred Earlier That Morning.

R: (Thinking) Par Armaan waha aaya kyun tha? Kya usse kuchh kehna tha? Kya kaam tha usse? Mujhe usse milna chahiye...

She herself knew that she was finding excuses to see him! She wanted to be near him.. always.. He was Just soo caring and nice!

S: Riddhima.. tum class chalo main aata hoon...

R: Bhaiya mujhe woh armaa—

S: riddhima armaan se toh mujhe baat karni hai...

R: Bhaiya Please usse mat daatiyega.. woh toh bas.. toh bas.. aise hi aa gaya tha.. mujhe surprise dene!

S: abhi se hi uski taraf daari! Not a good sign riddhima.. fine.. kuchh nahi kahoonga!

R: thanks bhai.. you're the best!

S: woh toh main hoon..

(samrat sees gunjan in the opposite side of the corridor.. he rushes towards her.. where as gunjan seeing samrat runs away from there)

G: (thinking) Main kya karoo? Kaise jaoo uske saamne? Main usse kaise face karoo? Woh toh mere baare main najane kya kya soch raha hoga! Maine usse kal raat kitni embarrassing baate ki.. Gosh gunjan.. Tu toh gayi!

She was rushing away.. she didnt want him to see her! She just went straight and dashed into someone..

"Ouchh..." said mayank..

M: kaha dhyan hai tumhara gunjan!

G: Oh Im SO sorry Mayank! Main bas thodi jaldi main thi..

She continuously keeps looking back if samrat was there or not!She just had no time to talk!

M: kisse bhaag rahi ho?

G: woh.. woh.. kissi se nahi! I have to go mayank!

M; achha nupur kaha hai?

G: pata nahi! Class gayi hongi!

Bye bye...

She sees samrat coming and rushes into the girl's Loo..!

M: (thinks) What is WRONG wid her? Why is she acting soo soo weird! Oh..(seeing samrat come) shes hiding from samrat! Kal raat ke baad woh apna mooh usse kaise dikhayegi! Hayye.. bechara samrat!

Samrat rushed up to mayank

S: gunjan ko dekha kya?

M: umm.. haan.. kitni baar!

S: mayank! Not funny! Just say ki woh kaha hai?

M: woh abhi girls loo main gayi!

S: oh? Par kyun? Usne mujhe dekha nahi? Aur meri aawaz bhi nahi sunni!

M: shayad woh tumse baat hi nahi karna chahti!

S: nahi dude.. gunjan aisi nahi hai!Nupur jaise bekaar ka upset nahi hoti!

M: ohk.. as you think of it! Anyway! Nupur bohot achhi hain! Get it! Bye!

And mayank walks off!

S: (thinks) gunjan mujhse sach main baat nahi karna chahti! Isliye mujhe ignore kar rahi hain! Makes complete sense! Fine then! Galati sabse hoti hai! Mujhse bhi hui! Main usse sorry bolna chahta tha par.. nevermind.. ab main bhi usse ignore karunga! Dekhta hoon! Kaise bhav nahi deti! Hah! Kehte hain na.. jab larki ke peeche jao toh woh nahi nahi milti par jab usse door raho toh khud hi aa jaati hai!

A: Dude.. Whats wrong?

S: what? Kiss baare main?

A: well well.. gunjan ne mujhe bataya tumhare date ke baare main!What is WRONG with youu??

S: gosh armaan! Mujhe tumse iske baare main baat nahi karni! Just GO!

A: ohk.. chill yaar! Waise bhi woh toh tujhe ignore hi karegi aaj! Hahaaa

And he walked off!

Nupur was sitting in the canteen having coffee... She was just bored when mayank came and sat next to her.

M: hi!

N: hi.. finally tum aa gaye!

M: mera wait kar rahi thi?

N: MAIN BORE HO RAHI THI!

M: kyun? Aajkal koi tumhari baat nahi maanta!

N; what?

M: I mean.. ki saare boys jo tumhare aage peechhe ghoomte the! Jo tumhare liye sab kuchh karte the!

N: Excuse Me.. agar main chahoo na toh abhi 10 larko ko yaha mere jooto par la sakti hoon!

M; ohh.. achha?

N: Haaan! Abh—

Announcement.

'All Students 1st and 2nd year Please come to the basketball court our trustee would like to talk to you!'

N: dad? College main? Unhone toh nahi bataya!

M: par milna kyun chahte hai??

N: god knows! Lets go check!

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Everyone gathers in the basketball court.. Armaan standing next to riddhima.. and staring at her.. she playfully turns his face to the other side.. but it comes back to her.. she smiles..rather blushes..

Samrat was trying to stand away from gunjan. She started wondering why he wasnt talking to her..

Mayank and nupur came and stood in front and then at the end came the pricipal and the trustee(T)

T: Hello Boys And Girls! I have come to college after sometime.. I have got some exciting news for you people.. I have organised a Camping Trek or you can say trip for you people..

There was a murmur and everyone wondered what he was talking about..

T: well ill explain better.. since we havent gone on any trip for sometime and your exams are yet to come.. We thought of arranging a camping trek.. This is not compulsory! In this you will have to stay in tents for 5 days and trek and roam around the Forest.. It will be a life time experience.. There will be professionals for your help! They will provide you will precautions and maps..

And He goes on to further explain the adventuruous trip and activities like rock climbing.. cliff diving.. etc..

After he was over.. He informed everyone that they had to pay a certain some of money and that they would be divided into groups.. He also told them to give in their names by the very next day.. so that after diwali they could leave!

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Precap:Armaan, Gunjan and Mayank Were excited.. and the other three... Umm.. not too keen on going for such adventures! Well.. well.. lets see if they will be able to convince them for coming along...

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After The Announcement Gunjan looked towards Samrat But he wasnt there.. She went looking for him!Armaan looked at riddhima excited..

R: Uff.. yeh sab main kaun interested hoga?

Armaan's excitement suddenly vanished! Gr8!

Armaan thinking: Dude.. Isse mana.. warna sara maza kharab ho jayega! Bacha ban.. lad isse.. kuchh bhi kar isse mana..!

R: kya soch rahe ho armaan?

A: tum kyun nahi aana chahti riddhima? Itna interesting hain!

R: 1stly I think bohot darawana hoga.. 2ndly tumhe lagta hai bhai jaane denge!!

G: kyun nahi? Usse main mana loongi!

R: huh.. woh mujhe akele nahi jaane denge!

G: par woh bhi toh jayega!

R: bhai kabhi nahi jayega!!!!

A: usse bbhi darr lagta hai??

G: shutt upp armaan!

R: woh office chhorkar yeh sab bekaar ke kaam nahi karega!NEVER!

G: Oh god riddhima.. woh ayega!

R: fine dekhte hai! Agar woh aaya toh main bhi chaloongi!!

A: pakka?? Aur darr kaisa jab main hoon waha!

R smiled at him.. (enter MaYur)

N: how sweet! Par tumlogo ko nahi lagta hi tumlog over excited ho rahe ho! Main aur mayank bhi nahi ja rahe!

M: WHAT? Maine aisa kab kaha?

N: maine kaha na.. bas! Final ho gaya!

M: nahi mujhe jana hai! Nd nupur tum bhi chalo! Mazza ayega! Sachi!

N: haan! mazza? Ryt! Tumhe pata hai 5 dino tak no shampoo! Plus waha par proper toilets nahi honge.. agar mera manicure kharab ho gaya toh? Waha parlour milega kahi? Tumlog hi bolo? N upar se mere kapre gande ho jayenge! And aur to aur—

A: Bas!!! Bas madam! Bohot ho gaya!

N: Armaan! Shoo! Let me finish—

M: nahi nupur.. zarurat nahi hain.. hum samajh gaye! Poori tarah!

R: Nupur hum teeno yahi rehte hain inhe jaane do!

N: right... good idea!

M: guys aise mazaa nahi ayega!!!! Kyun gunjan?

G: samrat kaha gaya?

N: uff ho! Yaha tumhe samrat ki padi hai! Hum itne important topic par discuss kar rahe hain!

G: uff di main baad main milti hoon! Mujhe usse dhoondna hai!

(she leaves)

N: main toh nahi ja rahi bas!

M: nupur please mere liye... (puppy face)

N: tum hamesha aise nahi kar sakte mayank! Tum mature ho khud socho!

M: sochkar bol raha hun nupur mazaa ayega!sachi!tumne hi toh mujhe mazaa karna sikhaya hai warna main toh books main khoya rehta tha na! Toh ab tum hi...

N: par mayank yeh kaisa mazaa.. mujhe nahi jana...

And she stomps off...

M: arrey nupur suno toh!!

Follows her..

R: dekha armaan yeh stupid si camp ke wajah se sab argue kar rahe hain.. whats the use?

A: hmm.. well.. lets see.. mujhe toh bohot man hai jaane ka!!

R: bohot mann hai? Hamare second date par jaane se bhi zyada mann? (sweetly)

A: umm.. tough question.. well waha par roz date manayenge!

R: Tum nahi manoge na?

A: this is gonna be a superb experience riddhima!!

R: haan haan.. ok.. lets see.

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Gunjan goes to find samrat.. she sees him in class... class was on she cudnt even go in.. She stood outside and waited.. thinking about last night..

G thinking: mujhe lagta hai mujhe maafi mangni chahiye! Mujhe usse samajhna chahiye tha! Dad was write uski itni saari responsiblities hai aise main woh kaam ke baare main pehle sochega na!usne life main kitna dekha hai.. kitna saha hain.. i have to support him!

Suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder..

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Nupur was angry she was walking fast...

M: nupur please meri baat maano!

N: tum bhi toh meri baat maan sakti ho na! Ek baar!

Nupur stopped!

N: kya matlab hai tumhara? Ki main tumhari baat nahi maanti! Main roz class attend karti hoon tumhare liye! Jab se hum saath hai sab waisa ho raha hai jaisa tum chahte ho!

M: nupur woh baat nahi hai!

N: mayank aur kya baat hai ha? Tumhari wajah se maine salwar pehna. Class gayi... woh bhi roz.. uske baad break main canteen jaati thi! IMAGINE! Jo nupur bhushan har Saturday clubs or discos main milti hai aajkal woh restraunts main baithkar khaati hai! Jo nupur bhushan ne aajtak kabhi koi party miss nahi ki woh aajkal barely koi bhi party main jaati hai!!

M: ok nupur.. fine.. jaisa tum kaho.. (catching her hand)Mere liye tumse important aur kuchh nahi hai.. yeh stupid camp bhi nahi.. ok? So cheer up! Hum nahi jayenge!

N: ok.. waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta koi bhi jayega! Because samrat toh jaane se raha!

M: Aur agar sab gaye toh?

N: par mayank—

M: agar.. sabne haan ki toh?

N: Fine.. Toh main chalne ke liye ready ho jaungi!LOL

M: ok cool! Fair deal.. ab class chale?

N: dekha? Class... kabhi kaha hai ki canteen chale?

M: ok.. aaj kehta hoon.. canteen chale?

N: Class bunk karke?

M: not exactly hamari class shuru hone main abhi 20 mins hai!

N: hahah.. fine.. chalo!

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S: well.. agar avoid karne ka time khatam ho gaya ho toh cafe chale?

G: samrat tum mujhe avoid kar rahe the!!

S: haan kyunki tumne subah mujhe avoid kiya toh mujhe laga tum baat nahi karna chahti thi!

G: hmm.. well Im sorry.. aaj ke liye and kal raat ke liye bhi... (looking down)

S: kal raat? (recalling) im sorry gunjan.. kal raat ke liye mujhe tumhe sorry kehna chahiye..

G: Nahi samrat mujhe tumhare POV ko bhi samajhna chahiye hamesha waise nahi hoga jaisa main chahoongi!

S: Oh aur yeh gyaan tumhe nupur ne diya?

G: Nahi DAD ne!

S: WHATT??? TUMNE UNHE BATA DIA?

G: tum chilla kyun rahe ho? Dheere baat karo na!

S: sorry.. bolo?

G: nahi.. di ne bataya hum dono ke baare main aur kal ke alchohol ke baare main!

S: crap tumhare dad mujhse naphrat karte honge na!

G: nope.. unhone mujhe samjhaya ki tum sahi the!

S: WHAT!!!!! SACH????

G: samrat tum phir chilla rahe ho!!!

S:oops sorry..ab cafe chalkar baat kare?

G: hmm..

(While Walking)

S: waise kal raat tum full romantic mood main thi!

G:(flushed) oh.. woh.. woh...

S: "kyun you wanna sleep with me?" (immitating gunjan) hahahah!!!

G: samrat please.. (embarassed)

S: aww... (pulling her cheeks)

G: waise yeh camp par chaloge.. mere saath?

S: Umm.. gunjan.. yeh.. thoda mushkil hain..

G: please samrat dekho ridz ko bhi jaane ka mann hai par woh tumhare bina nahi jayegi!aur mujhe bhi jana hai! Nd—

S: and?

G: main bhi tumhare bina bore ho jaungi!!!

S: tum aur armaan hoga na!

G: par samrat tum aur armaan ek ho kya?

S: par gunjan mujhe kaam hain!

G: har baar kaam kaam kaam.. uske siva aur bhi hai life main!

S: sab se important kaam hai gunjan!

G: mujhse bhi important?

S: haan!(immediately)

G; what?

S: mera woh matlab nahi tha...

G: wao samrat.. well.. theek hai.. jao jitna kaam karna hai karo.. main tumhara time nahi waste karungi..

They had reached the canteen. Gunjan went and sat next to nupur..

S: Gunjan.. tum samajhti kyun nahi ho? Main nahi ja sakta..

G: Haan samrat! I get it! TUM NAHI JANA CHAHTE... Ab Please iss baat par mat lado!

S: main lad raha hoon! Tumne dekha hai apne aapko..?? Poore din samrat ye samrat woh.. kabhi meri POV se dekha hai.. mere liye kitna mushkil hoga office chhodkar jaaana!!

G stood Up.. Angrily..

G: FINE...!! KARO.. JO KARNA HAI JAISE KARNA HAI KARO! MERI TOH KOI VALUE HAI HI NAHI!! SIRF APNA KAAM IMPORTANT HAI.. SO FINE!

And she stomped off...

Riddhima and Armaan had heard the last part of their conversation and riddhima was proved right...

R: dekha kaha tha na ki sab ladenge!

A: oh god! I dont know isme ladne waali kaunsi baat hai..

R: main jakar gunjan se baat karti hoon!

A: hmm.. main samrat se baat karta hoon!

Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Riddhima Goes To Gunjan...

Gunjan was in her locker room very angry! She banged her locker shut and was about to leave when riddhima enters..

G: Riddhima.. mujhe uske baare main baat nahi karna!

R: kiske baare main?

G: samrat ke baare main!

R: gunjan.. mujhe pata hain tum bhai se naaraz ho aur tum sahi bhi ho! Bhai ko kaam ke elawa aur kuchh nahi soojhta!

G looked down..

R: Par Gunjan.. uske paas mere liye bhi time nahi hain.. kaam ke baad jitna time hota hain woh tumhare saath spend karta hain.. toh isse kya main bhai se kam pyaar karungi?

G looked at her.. thinking about what she just said..

R: bolo? Isse kya mera pyaar kam hojayega! Mujhe pata hai woh itna kaam mere liye kar raha hain.. Taaki mujhe kabhi life main pbm na ho!

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Armaan goes to Samrat..

A; dude..

S: Armaan ab gunjan ki side mat lena!

A: nahi.. nahi loonga! Tum dono sahi ho yaar! Tum apni jagah aur woh apni jagah!

S: par armaan!(standing up) kaise? Main itni koshish kar raha hoon ki main waise banu jaisa gunjan chahti hain! Uske saath romantic ban pauu!! Tum jaante ho na! Mujhe romance karna nahi aata! Phir bhi main uske baare main sochta hoon! I care for her! Par usse lagta hai ki i dont care!!!!

A: Exactly toh ab tumhe usse yehi dikhana hai ki tum uski phikr karte ho! Sirf usse avoid karoge toh usse lagega shes not important!

S: har baar main hi kyun usse jatau mera pyaar! Usse bhi meri halat samajhni chahiye!

A: dude woh tum usse samjhao na! Ki tumhare liye kaam important kyun hain! Agar tum dono gussa ho jauoge to tumhare relationship ka kya hoga! Aur gunjan ko toh tum jaante ho! Itna attitude bhara hain usme!

S: woh itni bhi buri nahi hain! Bas thodi ziddi hain..!nd ur rite! Mujhe usse baat karni chahiye!

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G: Riddhima... pata nahi.. shayad tum theek keh rahi ho! Samrat ke liye kaam toh important hoga hi na..

R: par tum jaanti ho aajkal woh poore din tumhare baare main sochta hain! Sach!

G: Riddhima.. thank you! Tum bohot sweet ho! Mujhe samrat ko samajhna chahiye warna woh loser mujhe phirse avoid karega!!!

R: Bhai ne kabhi haar maanna seekha hi nahi! So hes not a loser!

G: haan haan apni bhaiya ki behna! Chal ab.. Samrat agar naaraz ho gaya na toh meri toh shamat aajayegi!!

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A: toh chalo usse manao!

S: hmm.. par kaise..

A: trek par chalkar! Usse bohot mann hai!

(Thinking)aur agar tum nahi jaoge toh riddhima kaise jayegi.. please yaar maaan jaoo!!

S: Nahi armaan! Woh possible nahi hai!

A: wah! Abhi toh itna keh rahe the!

S: dude.. samjha kar!

A: par pata hai! Galati tumhari bhi hain..!!

S: I know par main kya karoonn!! Poore din college ya office.. time kaha rahega!

A: kabhi kabhi office se hi phone kar liya karo! Just to say that you miss her! Ya phir use poochh lo hi how are you! Bas samrat! Thats all it takes to show her that u care!

S: hmm.. well—

G: Samrat...

A: lo aa gayi gunjan!

Riddhima came behind her!

A went to riddhima and whispered..

"Ab shayad hum trek par ja paye"

Riddhima whispered backk..

"abhi sirf inka jhagra khatam hua hai bhai kabhi nahi maanega!"

"tum kabhi positive nahi bol sakti na!!"

Riddhima smiled..

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Nupur and mayank were in class.. mayank was thinking of how to manaofy everyone to go! Warna nupur bhi nahi jaati! And nupur as confident as ever ki sab jaane ke liye kabhi haan nahi bolenge! Especially samrat! She knew samrat damn well..

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Samrat looked at gunjan and she looked at him.. Both felt sorry for their behavior!

S: gunjan.. im sorry.. maine tumse bohot buri tarah baat ki..

G: maine bhi..

S: nahi gunjan isme tumhari galati nahi thi.. im sorry! Mujhe tumhe thoda time dena chahiye!

(gunjan got an idea..)

G: exactly samrat.. tum finally yeh baat samajh gaye!

(she acted as if she was angry!)

S: gunjan im sorry! Main promise karta hoon ki tumhe time doonga! Pakka!

G: main tumhe ek shart par maaf karungi!

S: kuchh bhi.. anything for youu!

G: tum hamare saath camp par chal rahe ho!!

S: umm.. gun—

G: decide kar lo samrat!

And with this she left him..

Riddhima was shocked! She thought gunjan had understood..! But I guess gunjan bhushan kabhi nahi sudheregi! Understanding toh hai hi nahi!

Samrat stood there thinking what to do.. He was just too irritated.. he calmed himself down and thought about the camp.. five days.. gunjan ke liye main 5 din office miss nahi kar sakta... relaxx samrat aane ke baad college bunk karke pending kaam kar lena! Ab usse haan bol do.. warna naaraz ho jayegi! Pehli baar usne kuchh maanga!!

He went to armaan and riddhima..

S: Fine Main Camp main chalne ko tayar hoon!

A: Kya??? Sach???

And he hugged samrat! Samrat was confused! Why was armaan happy that he was going! And then he got it! Riddhima wouldnt go without him... haha!

R: par bhai..nahi..

A: riddhima.. chup! Tum bhi chal rahi ho!!!Hah! maine kaha tha na sam maan jayega!

M: hey guys! Itne khush kyun ho?

N: aur camp ka bhoot utara??

A: SAMRAT NE HAAN KARDI CAMP KE LIYE!!

N: KYAA??

M: KYAA!!!!

The only difference between the both 'kya's were that mayank was happy and nupur was in shock! She was sooo sure that samrat would say no! But what had happened! Now she would have to go! Noo.. this cudnt be happeningg!!This wasnt true!!

M: yes!! Ab hum sab jayenge!!

R: par tum dono toh nahi ja rahe the na!

M: haan par nupur se deal hui thi ki agar sab jayegenge toh hum bhi jayenge!!

N: Aur samrat ne sab kharab kar diya!!!!

S: maine kya kiya! Mujhe toh khud nahi jane ka mann hai! Woh toh gunjan ke liye...

N: Tum gunjan ki baat kyun sunte ho! Woh bekaar ka hi bak bak karti hai! Uff yaar!

S: oye! Woh meri girlfriend hai! Abhi agar mayank tumhari baat nahi sunne na to tum usse maar dalogi! Aur gunjan toh tumhari hi behen hai!!!!

M: ya dude.. sahi kaha!

A: Toh ab final hai Hum sab Ja rahe hai!!

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P.S. – next update will start from the day of the camp!

!!Day 1!!

Precap: In The Forest.

S: Armaan khade khade dekh kya rahe ho tent lagane main help karo!!

A: haan main tumlogo ko supervise kar raha hoon!

M: Shut Up and Help! Warna tu iss tent main anhi reh sakta!!!!!!

A: ok finee...!!

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Camp'Day 1

It was 8 oclock on a Saturday morning and the college had around 18 students and 3 instructors...They Were All Going to darjeeling

The trustee and principal wished them goodbye and they all went towards the airport...In The Flight Each On Sat next to their LOVE...

Sajan, Mayur and AR Sat Together and their was Another guy from the college sitting next to them..Each Of them were talking continuously!

Mayur.

M: Nupur dekhna tum iss camp par chalna kabhi regret nahi karogi!

N: Mayankk.. mujhe pata hai nahi karoongi! Because ill be with youu.. (putting her head on his shoulder..)

M: I know nupur.. hum iss camp ko yaadgaar banayenge!

N: hmm.. aur waise bhi hum jungle main ja rahe hai!!! Its gonna be soo spookyy!

M: Mazza ayega! Finally we are going!

N: haan.. i just hope waha par kam mud ho.. nd humme raat ko koi jaanvar kha na jaye!

Mayank laughed at this remark!

N: hasne ki baat nahi hai mayank! Socho.. what if some stupid crow shat on my hair! Main shampoo bhi nahi kar paungii!!

M: Oh god nupur! Tumhare dad ko tumhe boarding school bhejna chahiye tha! Ur so spoilt!

N: Kya? Mayank.. main bigdi hui hoon! (hitting him on his arm) Tum bigde hue hoge! Samjhe!

M: ok fine fine.. nupur bhushan toh sabse sweet aur SIMPLE larki hai!

N: No main simple nahi hoon! Im the best! The princess!

M: Aww.(sarcastically). princess.. apni shakal dekhi hai ayine main??

N: mayank shut upp!! Ok.. ab mujhe gussa aa raha hai!!

M: Mera matlab tha tum princess nahi queen lagti ho!

N: oh.. Thanx!

SaJan..

Samrat was looking the other way some what in tension.. Gunjan put her head on his shoulder and her hands around his waist..Samrat looked at her and smiled.. Gunjan was such a baby!

G: Thank Youu..

S: Gunjan.. tumhe thank you bolne ki zarurat nahi hai... You know i love youu..

G: Samrat par tum mere liye apna office chhodkar aye ho! Im sure yeh camp bohott hi achha hoga!Kyunki tum mere saath hoge!

S: phir toh mumbai bhi bohot achha hota! Kyunki hum saath the!

G: samraat! Tumhe aane ka man nahi tha?

S: gunjan tumhe bhi mera POV samajhna chahiye... Mere liye kaam ki kya ehemiyat hai yeh tumhe samajhna hoga!

G: I know samrat.. tumhare liye kaam 1st priority hai! Because of your mom...

S: nahii..!! mere life main unka koi asar nahi hota!

G: right... agar asar nahi hota toh tum itna kyun kama rahe ho! Unhe dikhaane ke liye na ki unhone kya miss kiya!!!

S: nahi.. main.. main yeh sab isliye nahi kar raha!

But both of them knew the truth! And samrat just had to face it then! He got irritated..and then finally they changed the topic!

AR..

A: Im soo happy ki tumhara sadu sa bhai maan gaya!

R: Tumne toh koi kasar chhodi hi nahi thi!

A: But usse gunjan ke baare main toh sochna chahiye tha na!

R: aur tum mere baare main kyun nahi sochte?

A: poore din main tumhare hi baare main sochta hoon...

R: waise nahi armaan.. main yaha nahi aana chahti thi..

A: par kyun? Yaha atleast humme akele time spend karne milega!

R: Because.. because im scared!

A: your scared of what?

R: what if waha animals hue? What if waha par hum kho gaye..

A: (laughing) riddhima.. tum kitni bholi ho! Hum aise hi nahi kho jayenge! Im sure they would have made proper arrangements! Aur tum kyun darti ho! Tumhare saath armaan mallik hai!! Darne ki kya baat hai?

R: aur agar tum mujhe chhodke kahi chalegaye toh?

A: Toh main tumhe phirse dhoond loonga! Simple ridhima.. ab toh darr nahi lag raha hai na??

R: Hmm.. thoda sa..

A: woh bhi jald hi door kar dunga!

They both smiled at each other!

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They all were tired by the time they reach the camp base... they had walked alot!!

N: maine kaha tha its NOT a good idea..

M: abhi shuru toh hone do yaar!

G: haan di.. dekho hum basecamp pohoch gaye!

I (instructor): Hey Guys! See you all are 18 people and your gonna divide yourself into 6 each.. ok so we have three teams! Nd you will have one captain.. the captains we will choose randomly.. next thing is you all will be given a map to show you till where you'll will be out of danger and one instructor will be with you if you need help! You guys will compete against each other in tasks and games..so do you'll understand.??

Everyone nodded and then samrat asked about the tents..

And the instructors said that they cud put their tents anywhere they liked in the area given in the map!So the 6 six set off to find a place for their tent...

They had to come back to their base in an hour!

A S and M started putting the tent... (the area was on a mountain so the roads were rough..

Armaan wasnt doing a thing!

S: Armaan khade khade dekh kya rahe ho tent lagane main help karo!!

A: haan main tumlogo ko supervise kar raha hoon!

M: Shut Up and Help! Warna tu iss tent main nahi reh sakta!!!!!!

A: ok finee...!!

But even after telling him so much he just stood there and supervised.. LOL thats what he said he was doing.. later when the tent was almost ready they put their things inside and returned to the basecamp...

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BASECAMP...

The instructors had set up their tent already and they were the last team to reach... everyone was waiting for them..Gunjan had changed into trousers and a top.. riddima was still in salwar and nupur as usual in her tank top and jeans.. slapping her hand every now and then to keep the mosquitos off! She was already bugged with the trek!

[key:- I1-instructor 1.. I2: inst. 2.. and I3: inst. 3]

I1: So everything done right?

Everyone responded..

I2: Ok so now time to choose ur group leaders he is actually going to be leading the way and arranging everything for the tasks... Nd you guys should listen to that person.. hope you'll are pally with ur team mates..

Everyone said yes..

I3: so here it is then.. first team.. Neha.. Second team Rahul and 3rd team.. Armaan..

Samrat and Mayank were already bugged hearing his name..

S (whispering to M) : ab toh hum kabhi jeet nahi payenge!

M (replying): ur right.. itna lazy hai yeh..

S: kaam kaise karega? Oh gosh!

M: ok lets just hope for the best..

Meanwhile Armaan was soo happy! He went and took the map and the bag they were giving with some instruments like binoculors and hand bands.. for dividing the groups.. their colous was black..

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The rest of the day they could rest so they just walked back to their tents...

G: So samrat ab tak kaisa lag raha hai?

S: its interesting dekhte hai aage.. waise inlogo ko armaan ko hi choose karna tha?!!

G: oh god! Tum armaan ko itna hate kyun karte ho? Hes a nice man! Ek tumhari behen hai jisse armaan se pyaar hai aur ek tum jisse woh bilkul pasand nahi!

S: Itna kaamchor hai yaar!

A: mere baare main baat kar rahe ho?

S: haan.. aayiye captain..!abse saara kaam aap karenge!

A: no dude.. sunna nahi sir ne kya kaha?You'll have to listen to what ever i say! Muahaha....

And he went in the tent..

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Precap: Day 2.. task 1

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.. Task 1..

They reached their base camp early the next morning..Nupur was half asleep mayank was holding her straight.. Samrat was mailing something to his client through his blackberry.. and gunjan, armaan, & riddhima were excited for their first task.. all of them were ready for some physical task.. but what came towards them was shocking.. The instructors had horses with them... Armaan knew that riding horses in a forest is very risky.. a tiny wrong step taken by the horse and all of them will go down!

Each team was given 3 horses and the instructors started with their instructions..

'Guys, All your tasks will be related to each other and who ever can complete all of them will be the master of this camp! We will be going around seeing if you are going on the right path! Nd your 1st task is simply to get used to these horses..These horses are going to be great help later!'

All of them heard carefullyy.. Armaan was veryy happy! He knew how to ride a horse.. even gunjan seemed excited.. well i guess riddhima and nupur were the two who had horrifying expessions!

"Main Yeh Nahi kar paoongi.. mujhe darr lagta hai!!" said riddhima looking at samrat!

"You dont have to do it! They sed it will help later.. so not everybody needs it!" replied samrat in a brotherly wayy...he himself was NOT INTERESTED in horses!

"Riddhima.. you have to do this and main hoon na.. tum mere saath ho daro mat! Teen horses hai toh humme se koi teen seekhega horse kaise chalate hai aur baaki teen peechhe baithenge!"

"Armaan! Main NAHI baithoongii..!!" Nupur was damn pissed.. She hated horses.. they were disgusting according to her!They had no manners and went around shitting everywhere!

"You have to do what i tell you to.. get it!" Armaan replied.. trying to be stern on his decisions!

"Main chala loonga and nupur tum peechhe baith jana! Im sure you'll enjoy!" mayank saidd tryingto convince nupur!

"Nahii mayank.. horses are disgustingg!!" Complained nupur..

Gunjan was quietly listening to them getting really bugged.. This was heights.. they din want to come, and now when they are here they are just complaining abt it!

"GUYS! ITS REALLY IRRITATING NOWW.. WE HAVE COME TO ENJOY! DI CANT YOU ADJUST FOR ONCEE!! AND RIDDHIMA (angrilyy).. nahi woh toh maan gayii.." Gunjan looked at them angrily..

No one said anything for sometime..

"Fine.. jisse chalna hai chalo.. Im taking one of the horses.."

And she took the white horse and went..Armaan followed taking the black one and mayank took the brown one..

The other three stared at each other and then followed...

Deciding..

Samrat- Mujhe itna fussy act nahi karna chahiye.. ab aa hi gaye toh lets do it!

Nupur- Pata nahi main yaha kyun aayi.. par ab will just have to bear with it! Nupur try.. try and bear with it an ddont crib! Here no one cares!

Riddhima- relaxx.. Sab theek hoga! Armaan ne kaha na woh hai yaha! Toh kya darna.. just be with him.. usse khushi milegi..

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Samrat came to Gunjan..

S: Main chalaoonga..

Gunjan turned around shocked.. really?

She moved from the front and samrat got on..

She sat behind him and he started to ride on the horse..

Gunjan was happy that samrat was taking interest finally.. he was really nice..

S: Gunjan..

G: Hmm..

S: Gussa ho?

G: nahi.. khush hoon!

S: Achha.??. aajkal baat bhi nahi karti ho!

G: Aisi baat nahi hain.. Im very happy ki tum finally yaha ho.. mere saath..

(hugging him..)

It was difficult for him to ride the horse.. he had never rode a horse before..

Gunjan realised that because he jerked back if the horse moved too much..

G: Samrat main chalaoo..?

S: tumhe aata hai?

G: Hmm.. maine bachpan main bohot horse riding ki hain..!

S: Achha..?

G: Haan.. toh ab utaro.. mujhe chalane do!

Samrat got off.. gunjan moved ahead and samrat sat and the backk.

And Gunjan rode the horse really fast.. Samrat got freaked out..

S: Ride slow gunjan!

G: chill samrat!Kuchh nahi hoga..

S caught her by her waist..She smiled at him and rode on.. the forest was beautiful.. There was a stream at one end and they looked around..

They were having funn...

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Armaan was sitting on the horse when riddhime came...

R: armaan... main peechhe baithoo?

A smiled at her.. and extended his hand for her to hold...

She got on and he rode slowly so that riddhima doesnt get scared...

A: mujhe pakad lo..

R put her hand on his shoulders and smiled..

A: Tum itna kyun sharmati ho?

R: Hmm???

A: nahi.. tum itni shaant ho.. chup chaap si..

R: nahi.. kuchh nahi..bas.. esehi..

A: mujhe nahi bataogi?

R: kya armaan? Kuchh batane ko hi nahi hai..

A: hmm.. (looking in front)

R: Sach armaan.. main hoon hi aisi.. zyada bolna mujhe pasand hi nahi hain..

A: Zyada nahi riddhima.. atleast apni dil ki baat toh mujhse share kar sakti ho?!

R: kuchh nahi.. bas bhai ke baare main soch rahi thi—

A: Oh! Poore din sam ke baare main hi sochti ho na! Kabhi mere baare main bhi soch liya karo!

R: Dekha.. phir kehte ho ki mujhse kuchh share nahi karti..

A: Ok baba sorry..bolo..

R: mujhe nahi batana..

A: riddhima ji.. please apni mann ki baat kahiye naa ji..

Leaning on to her!

Riddhima smiled and shook her head seeing his flirty behavior!

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Mayank was staring at the horse thinking of how to ride it! He had read books abt riding horses but had never tried it himself.. he was confused..

Nupur patted him on his backk..

N: chale?

M: hmm.. waise tumhe yeh chalana aata hai?

N: Bilkul Nahi.. i hope tumhe aata hainn!

M: (agar maine usse kaha ki mujhe bhi nahi aata toh yhe ispar kabhi nahi baithegii.. chal mayank sharma.. chad ja ghore par!)

M: mujhe aata hai! Chalo chalo..

N relaxed a bit..

Mayank helped her to get on to the horse and then he put the rope hard so that he moves ahead.. nd obviously that didnt happen.. the horse jumped back.. and mayank clutched on the to the rope so that he doesnt fall.. but nupur.. she fell off the horse and landed on her back on the ground..

Mayank quickly got off hearing her scream and ran to pick her up.. she got up slowly groaning...

"Mayankk.. Arghh.."

"Sorry nupur.. pata nahi yeh kaise ho gaya!"

"Agar tumhe nahi chalana aata toh bol dete.. Uff.. ouuchhh.."

"Sorryy.." Appologising realising that it must be paining so much..

She looked at him and smiled a bit.. putting her hand around his neck and trying to walk..

"Tum bhi naa.." said smiling at him..

Mayank smiled back and they both 'walked' back to the tents..

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Hey guys! Now I realise how tough it was for the cvs!Im never gonna bah them again! Gosh! Main 3 couples kaise manage karoo??!!

Hmm.. Well.. Sorry guys! Itna zyada romance nahi daal payyii.. but next update will be romantic.. because raat ka scene hoga! Its gonna be funfilled!

Precap: Dinner at the base camp.. and Sg/Mn/Ar Romance while truth and dare.. **winks**

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