**Dil Ka Rishta** Last update @ 63 [03/06] - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
yes I understand you yaar and it's ok .
and i was mean if you wrote that after they had a hug they had a warm eye's session .
and I think if you made the last scene is somehow look funny it will be nice , as if vidya say I can't stay I have to back to the hotel and he made a cute angry and say many things to make her agree to stay .
as i say if you like
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
amazing, Wonderful,awesome, beautiful etc etc... update yaar....
cute, romantic and funny scenes thy... buhat maaza haya!!!!!!!!
love it yaar and keep it up👍🏼
Edited by baloSD - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
bidz plzzzzzz add this song Pee Loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam in SV romantic scenes plzzz plzzzz....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: baloSD

bidz plzzzzzz add this song Pee Loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam in SV romantic scenes plzzz plzzzz....


thanks a lot for the suggestion!!! i needed this suggestion badly cuz i always think which song i should add... and glad that u liked the part 5!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khulh

yes I understand you yaar and it's ok .
and i was mean if you wrote that after they had a hug they had a warm eye's session .
and I think if you made the last scene is somehow look funny it will be nice , as if vidya say I can't stay I have to back to the hotel and he made a cute angry and say many things to make her agree to stay .
as i say if you like


Oh i got it!!! Now part 5 can't be changed yaaar cuz many have read it already!!!but i'll use ur ideas in the next parts... promise!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeah I know yaar but plz update sooooooon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
we are waiting yaar please please please make it fast 😍 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bidz darling- u created a romantic atmosphere!!!1
u r a gud story teller!!!!
my bidzzzz rockkkkkkkkkkk
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bidz we are waiting yaar , today you didn't write any update 😭 😭
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Part 6

It's evening 6pm!!! Sagar-Vidya both are sleeping in each other's arms!!! Sagar wakes up, sees Vidya cutely sleeping, keeps looking at her and admires her beauty!!! Suddenly, from somewhere, air comes, and Vidya's hair comes on her face!!! Sagar sees it, touches her face, keeps her hair away from her face!!! And again, Sagar keeps staring at Vidya, amazed by her beauty!!! Now Vidya wakes up, sees her Sagar admiring her beauty!!! ❤️
Vidya - Aise kya dekh rahe ho? ☺️
Sagar - Tumhe dekh raha tha!!! ❤️
Vidya - Mujhe toh humesha hi dekhte ho!!! ☺️
Sagar - Sote waqt tum kuch alag dikh rahi thi!!! ❤️
Vidya - alag? (surprised) 😲 matlab?
Sagar - Matlab, you look even more gorgeous and stunning when you sleep!!! ❤️
Vidya smiles😃!!! Both have an eye-lock season!!! ❤️After few mins....
Vidya - Ek min, ek min!!! Iss ka matlab main baki waqt kharab dikhti hoon kya? 😆😆
Sagar - Arre maine aisa kab kaha? Tum toh humesha ek pari jaisi dikhti ho, extremely beautiful and innocent!!! ❤️
Vidya blushes ☺️!!! Eye lock season starts once again ❤️!!! Both comes close and close and closer!!! Few inches distance remains between their lips!!! ❤️ Suddenly Vidya puts her palm on Sagar's mouth!!! 😉😛
Vidya - Abhi nahi!!! 😛
Sagar - Arrreeeyyy yaaaar.... Tum ladkiyo ki yehi problem hai!!!! Sab kuch baad mein!!! Bhagwan ne tum ladkiyo ko apne fursat ke time par aram se banaya hai aur sara sharam tum sab mein ghusa dia hai!!! 😆🤣
Vidya - Ohhoo!!! Yeh tum kahe rahe ho? Jo ladka college ka sabse shy ladka hai, kisi se jyada baat nahi karta, har waqt kitabo mein duba hota hai woh yeh kehe raha hai? Hahaha... Very funny!!! Waise hum ladkiya aisi hi hai!!! Shaadi se pehele nothing aisa vaisa!!! 😛😉
Sagar - Kabhi kabhi besharmi bhi dikhani parti hai!!! 😉😆 Waise maine shaadi ki baat kab ki?? 😲 (pretends to be shocked)
Vidya - Aisa sawal puchne ka matlab kya hai tumhara? Hum dono shadi nahi karenge kya? 😲
Sagar - Ummm.... Sochna padega!!! 😉😛
Vidya - Sagar..... Jao main tumse baat nahi karti!!!
Vidya gets angry 😡 and tries to go from there!!! Just then, Sagar grabs her hand and pulls her towards himself!!! ❤️ Few inches distance between them!!! ❤️ Vidya gets shy and nervous!!! ☺️
Sagar - Uss din main tumse kuch kehena chahta tha, lekin halat ke vajar se kahe nahi paya!!! ❤️
Vidya - Kya? ☺️
Sagar - I wanted to tell you that, I.... I.... I..... 😛
Vidya - I what? ☺️
Sagar - I love you like crazy!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Both smiles, blushes and are in tears of joy!!! Then both hugs each other!!! Their eyes are closed!!! They are in different world!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Suddenly, Sagar's friend Sahil arrives there to visit Sagar!!! 😆😆🤣
Sahil - ahem ahem *coughing* (in teasing style) 😛😉
Sagar and Vidya gets shocked and moves away!!! Both are feeling shy and embarrassed!!! 😳😳 Sagar thinks, "Hey bhagwaan!!! Pehele doctor phir yeh!!! Meri hi pyaar ki naiya ko kyu rokh dete hai bar bar!!!" 🤣 Vidya smiles to make Sahil feel welcome!!! 😊😊
Sahil - Shayad main galat waqt pe aa gaya!!! 😛😉
Sagar - Aarre nahi nahi!!! Aisa kuch nahi hai!!! Come and sit, yaar!!! 😊
Sahil sits!!!
Sahil - Kaisa hai?
Sagar - Ekdum first class buddy!!! Tu bata!!!
Sahil - Main bhi theek hoon!!! Arre, tune inse toh introduce nahi karwaya!!! (pointing at Vidya)
Sagar - Oh ha!!! Meet Vidya, my friend!!! (just friend, really?😉)
Vidya - Hi!!! 😊
Sahil - Hi!!! Kaisi hai aap?
Vidya - Main theek hoon!!!
Sahil (tells to both) - Waise kya tum dono sirf dost ho? 😉😆
Vidya gets shy!!! Remains silent!!! ☺️
Sagar - Ha yaar!!! Sirf dost!!! Sacchi mein!!! 😳 (thinking, "bohot ho gaya bhagwan, aab aur torture nahi, isske dimag mein please yeh daldo ke isse aab jana hai yaha se!!!) 🤣😆
Sahil - Theek hai, theek hai!!! Achcha sun, aab main chalta hoon!!! (decides to leave cuz he understood the real fact and thinks not to become a "kabab mein haddi" in his friend's romance) 😛😆
Sagar - Theek hai!!! Kal milte hai!!! Bye!!! (thinks, "thank you bhagwaan!!!"
Sahil (friend) goes!!! Vidya realizes that it's night 10pm!!!
Vidya - Chalo aab dinner karne ka waqt hai!!! Tumhe dawai bhi toh leni hai!!! 😊
Sagar - Jo hukum meri maalkin!!! 😛
Vidya laughes!!! Then she prepares Sagar's plate and comes to Sagar with it!!! ❤️
Sagar - Vidya, mere right arm toh injured hai iss liye main apna right hath nahi hila sakta!!! Tum khila do na pls!!! 😛❤️
Vidya smiles 😃, then she says, "Theek hai!!!" 😊
Vidya smiles and now feeding Sagar with her own hands!!! Sagar keeps being amazed by her beauty!!! Suddenly, Sagar bites Vidya's finger by mistake!!! 😛
Vidya - Ouch!!!
Sagar realizes what he did!!!
Sagar - Oh sorry sorry!!! Maine jaan buch ke nahi kia!!! 😒
Vidya - Bohot zor se laga!!! 😔
Sagar looks at her, holds her finger and kisses it!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Sagar - Aab theek hai naa? 😛😉😃
Vidya - Ha!!! (smiles and blushes) ☺️
So Vidya keeps feeding Sagar and Sagar keeps staring at Vidya with a loving expression ❤️!!! After Vidya fed Sagar, she gives him medicine too!!! 😊
Vidya - Aab tum aram karo!!!
Sagar - Phir se? Oh god!!! Main sach mein aab bimar ho jayunga!!! Dopahar ko hi toh aram kia tha!!! Not now again please!!! (requesting expression)
Vidya - Nahi!!! Tumhe aab aram hi karna hai!!! Kal better feel karoge!!! Aur waise bhi, kal sham ki plan yaad hai naa? Kal sham ka plan kharab na ho iss ke liye tumhe ekdum theek hona hai!!! 😉
Sagar smiles!!! 😃
Sagar - Theek hai!!! Lekin ek sharth hai!!! 😛
Vidya - Kya?
Sagar - Tumhe bhi mere pas rahena hoga, meri baho mein!!! ❤️❤️
Vidya - Yeh single bed hai!!! Dono iss pe kaise rahenge?
Sagar - Agar ek dusre ke liye dil mein saccha pyaar ho, toh sab kuch mumkin hai, aur waise bhi, isse humara pyaar barega!!! ❤️❤️
Vidya smiles 😃 and blushes ☺️!!! Then she lies on Sagar's bed!!! Vidya keeps her head on Sagar's chest and her hand on Sagar's body!!! Both hugs each other tightly and close their eyes!!! ❤️

Part 6 ends!!! Hope you all like it!!! Waiting for all of your comments!!! Love... Bidz!!! 😃
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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