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eli01 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sara really soo emotional and sad, but great part
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Posted: 14 years ago

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No more spreation


Here dm walk after finishing his breackfast to out side the house his eyes lost as his soul is ………

.his steps take him to where she is ……..his eyes tried to catching her pic her presence

To him self

DM STOP STOP TO ACT AS CHILD STOP……BUT………I ALMOST DEAD BODY W*HOUT HER IN MOMENTS SHE OWN ME …….AND I CAN'T BE AGAIN THAT DHRAM WHO WAS NOT KNOWEING HER …..WHO WAS ALONE ….HURT ……..AND NO BODY FOR HIM IS SO IMPORTANT……… AS SHE WALK IN HIS LIFE HIS WORLD JUST CRASHED ……………santoriiii


Like the silent call of him rech her …….dm saw her walking near the river ….she look sad away ….she look so away so hurting

And dm felt her pain bec he is the reason for it…………………..
Dm here jus can't let this spreation continue he can't ………………
Santo who stand faceing the moveing water is just thinking of him of his warmth of his call of his ………..only his


When her eyes catch how the water move ………..she here suddenly saw dm face come …………she see his hand raising saying come back santo

come back to our house come back to my empty laps come back …………..
When his voice hit her ear from behind …….…in suddenly ……………..santo

just


S:hahhhhhh

Dm: sanoriiiii

Santo thought his voice come from inside her as she just hear him calling her whole the time no one else just him since last night just him

Dm: santoooriii ………

his hand slowly slowly be on her shoulder
And santo just in that moment know it is not her imagination it is his only his
And in slow motion she turn to see him in shocked face ……….

Dm in mess his kurta botton from up opened his eyes have 2 big darker circles around them
His hair so mess …..his eyes so sad

She want punishment na ?.......................she just want him suffer……..and that is the only result

Dm is not dm he is lost man without his love
Santo make her self so much near him ……………her front is away inches from him


And here dm by just feeling her feel like his lost soul strat to come back again to his tired body santo keep look at him then
Dm feel her hand touch his as he just was cosing his eyes try to beileve that is really here
Dm open his eyes to see her wet eyes her shivering lips her pain which is nothing except his pain reflection on her face

Dm: santori…iiii

S:shhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Her fingres move on his lips to make him quite and dm here hold her hand in tightly ………..as ……………

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
So emotional. Glad they're back together.
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Posted: 14 years ago
really emotional and lovely part sara 😳 just love the way you write!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwww mira and shah
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww mauhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
@love shonita thanks alot dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW to gud sara loved the way u show sanraj love now waiting for next post soon... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum saara......they r 2gthr now....pls dnt seperate them now...........
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TOGATHER

Dm: santori…iiii

S:shhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Her fingres move on his lips to make him quite and dm here hold her hand in tightly ……..as santo give him that look of ………….I HERE DM SHHHI HERE WILL NOT GO ANYWHERE ……….I HERE

Dm face slowly slowly have what it had missed in the previous days

Have the glowing of love of happines ……………dm want to come more near

But santo say in whisper

S: we are out ……anyone can see malikkkkk

As tiny smile appear on her face to see how much he was suffering how much he love her ……more then she thought once ……….dm forget the world around him with every word come from her bautiful mouth

Her way in calling him make that strange feeling in his stomach come again and again …….the feeling of be with her

He missed that so much and she notice his crazyness his desire to be with her ……to feel her…….as she also want to be there in her place between his arms

Santo her back off or try too but dm hold her back to him when santo say

S: shhhh malikk I will not go away …………just come with me

And dm hold her hand walking to where she took him

To some small closed house ………there are too many leaves on the floor near the door as the; window covered with the wood too many wood slides

Here santo open a side door enter with him saying in so soft voice

S: malik we can wait if u ……………..as no other place tooo………I mean ……..we be togather…………she turn faceing him

The fire in his eyes say it all……… no waiting ……..his eyes just reflect the passion the pain of lonely ……………..the love in him can't wait

And dm here is the one who pulling her to inside

The sound of winds in the early morning is the only company for them

Along the bird singing …………..ere in the middle empty house santo and dm faceing each other

Along the only bed on the floor which is made of some sheets ……………..dm just say

Dm: i……………..not mean………….

S: shhhhhhhh ……..her hand touch his cheecks as her lips touch his mouth edge in softely way ever …………..and

TBC

Edited by love2211 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh my my what apart sara loved it now want to see what is next.....well i know that.:P 😛😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part Sara😊

and Leena knows what it is coming hehe, I wanna know too, soon

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