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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update as usual...well written..!!!⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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New concept
Liked all thre parts
Maan hates earthlings n will fall in love wit earthling only😆😆
Geet si sweet n intelligent
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey u updated after so long n this short
who offered geet lift??
wat about maan?? n those mean ppl want to kill geet😡😡😡
plzzzzzzz update the next part soon
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nice update..
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awesome!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4
2300 hrs

General maan was setting the frequency of his transmitter when he heard a beep from his screen.. his screen was showing "one message recieved".. he opebed it.. it was a voice message from the king

General, i heard that you tried contacting the home base and the invisibility of your ship is not working.. try contacting the earth base as you are not allowed to contact home base rom other galaxies..

that was a real help.. thanks your honour..!! G. Maan said in a sarcastic tone when the message ended.. G. maan went back on tuning the frequency of eath base...
he found the frequency range atlast.. THANK YOUUU.!!!
this is nA 9811.. General Khurana of galaxy Gxar.. need a no-see area for landing.. over


Earth Base

...and you know my wife almost kicked me aout of th house if i hadnt... Sam Rookward stopped talking as he saw a dot on the screen slow down.. Edward i think theres another one coming.. but why is it slowing down?
sam rookward and edward browman were on duty that day in ESCC (Earth-Space Communication Center) .. sam set in the keys


this is nA 9811.. General Khurana of galaxy Gxar.. need a no-see area for landing.. over

sam: nA 9811 this is the earth base
G. Maan: invisibility not working.. need a no-see area for landing
sam turned towards edward

put the president online and ask him to shut down the private low-level telescopes and inform the NASA headquarter immidiately..

sam: nA 9811 do not enter the earth's field untill further nitoce.. searching for a no-see zone
G. Maan: roger that

Edwrard: president already knows about that ship... he's had a meeting with the NASA officials
Sam: and what about the private centres?
Edward: he's already done that

sam: nA 9811 this is earth base.. landing sight 160 degrees below and then 50 degrees south of washington.. a landing station will be there.. you'll be able to see it on your radar when you enter the earth
G. Maan: roger.. over and out


2330 hrs

it had to be raining here in washington.. G. maan thought and decided to fly over the clouds for cover.. he had the landing area marked on his radar
this is nA 9811.. request for the permission of landing
landing station: request granted.. landing permitted
General maan was right above the land base and was now descending down.. he made his way down the clouds which he was using as a cover.. the place was desserted and had many warehouses and one of them was without a rooftop and had a cross sign made of lights..
that must be the landing area..! not a bad place for hiding..


general maan got out of his ship and was greeted by a man who informed him that the president wanted to have a word with him on phone

G. maan: yes mr. pesident,, you "wanted to have a word" with me?
President: oh yes general.. your king told me about your mission and i wanted to talk to you presonally on that.. so i have sent someone to get you from the base
maan didnt like all that.. he wanted to do the mission on his own and didnt wanted anyone's help but he didnt knew how the thing which he was to take with him looked like..
okay
the line went dead
man: if you follow me i'll escort you out..
G. maan followed him.. the exterior of the base was old and a bit worn out but the interior was really good and modern... well not modern for maan as they had done much advancements

they had come to exit door. the man pushed a buton and the door opened.. you'll find Toby Parker outside.. saying so maan stepped outside and the door behind him closed..
the weather was cold and it was drizzling.. G.maan looked to his left and right but couldnt see any "toby parker" anywhere


2300 hrs Outside NASA hq

geet got inside the car and said thanks..
she looked at the person sitting at the driver's seat.. he was looking at her.. the man was wearing a black suit and a white shirt underneath.. and was wearing black sunglasses
geet got abit nervous by the way the man was looking at her..
umm i need to go to xxx..
wihtout any word the man started driving which scared geet even more..


2345 hrs

the route which the man was going through was'nt familiar to geet.. she got hell scared when they entered an old warehouse.. she tried opening the door but it was locked and the lock was also not opening..
let me go.. where have to taken me.. where am i..?? just LET ME GO...
geet cariied on with her shouting but it went to deaf ears.. and with a sudden halt the car stopped making geet to hit the dashboard which made her forehead to bleed.. the man got out of the car and opened geets side of the door.. sticking his gun at her skull he orderd her to get out of the car..
at this point geet had to do whatever the man said to save her life.. but as she got out the man shot at her leg
geet screamed.. she had never experienced such pain before.. it wasnt like anything she had ever experienced..
she saw the man point the gun at her skull.. she knew she wouldnt survive now.. she was to die.. geet closed her eyes tight and looked away from the man as she knew that she would be dead in a few moments..

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Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice update.. luved it... hope geet is saved.. continue soon
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hiii
awesome update
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cant wait 2 read more
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