Nothing Can Keep Us Apart
Part 97 - Is that the end?
One day a prince came to choti princess ki mom's family. He said that he wanted to marry choti princess ki mom and take her away to a wonderful life. Choti princess ki mom's family thought he was wonderful, so they got married. But they didn't know that the prince was a bad prince. He was already married. He only married choti princess ki mom so that he could steal her jewels and land, then he left her alone. Everyone was upset. When choti princess ki mom found out that she was going to have the choti princess, her family was angry. They were afraid that people would think choti princess ki mom had done something wrong. They wanted to kill choti princess, so no one would find out. But choti princess ki mom loved her choti princess a lot. She ran away to save her choti princess, but her family still tried to kill her. Both choti princess ki mom and choti princess would have died, but for one thing. During all these bad times, choti princess ki mom met a dusht danaav. The dusht danaav always caused choti princess ki mom problems. He would yell at and threaten choti princess ki mom, pull and push her around, and never listen properly to anything she said. Choti princess ki mom thought the dusht danaav was the most terrible person, worse than even Raavan. What no one knew was that he was only dusht danaav on the outside. On the inside he was a good prince. Actually, the bad prince was the brother of the good prince, but the good prince thought that his brother was good, and would never do bad things like he did. The good prince didn't know what had happened to choti princess ki mom, only that she always seemed to be in trouble. He was always there when she was in trouble, so he would help choti princess ki mom. When choti princess' family tried to kill her and her mom, the good prince saved them. Choti princess ki mom left her family and went to Delhi. There she got a job as a secretary, so that she could take care of choti princess. But there was a twist. The boss was none other than the good prince! Choti princess ki mom thought that he was still dusht danaav, and they fought a lot. After a while they became friends. Choti princess ki mom found out that he was dusht danaav on the outside, but good prince on the inside. Choti princess ki mom and the good prince liked each other, but choti princess ki mom was afraid. The good prince didn't know about choti princess. He didn't know what the bad prince had done. Choti princess ki mom was worried that he might think like her family. She didn't know how to tell the story, but the good prince found out by himself. He still wanted to be friends with choti princess ki mom. Everything was happy. Until one day everyone found out that the bad prince and the good prince were brothers. Choti princess ki mom didn't trust the good prince any more. She thought that he was all dusht danaav and ran away. The good prince was angry. His brother had hurt choti princess ki mom. He wanted to punish him, but the bad prince ran away. The good prince found choti princess ki mom, and proved that he was good. He loved choti princess ki mom a lot, so the good prince married choti princess ki mom. Then he became choti princess ka dad.
"Is that the end of the story?"
Oh no. Choti princess wasn't born yet. She was still inside choti princess ki mom. Choti princess ka dad had to do a lot to take care of them. Once, they went to vist choti princess ki mausi, and choti princess ka dad had to fight villains to save choti princess and choti princess ki mom.
"No, he didn't fight any villains."
"But he could fight villains. He can do anything!"
You two stop interrupting and listen to the story! Choti princess ka dad did fight villains. The villains were friends of choti princess ka badi mama. They were angry because choti princess ki mom told the truth about her family, and the police put choti princess ka badi mama in jail. Choti princess ka dad had to fight all the villains by himself, to save choti princess and choti princess ki mom from being killed. Choti princess ka dad was a hero. He fought 6 men with swords and beat them all. He also made sure that the bad prince got his punishment. The bad prince had to have a trial, because that's what you do with bad people, to figure out their punishment. The bad prince was really bad, and the punishment was to be in jail for ever. After all of this, finally choti princess was born and choti princess ki mom and choti princess ka dad was so happy. They loved their choti princess a lot.
"Is that the end of the story?"
No! Choti princess ki mom was really young, and choti princess ka dad knew that she was really sad to leave school. He also knew that she was really smart and was doing a lot of hard work in their business. Choti princess ka dad told choti princess ki mom that she should finish college and then do MBA. Choti princess ki mom really liked the idea, but she didn't want choti princess to have problems if she went to school. Choti princess was a baby, and babies really need their mom a lot. But choti princess ka dad was a really good dad, and he helped take care of choti princess so that her mom could do school.
"Okay, now that is very boring. School? That is not interesting at all. Is the story over yet?"
Well...
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2 Hours Earlier
"AHHHHHHHHH!"
"MAAN, I AM NOT DOING THIS AGAIN, DO YOU HEAR ME!"
"How can he help but hear you, Bhabi? Your screaming can be heard all the way to China."
"VICKY!" screeched Geet, in between panting and squeezing Maan's hand so hard he thought it might fall off.
"I know, I know, shut up and keep driving."
"Maan," said Geet in a much calmer voice, as she leaned back against the car cushions, and closed her eyes, "you have to stay with me this time."
"Geet, I'm not going anywhere. I'll be with you, I promise."
"Ha! You promised last time, and what happened?"
"Geet, that was totally out of my control!"
Geet rolled her eyes and started counting on her fingers. "When Priya was born, you created such a tamasha, that the hospital staff were forced to keep you outside. When Amit was born, you had a bad cold." Maan wanted to ask how was that his fault, but kept quiet, seeing the look on Geet's face. "When Dhiren was born, you were in Mumbai, attending a business conference."
"Geet, do you think that I wanted to leave you? You yourself told me to go to that conference."
"What were you doing, listening to me? You should have stayed."
"Geet, you know we both thought that Dhiren would come late, like Amit, instead of early like Priya. None of that is my fault."
Geet grabbed Maan's hand and began to squeeze, as she felt another contraction starting. As it got more and more painful, she couldn't help but complain, "It's all your fault. Everything is your fault. You and your sunrises and sunsets! Who goes to Punjab for vacation during the winter? You just wanted to have..." panting, "your..." panting, "wicked way..." more panting, "with me!"
"Yuck! Bhabi, too much information!"
"Vicky, if you don't shut up, it will be even worse for you than last time!"
Vicky unconciously moved one hand off the wheel and to his forehead, touching a scar that Meera constantly told him was very cute. It had been given to him by none other than his beloved Bhabi, three years ago, when his nephew Dhiren was born. Geet had given Vicky the responsibility of informing Maan of their child's impending birth, when she realized that she was going into labor earlier than expected. When Vicky had trouble getting a hold of Maan due to him being out of the city on business, he made the mistake of coming to tell Geet while she was experiencing a contraction. Geet had taken out all her pain and frustration on him by grabbing a water jug and throwing it hard at his head. Ever since that time, Vicky had been very careful about getting on Geet's bad side. Not wanting her anger to be directed at him again, Vicky thought it wise to keep silent, at least until his new nephew or niece was born.
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Final exclusive interview with laxmi2010, author of FF - Nothing Can Keep Us Apart
i wonder, whether you write scenes based on photos or pick the photos based on scenes,
both look like "ek duje ke liye" by Lakshmi86
The only scenes with photos that I purposely decided to put in the story are Pee Loon(already shown) and RTM(comming soon). I wanted to include these scenes because I liked them, but was a bit disappointed in the endings. By including them in my story, I was able to make the endings come out nice. All other included scenes/photos were more of a result of me recognizing that what they showed in the serial could easily represent something that I had planned for the story.
Maan's confession is a good example. When they first aired the "Fake Fiance" episode I didn't have any thought to include pictures from it in the story. Once I knew that I wanted Vicky to help Geet, and I was thinking up scenarios, I realized the similarities. Especially, when Maan is carrying Geet, before Dadi interrupts them, to me it feels like Maan is taking her to his room for a little "romance".
Once I know that I want to include pictures from a specific scene, I very carefully, one frame at a time sometimes, go through downloaded episodes and copy frames that I think will work the best. Then, once I've prepared the pics, I constantly look at them while I'm writing, so that the pictures and story match a much as possible. Even when I am preparing the pics, I am careful to cut out as much unwanted stuff as possible. Maan and Geet's engagement promo is a good example. I didn't want Dev showing up, so he is carefully cropped or hidden.
Btw how many updates are there before the ff gets wrapped up? by sarita21992
Just a few left.
Since this story is reaching towards its end soon, can you provide us the whole story in a pdf file or something? by shivangi783
Yup, I actually proposed this idea back in the first thread, and there were some people who were interested, so I will be doing that. However, it might not be available as soon as the story is over because I want to proof read and fix a few minor problems, and the entire story is well over 140,000 words. It will take me awhile to get through it all.
i heard you were ending your ff :(
but i also heard you have more plaannneeddd??
:)
just a question....are they based on current track or like one youve made up
personally i love the ones on the current trackk hahahaha
i think the pregnancy bring a cute factor to evrything..will she be?? by Ilovemsk
Yup, Nothing Can Keep Us Apart Will be wrapping up within a week.
Yes, I have two more stories planned. I have given a few hints about the stories previously, but I will tell a bit more now. Originally I was planning on starting both stories at the same time, however since then a few things have happened that has made me decide to begin one, and wait just a little bit to start the other. I won't say what made me change my mind, but it's nothing to due with my personal life, I just feel that it would be better to wait.
Due to the nature of the first story, I really need to get started and get quite a bit of it written in the next few weeks, so I have made a goal for myself to have the first chapter of Tum Kaun Ho? (Who are you?) posted by next Monday. My other story, Aankhon Mein Teri (In your eyes), will begin sometime in March. Once I'm writing both stories, I'll only update each about once a week. Don't beg or throw chappals at me. I never intended to do really frequent updating for either story, it's just that I kind of need to for Tum Kaun Ho? for a few weeks now.
About whether the stories will be based on the serial, yes Aankhon Mein Teri is very much based on the serial, and Tum Kaun Ho? a little bit. Will Geet be pregnant in these stories? Can't give away that information. However, there will be children in both stories, but whose they are, I'm not saying.
as we seen last update Vicky was missing meera will they marry is she gonna came back in the story is there gonna be leap? by cuyuun13
Yes, there is a leap, obviously. Hmmm, is Meera coming back and will she and Vicky get married? You'll just have to wait and find out.
Edited by laxmi2010 - 14 years ago
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