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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Part 3

General Maan was sitting on the controllers seat when his screen began to show a small red sign...
shit.. shit.. shit... G. Maan began to worry...
he was now only a few kilometers from entering the earth's gravitational field when radio waves hit his spaceship... radio waves wouldnt have been a problem for G. Maan if his invisibility system would be working

General Maan had turned on the invisibility system of his spacecraft when he entered the milkyway galaxy... his spaceship was fine in all ways except for one tiny default

"why do i always have to face these problems??? sometimes this waves, sometimes those waves, and now RADIO WAVES.. i asked for removing this default somehow, but... (really frustrated)

G. Maan slowed down his speed and tried making contact with his home base
but there wasnt any responce...

"oh great..!! i forgot they dont give responce to anyone outside our galaxy"

Washington DC 2300 hrs

the president after discussing the reports given by the higher officials(HO) of NASA
Mr. President: is there anything that can be done for keeping this from leaking out?
HO: sorry sir, there isnt much that we can do but..
MP: but what?? is there any way or not? i just need the answer
HO: sir only three people know about this report... the girl who was given the project, her colleague and John their head of department... we can take John into confidence.. he may help us shut the girls mouth... and as for her colleague, she doesnt know much.. for the reports, they can be kept top secret... and hence no leaks
MP: i'm not sure for the girl.. or that John... you need to do something more...
HO: we could always keep them aside
MP: keeping them aside as in killing them??
the HO smiled at president
MP: if thats the case then go ahead... there won't be stopping from me and my staff

NASA HQ 2300 hrs

Geet was really happy with her work... she had accomplished her task in a very less time...
John came to geet... you did a very nice job... well done... and now i can prove that these things do exist...
geet: ofcourse sir...
John: i was thinking of making a report on 'aliens' and i would like you to assist me on this
geet felt really glad... she was new there and already she was getting to work with her seniors and that too with the head of department himself...
i would be glad to do so sir
John: thankyou miss handa... and you may now go home as its already late and we can then start our wortk early tomorrow
Geet: sure sir.. good night and thankyou again sir

geet packed up her stuff and was all ready to leave office
she decided to wait for her colleague Pinky...

2330 hrs

Geet: where re youuu
geet had been waiting for her colleague for the past half hour but she wasnt coming out... geet then called on her cell phone but there wasn't any answer... she began to worry...
after sme time geet calmed down when she got a message from pinky:

I went home when you were still working and didn't wanted to disturb you.. you go home and rest... tomorrow will be a looong day for you...

geet read pinki's message and then went outside of the NASA hq to go to her car... then she remembered that she had given her car keys to Pinki that morning and she probably would've drove it to her home...

Pinky i will kill you now...

geet went to find a cab for herself but there wasnt one... Oh great!! the day pinky takes my car is the day when all cabs decide to go on holiday... what bad could happen now... at that moment it began to RAIN..!!
geet was holding a folder in her hand... she put it over her head as a shield against rain...
she looked down at her clothes... they were all wet... FANTASTIC!!! she put down her forlder as she was already drenched

whenever this kind of thing happens a car stops infront of the girl.. but miss geet handa this is reality not some romantic movie...

geet shook her head to remove the absurd thoughts out of her mind and signaled for any passing by car to stop and give her a lift to her home..

after some time a black merce stopped in front of her and the passenger door opened for her to sit... geet accepted the offer readily as only certain approved people cars and cabs were allowed in this perticular area...

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Next Part 4

updated after a looong time

so do comment guyz.. waiting for them 😃

love

Noor

Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago

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namitasin

@namitasin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Its good but first u updated after long time n that too its short. Next time update soon with long one its ur panishment.

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Hasina

@kellz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

i was wondering wht happened to thsi story
will we get some maaneet soon?

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514349

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

heyy nooor thats amizing and nice

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514349

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

thankx noor i like your post

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sejal1986

@sejal1986

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Hey this is totally different (hatke) story, I liked it, hmmm Maan is an alien, like it completely, and Geet is well educated NASA employee, nothing could be better, good, carry on this story and yes please post next update sooner and bigger, waiting for it, and please add me to your PM list.