SS: Abduction.. part 4 page 13.. 6th july

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heyy guys... started another SS... we were reading a play in clg an this idea dropped in my mind... who knew studies could be so helpful in making stories šŸ˜† okay so without any more ado heres the story...

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Abduction and Crowning

General Maan was in his room enjoying his holidays but was disturbed by the beeping noise. He went to it to see that he had received a message from the king. H opened it

Flash Message
Top Secret
King H. to General Maan
Subject: Operation Abduction
Geet Handa- Milkyway (Earth- America)

End of Message


General Maan was frustrated that his holidays were ruined. He dressed himself in his black leather uniform.
The king's palace was in the heart of their city 'Lugberg'. It was really beautiful having four towers and was of white color. It was covered with a big glass dome to avoid any unwelcomed visitors..
General Maan went outside of his residence and saw that a car was already waiting for him.. He really liked these automated flying cars.. he sat in it
G. Maan: King's Palace
And the car drove General to the palace.. Maan got out of the car as he reached the palace and was met by the guards who would escort him through the dome and to the King..
Guards took him to the King and king gestured them to give some privacy and leave.. as they left General bowed to him


G. Maan: Your Highness'.
King: I want you to get me that specie
G. Maan: yes your highness..
King: I trust you that's why I'm saying it to you'.
G. Maan: I understand sire'.
King: You will be getting some help from the head of that states'.
G. Maan: There's no need' I can do this by myself
King: Good'. Now attend to it and I want you to bring that thing in a week'.
G. Maan: yes sire'.
And G. Maan went to his spaceship to start his new mission''.
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how was it?
it isnt that good.. but plz do leave ur comments/ criticizmz
love
Noor

P.S i'll be updating once a week
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