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Posted: 14 years ago
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okkkkkkkkkkkkkk girls, girls and shanak ki diwaniyon, me again back wid my utpatang dimag ke utpatang ideas,
sooooo bear wid me

Sam tels sunny to drop Khanak, but Khanak initialy refuses,. However, Sam, the great duffer,😡 insists, so does Rahul and Sunny, Poor girl finally has to agree., goes wid sunny.
Shan, in d studio, misses Khanak(as usual), cals her, but not reachable. Den calls home, someone else picks up and says Khanak madam to cafe gaayi hai apse milne- So, our dear Shan goes to cafe- but wahan bhi Khanak nahi(oh btw, wahan Rahul also gone), par sam and Duck are dere,
Sam says -arey tum yahan, Khanak to tumse milne gayi , studio mein. Shan says-kya, but woh to mujhse nahi mili. But itni barish mein woh akeli kyun ayi. Sam proudly says- nahi,nahi, i send Sunny wid him. Phir to kya, Ghum gaya Shan baaba ka dimag 360 degrees, Sam ki hoti hai achi khasi dhulayi, (verbally)- tum itni nasamaz kyun ho, tumhe pata tha na Sunny ke wajah se khaanak kitna upset ho rahi hain. Shan then cals home to check if Khaanak is dere- but no , she is not dere.
Three of them gets tensed- call sunny- he picks up, says- Khanak ji ne to kuch door jane ke baad mere sath jane se maana kar diya, jid pe adi rahi, to main kya karta, ajeeb pagal hai bhai tumhari biwi. Shan gets pissed off at the word -Pagal, but controls himself. All three, search for Khaank in the rain. Going on , and on, and then finally- dey r able to trace Khanak- poor girl, all drenched and sitting alone on d ground- Shan goes near her, touches her hands, but uske taraf se reflex action, all frightened and shivering- Shan says- Khanak , its me, tumhara Shantanu, dekho meri taraf. Khanak slowly lifts her head, sees Shan, hugs him tightly and starts crying .Sam, interupts, says- Shan , we should take her home, quickly. par tumhara , ghar bhi to bahut door hain, yahan se, . Duck says- dude, tu bhabhi ko lekar mere flat mein chala ja, woh yahan se nazdeek hai. main aaj raat cafe mein so jaonga, and gives flat keys to Shan.
Shan enters flat wid khanak. Then , then then- kya then then , khud hi samaz jao, then kya hota hai-w arey we get a intense, passionate Shanak scene.Waise i am a seedhi sadhi bachi.But, yeh mere post ka end nahi hai- Shan and Khanak both sleeping. Suddlenly , Shan ki akhein khulti hai- sees Khanak , besides him, goes near her further, kisses her forehead, and caresses her face and wonders- akhir aisa kya hua , jo Khanak itni ghabra gayi.
toooooo dat is the suspense!

soooooooooooo kaisa laga mera idea, haaha👏
waise agar kisi ko pasand na aye to, to to to to
to kya, Bhad mein jao tussi, mennu ki pharak peinda hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kya..hum bhad me jayee....🤣....lekin trsut me evry1'll like it.....we all want simialr 2 this scene....and by the way...what's ur name...sorry i 4got.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvmanar

kya..hum bhad me jayee....🤣....lekin trsut me evry1'll like it.....we all want simialr 2 this scene....and by the way...what's ur name...sorry i 4got.....


Shilpa- aab apne memory mein phit kar lena, hamesha hamesha ke liye,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice post..loved it..
kaash aisa hi kuch ho yaar...😃
i dont know why but suddenly i have started to like d precap😉















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Posted: 14 years ago
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@shilpa...kya kare yaar...meri memory size bohot chhoti hai...lekin phikar not kucch delete kark tara naam save kar diya...

@luvshanak.....i m also liking it....😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvmanar

@shilpa...kya kare yaar...meri memory size bohot chhoti hai...lekin phikar not kucch delete kark tara naam save kar diya...

@luvshanak.....i m also liking it....😉


thankuuuuuuuu , waise wats ur name? please joota mat marna......... and wat is manar- manav archana kya?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice post dear..
hope aisa hi ho to maza aajaye ga......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpaaaa ... this was awesomee ... great work .. .CVs thoda Shilpa se idea dhaaap lo .. 😉
i dont mind SHANAK coming closer like this .. Baarish & Band kamra .... 😳
OMG ... i m getting all besharam ideas !!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh god shilpa kash aisa hi ho yaar tere muh main ghi shkker........................par aisa nahi hua to aaj zarur koi mere haathg se maar khayega kyonki aaaj kal cvs ka dimag kuch jada hi alag track par chal raha hain
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Shilpaaaa ... this was awesomee ... great work .. .CVs thoda Shilpa se idea dhaaap lo .. 😉

i dont mind SHANAK coming closer like this .. Baarish & Band kamra .... 😳
OMG ... i m getting all besharam ideas !!!!!!!

arey to OS likho na... main request kar rahi hoon . Agar request nahi acha lagta to order samjho. lekin likho. becoz, mere dimag mein jitna tha, maine likh diya

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