Woh Pehli Baar...Tia Ranveer FanFic - END

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Woh Pehli Baar.....

Tia Ranveer Fan Fic

Tia was sitting in the room….nervously fiddling with her fingers first and then with a pen that she found close by.

T: Oh Tia's god…aaj Tia ke college ka first day hai…paata nahi saab wahan kaise honge….agar Tia ke room mates dehati type ke hue toh!!! Oh no…Aab Tia kya haregi

Tia was the only daughter of Sumeet Ahuja …a rich industrialist. She was pampered and spoilt….but she was also innocent and nave and very caring….a perfect daughter to her dad who was the only family she knew…and....she was also very pretty

Sumeet entered the room as saw that Tia was worried

Sumeet: Princess…kya hua?? Tum inti upset kyu lag rahi ho

T: Woh Paapa….aaj Tia ka college mein first day hai…paata nahi yeh college kaise hoga

Sumeet: Oh!! (Laughs) bas itni si baat…aur mujhe laga paata nahi meri princess ko kya hua

T: Paapa ..yeh small thing nahi hai…Tia is worried…Agar Tia ke classmates sidey hue toh…EWwww..Tia sooch bhi nahi sakti….aur raging

Sumeet: Tia…Maurya bbay ka best college hai…wahan aane wala koi bhi student ..woh kya hota hai….ha sidey nahi hoga

T: par papa….

Sumeet: Tia…tum bilkul tension maata lo…mein hoon na…aur mein principal se aaj milke raging ke bare mein bhi baat karoonga…Tia tum aapne paapa ko trust karti ho na…Tia I will take care of everything…don't worry ok

T:hmmmm….paata nahi paapa…Tia bohot worried hai

Sumeet: Tia..meine kaha na..i will take care of everything…don't worry.

Tia feels a bit relieved and smiles back at Sumeet

T: ok paapa

Sumeet: that's like my princess….aab chale?

T:Chaliye paapa

Meanwhile…on the other side at Maurya

A: Mom…yeh kaise college hai…itni silence…mom I cant stay here..i will go mad

Soniya: Mumum…abhi toh aayi ho…pehle puri tarah se college dekh to lo….ek baar friend baan jayenge toh tumhe yahan aacha lage ga

A: Friends!! Aur yahan!! Hey bhaggu!! Yahan ka atmostpher dekh ke aaise lag raha hai ki sab sirf books mein hi guske baaithte hai

Sonia: Mumum….come on…sonna thoda try toh karo….please mere liye (makes a pleading face…so ashi has to give in)

A:Mumaaa…Arghh!!! Fine…..hey bhaggu…mein kahan phas gayi

Just then….

Yuvi and Sid saw Ranveer coming from the opposite direction. Yuvi and Ranveer were seniors. Sid had just joined the college. Yuvi was the son of a politician – Yeshwant Dev….He was the rock star of Maurya. Sid was one of his best friends….Ranveer was the son of a industrialist…he was the quintessential angry young man….his handsome looks got him much female fan following

Y: Hey Doofus!!! What are you doing here….aur koi jaghan nahi mili spoil karne ke liye

R: YUVI!! Aapni jaban sambhal ke baat ki jiye…agar hamara haath uthgaya toh aap uth nahi payenge…Samzhgaye na

Y: tumhari himmat kaise hui Yuvraj dev se aise baat karne ki

R:Kyu aap koi VIP hain

Y:Yes!! Jaante ho na…ke mein Yeshwant Dev ka beta hoon

R:Toh aap bhi jaante honge hi hum Ranveer Sissodia hai..Suraj Sissodia ke bete

Y: Don't try to act smart with me ok

R:warna kya kar lenge?

Y: warna….

Yuvi looks around for something to use in the fight and finds a can of blue paint…he picks it up and throws it on Ranveer's face

R: Yuvi! Yeh kya batamizhi hai

Ranveer looks around..and finds another can of red paint right next to it..he picks it up and throws it on Yuvi's face

Y:Shit!!

R: bana! Yeh aapne kya kiya!

Yuvi and Ranveer look at each other's messed up face and burst out laughing

Sid: Guys! Have you gone mad…kab tak tum log aaise hi pagalon ki tarah ek dusare ho ki bologe…kabhi normal logon ki tarah behave nahi kar sakte

Y:Chill Dude! Iss mein toh mazza hai

R:Exactly! Baak logon ki tarah karne mein kya mazaa hai

Y:This is how you enjoy

R:Bilkul! This is how you truly live your life….enjoy!

Sid: Oh God! Tum logon ke saath reh kar mein aadha pagal toh ho hi gaya tha…aab tumhare saath padke mein apne saare brains lose karoonga

Y: no chance of that happening

Sid: Kyu?

R: Kyuki brains khone ke liye brains hone zarrori hote hai

Y:right on dude!

Yuvi and Ranveer burst out laughing

Sid: Guys!!

R:Ok Ok bana! Waise bhi hume lagta hai ki hume abhi jaake aapne face clean kar lene chahiye

Meanwhile..Soniya and Ashi saw all this

Soniya: Hey bhagwan…ek ki holo!!! Mumum…yeh log toh tumse bhi zyada crazy hai…tum yahan bilkul fit ho jaogi….aagar yeh log yeh saab karke bhi yahan iss college main hai…toh mujhe aab tumhare expel hona ka koi tension nahi hai…I am so happy….i don't have to worry about anything anymore

A:Mumaa…mein itni bhi crazy nahi hoon…aur yeh log toh brain dead floozies hai

Soniya: Floozies?? Yeh kya hain

A: (really irritated by now)hey bhaggu…kuch nahi Mumaaa…aab please chalo yahan se

Soniya: kyu sonaa kyu hua?..chalo chalkar tumhare room dekhe lete hai

A:ARGGHH!! Fine..lets go

A:Hey Bhaggu!! Please save me…

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 omh lams ur back with a bang and wat an awesome start 2 yr fanfics luv the way u introduced the characters 😃 awesome


and now plssss continue 😃 😉 btw luved ranveer nd yuvis dialogues 👏 also ashi nd sonya 😆
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon asap.
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nice! 👏 ..
please do continue
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cool fanfic lamina. plz continue asap 👏
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Sumeet and Tia enter Maurya….Tia looks around and finds that the college is pretty decent…sophisticated

T: Paapa….Tia ko lagta hai ki Tia aaise hi worry kar rahi thi…aap thik keh rahe the…shayad yeh college it bad nahi hai

Sumeet: Dekha…mein kahan than a….mein aapni princess ko koi aaise waise college mein kaise bhej sakta hoon

T:Oh Paapa…(Tia hugs Sumeet)…you are the best paapa

Sumeet: …and you are the best daughter

Tia smiles…Sumeet is happy as well…knowing the Tia liked her college

Sumeet: Chalo Tia…mujhe principal se milna hai

T:ok paapa

Tia and Sumeet are walking ..on the otherside…Ashi is almost dragging Sonia towards the hostel rooms…so that she can settle in and send Sonia home ASAP

You can imagine what happened next

BANG!!!!

Tia and Ashi banged into eachother ….while Sonia banged into Sumeet

T:Ouch!!!!

A:Hey Bhaggu!!

Tia gets up angrily…still a bit shaken and slightly hurt

T: Hello!!! Tum dekh ke chal nahi saki

A:Kyu timbo!!! Tum aapni aankhon se dekh nahi sakti…tumhare liye bhi mujhe hi dekhana hoga

T:Timbo!!!! What is that??? Tumhe dekhai toh deta hi nahi hai…par Tia ko lagta hai ki tumhe baat bhi karna nahi aata…ya koi vernacular medium se aayi ho…English/ hindi bolna nahi aata kya?

A:Hey bhaggu!!! Meri language understand karne ke liye brains chahiye

T:Aagar tumhare paas he toh tum he explain kyu nahi karti?

While Tia and Ashi are fighting….Sumeet and Sonia get up and see eachother…and get lost in eachother's eyes

Sumeet: Wow!!! Yeh kaun hai…shayad meine isse kahi dekha hai

Sonia: He looks really handsome…mein jo heroes ke saath kaam karti hoon…yeh inse kahi jyada handsome hai

A:Timbo means a bimbo with teeth

Tia gets really mad after hearing this and gives Ashi her khunas look

T:Ewwwww….how tacky….sight, language ke saath tumhare sense of humor bhi kitna poor hai….tum koi special lectures kyu nahi leti yeh saab improve karne ke liye?

A: Sarcasm ki devi…andhon ki maharani…timblet …tumne ashi ko rula diya (pretends/ act like she is crying..fake style)..booooo…

T:Very Funny!!!!

Tia turns to Sumeet and shakes him out of his daze

T:Paapa….yeh dekhiye ..yeh yeh….

A:words nahi mil rahe hai baat karne ke liye timbo ko

Meanwhile Sonia has snapped out of the daze as well

T:you…..you RED HEAD PUNK!!!!

Sonia: Mumum…yeh kya hai soona….college ke pehle din hi fights…mumaa tumne mujhse waad kiya tha…tumne kahan tha ki tum iss baa raise kuch nahi karogi

A:Arghhhh!!! Mumaaa…please don't start that again

Sonia: toh…chalo yahan se…

A:Fine..lets go (rolls her eyes)

Sonia glances and Sumeet sweetly before going away with Ashi

Sumeet now turns his focus to Tia…

Sumeet: Princess…..

T:Paapa….Tia ko yahan nahi rehna….look …look at that punk…Tia ko aise college mein nahi rehna…please Tia ko yahan se le chaliye

Sumeet: Tia…Tia…listen to me…

T:Paapa…please….Tia aaise…(still angry)…aisse logon ke saath nahi reh sakti….in logon ke wajan se stress leke Tia ki skin ruin ho jayegi

Sumeet: Tia..princess…sirf ek student ke wajan se tum apna mood mat change karo…I am sure baki ke log yahan both aache honge aur meri princess ka khayal bhi rakhenge…

T:Paapa…paata nahi

Sumeet: Tia….please ek chance toh do….ek baar dekh toh lo yeh college kaise hai…baki students kaise hai…agar phir bhi tumhe yeh college pasand nahi aaya toh mein tumhe dusre college me admission dilaunga…ok…please…apne paapa ke liye..ek bar try karo

T:…well…ok…Paapa baas aapke liye…paar aagar Tia ko yeh college pasand nahi aaya toh….

Sumeet: toh mein college change kar dunga…promise

T: (Smiles slightly)..ok paapa

Sumeet: great!! That's like my princess…ek kaam karo…tum yehi ruko…mein principal se milke aaonga…tum mujhe principal ke office ke bahar aadhe ghante mein milna…tab tak tum yeh college dekh lo…okay??

T:okay paapa

Sumeet:ok Tia…bye

T:bye paaapa

Tia smiles and waves to Sumeet while he heads towards principal's office

T:ok…Tia…lets see this college….par Tia uss punk ko forgive nahi karegi….usne Tia ki insult ki hai

Tia looks back in the direction where Ashi went off…..

In meantime….the coloured gang of Remix….Ranveer and Yuvi followed by Sid and walking towards Tia…lost in their own conversation….heading towards the dorms to clean up….and……another accident..starting to seem like the day isn't going good for our delicate princess Tia….

BANG!!!!!

T: Ouch!!!! Aaise ki accidents hua toh lagta hai Tia aaj hospital pohoch jayegi

Tia had her eyes shut….Tia felt as if someone was holding her..to prevent her from falling down….Tia opened her eyes….and saw a RED face (Yuvi!!!) staring back as her…This wasn't something she had expected to see…It was startling…shocking and a bit scary for her…She screamed

T: AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!

The scream was a bit loud for rockstar Yuvi's ears to bear…he let go of Tia and closed his ears

Y:Aahhhh!!!!

Tia fell down with a THUG!

T:Ahhhhhhhhh!!! Ouch!!!! Oh Tia's god…Tia ko lag raha hai ki Tia ne koi bone break kiya hai..oh Tia's god!! Aab kya hoga..!!! Tia kaise chalegi!!

Just then Ranveer who was right behind Yuvi stepped forward

R:Aap …Aap thik hai na???

Tia brushed aside the hair that had fallen on her face to look up and see who was talking to her…with soooooo much concern and care in his voice

When Ranveer saw Tia's face..he was taken aback…he managed to skip a heartbeat….this was a all together new experience for him….

R:Yeh…Yeh kitni pyaar lag rahi hai…hume aaise lag raha hai ki hum inka khayal rakhe…kabhi inhe hurt na hone de…

He felt extra protective towards Tia…extra concerned in trying to ensure that she was ok..that she wasn't hurt…and if she was..to do anything to make it better

Tia looked up at the BLUE face that stared in front of her…what was going on she wondered….first the red face…now blue….was this blue paint covered face of the same person whose voice was filled with concern…what was going on here ..in this college….first the girl with red hair…then the guy with red face…then when she finally thought there was someone here who was normal…who seemed caring….he turned out to have his face painted blue…Tia was concerned…a bit scared as well

R:Aap thik hai na??

Tia was a bit afraid now…so slowly she started moving a bit away

Ranveer could see slight bit of the fear on her face….he then realised that his face was all painted blue…he had forgotten all about that when he saw her…..

R:Dekhiya…aap please dariye maat….hum aapko kuch nahi karenge….aap hamara chehra dekh ke please dariye maat…woh ek accident ho gaya tha aur yeh paint hamare chehre pe lag gaya…hum abhi aapne room hi jaa rahe then…face wash karne ke liye

Tia was a bit relived after hearing this…someone…something about this guy made her want to trust him and what was saying

Tia nodded her head…to indicate that she was ok…Ranveer tried to help her..to get her up..somehow…in spite of the fact that they had just met…Tia felt some connection to him…as if they knew eachother..may be…Ranveer was feeling similar things as well

Tia tried to walk a bit ….but almost fell down…she was still shaking a bit…and this was her third accident of the day…Ranveer who was holding her hand ….held her firmly and prevented her from falling down..he picked her up in his arms

R:Hume lagta hai ki aapko kafi chot aayi hai….chaliye..hum aapko doctor ke paas le chalet hai…

T:nahi…

R:Dariye maat…hum aapko kuch nahi karenge…hum baas aapko doctor ke paas le ja rahehe…aapko chot lagi hai na?

T:nahi…woh…woh ...Tia ko doctor ke paas nahi jaana…Tia ko principal ke office jaana hai

Y: (who had just recovered from the screaming)…KYA!!!! Kya tum meri principal se complain karna chati ho??? Look here…I didn't bang into you on purpose….aur woh girane ka…woh tum itni jor se mere kaan mein chikhi ki I got a ear ache and dropped you in all that chaos

T:nahi…

R:Yuvi..bana…please…relax kijiye…(Looking at Tia)…aapko doctor ke paas nahi jaana…Jumbo ke office mein jaana hai?

T:Jumbo???

R: I mean principal ke office mein jaan na??

T:ha….woh ..woh Tia ke paapa wahan Tia ka intazaar kar rahen hai..Tia ko paapa ke paas jaana na

Sid:Yeh Tia kaun hai??

Y:SID!!!!

R:Sid bana…inka naam Tia hai…(looking at Tia) right?

Tia nodded her head

Sid: ok dude!!! Mujhse kaise paata koga

Y:Right! (rolling his eyes…)..Doofus!!

R: Jaise humne pehle hi kaha tha….uske like brains chahiye!!!

Tia giggled at this…Ranveer looked at her and smiled as well…He was feeling more and more drawn to her with every passing moment

Sid:Dude!!!

R:Bana…aap room jaake clean up kar lijiye…hum Tia ko Jumbo ke office chodke aa jayenge

Y:Sufi dude!! Cya later

Yuvi and Sid walked away..Ranveer looked at Tia..who was gently smiling back at him…

R:Tia…Chaliye…hum aapko aapke paapa ke paas le chalete hai..abhi toh aapko humse daar nahi lad raha hai na.??

Tia shook her head and smiled

Ranveer started walking towards Jumbo's office with Tia in his arms….

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Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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wow yaar its so awesum n relievin 👏 after ti-ran break-up dis is d only thing dat cheers me up 😃
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very very nice do continue fast asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ITS GREAT ITS AWESOMEEE.......

CANT WAIT.......plzzzzzzzz contttttt right now ! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwww lams the last line 😳 😳 😳 ranveer seems very sweet nd caring i really luved the dialogues 👏 👏 well done

now waiting 4 sumeet 2 see tia in rannys arms 😈

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