FF:Our Strange Journey-Step27 Pg71 (28/9) UPDATING - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Trisha..............(still feels weird typing that😉)
lol I still await the day my update will be sooooooo good enough that I get a comment more than 3 words😆
lol😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Awesome Update
loved it
Amazing
Continue soon
thanks for the pm!

Thanks sooo much
hehe you're welcome for the PM.......it's all my pleasure😳
hoping to update tomoz x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjulee

Happy New Year!!!

:)

Thanks for the wishes Sanjulee
Wishing you a happy nu year too
may it bring lots of joy to you and your family😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Also Just like to add:
huge hugs to:🤗🤗🤗🤗

The following 30 member(s) liked the above post:

and also............wifey you are added to my pm list........
and as for -shamima- and wajiha-1 and mariam14 - lool you're already on the list so you didn't need like that post😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Why I am nit in ur pm list? Xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ff
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
sorry 4 da late comment
went abroad
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kdg129

PM LIST PLEASE! 😃

😃😃😃

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

Why I am nit in ur pm list? Xx

Sorry😭...............you are now😃

Originally posted by: ansah

Awesome start....really loved it

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome ff

loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
sorry 4 da late comment
went abroad

Thanks........hehehehe next part coming right up😉 and no worries......oooooo where'd you go??? Tell Tell😳
Thanks sooo much guys.................you are all added to my pm list 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Welll Helloooesss My jaan-iosssssssssssss
I is here - what to do....couldn't resist the temptation to write more...hehehehe though I havent even written one word for my essay!!!!😭😭😭😭
Welll I'm still typings more for this.............but heres what I have sooo far - hehehehe hopefully it'll have you all laffing your heads off again😳
My New Year's pressie to all😆
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Recap:

Geet: Oh yeah......hehe....Well -I don't really do it on purpose.....it just comes you know......I guess when im just too excited or too nervous - it just comes into action and it rolls off my tongue......*rolls of my tongue? Nervous? Excited - oh babaji now I'm defo in for it....hai hai....what to do -tell me he didn't hear that - pleaseeeeeeeeeeee*

Maan: Oh right....... right..... so tell me .........

Geet: what

Maan: well you were mixing your lingo just now right.......sooooooo tell me...... what are you nervous or.......excited??

Geet:😲😲😲

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Geet was in a fix, she had not intended to mix her lingo and she never does generally, only when she was open and free and relaxed like when at home with her parents or pinky or her other close friends. But then why was she talking like this with Maan...was she free with him? Could she ever be open with him? Why was she able to talk to him in such a comfortable manner? Of course in DPS she spoke to him quite frankly and easily, well up until that day of course.....but then they were friends....but after that day...were they still friends....could they ever be friends? Afterall that has happened is it even possible........

Maan: Ok if you don't want to answer you don't have to.......I was just saying.....Geet?

Geet: huh haan er woh....no I just...erm...woh...haan ai...aisa kuch nahi hai -erm what I mean to say is that...erm....well *and Geet began fidgeting with the phone cord, out of confusion*

Maan smiled at this....for once Geet didn't have anything to say back, he had caught her off guard and hearing her confused state, was giving him more reasons to enjoy................it reminded him of...*and he instantly let go of the thought...not wanting to go in that direction again*

Geet: look it's nothing of that sort........and anyways I don't always mix my lingo, just with people I know will understand what I'm saying, I mean I would never be seen or heard for that matter talking to a british person in Hindi/Punjabi....now would you...only with people like us na.....

Maan: Us??

Geet: Yes US....*deliberately emphasising the word so he heard it clearly...not understanding his need to repeat it...........until she finally replayed the last few words* Er...I mean...Uffoo I mean - Us Asians - of course.........and anyways you understood what I was saying - be it in whatever lingo it was na?

Maan: Yea I did...

Geet: Bas..toh phir.....what's your problem?

Maan:....er..nothing...I...suppo...

Geet: Fine then.....and anyways I've always been like this, you know na...I mean even in DPS, remember how I.....*and Geet trailed off as silence took over from both sides, as both recalled their DPS encounters and experiences*

There was yet another awkward silence.......(Tishuu's beginning to think, they both need some counselling to get the hell on with their lives rather than get clogged up with the past)

Geet:......- neways....are you going to tell me why you called?

Maan: WHAT???

Geet was surprised with his outburst: What WHAT??

Maan: GEET- are you seriously asking me that?

Geet: Err yh.......

Maan: Geet you really do have the memory of a fish!

Geet: What? Hey - did you just call me a fish?

Maan: Erm...yhhh.....*as he tried to contain his laughter*

Geet: Ahh...oh no you didn't........

Maan: Ohhh YES I did...

Geet: Take those words back.........

Maan: Er........NO

Geet: I said take them back this instant...........

Maan: ooooooooo and if I don't...?

Geet: I'm being serious...............take them back or else I'l....

Maan: Or else you'll........

Geet: I'll..........*trying to think of something to say...*

Maan: Yes Geet......I'm listening........*imagining the look on Geet's face as he very knew she had no comeback - he was liking this way too much*

Geet: Maan I mean it....

Maan: O Yeah but first tell me.....you'll......

Geet: argh...Maan please........

Maan: please what??

Geet: Take those words back........!!!!! *getting a little irritated with his stubbornness*

Maan: No Geet...I won't.....*sensing Geet's change in tone*...and you know why?

Geet: why?

Maan: Because.............I already told you why I called

Geet: huh..........so.....

Maan: sooo?...... you being your ever so forgetful self have forgotten already....... how can you forget...and not only that......I just told you to call me MK and you're still getting confused by calling me Maan.....

Geet: errr ok.....but.... wait....whats that got to do with calling me a fish....???

Maan is surprised at Geet's innocence - he truly did miss her ditsy side to things....WHAT?? What am I thinking..I missed her....what no no I can't think like this......oh dear.......I'm going mad.....

Geet: Ohhh helloooo.........hey..........where did you go?.....look MK.....er Maan....look mister you can't just go and become one of those silent callers - I want answers yea....you can't just go leaving me mid conversation...you called me a fish and I want to know why? Hellooo.............Maan?? uffoo....you can't just leave me hanging here you know -do you know how rude that is, hey I'm talking to you...are you even there? uff...had hogayi....you're the one who calls and tells me about finding my planner and ab khud gayab.....hawww wait wait wait...my planner...you have that....heyyy MK..Maan...no MK...Maan..ufff oiiiii come back...er Hello.....kahan hoo??? ........MAAN? hellooooo.....

*Geet gets a little restless not hearing anything from Maan's side, not even the slight giggles that she had heard from before....nothing to let her know that he was still there*

.......though she had never had dreamt that she would ever see the day that HE calls her, but now this was actually happening - this was not exactly how she would have wanted things to have turned out............she could have at least been much nicer, afterall he was calling for a good cause and being considerate....and what has she been doing - just plain rude...uff...pata nahi kya sochta hoga mere baare main....haww.......babaji...........tusi meinu rok nahi sagde si......GEET tu babaji ko kya keh rahi hai......bas bolti gayi bolti gayi...ab bhukt....bechara MK...Maan...MK ufff ek toh yeh nahi samaj main aata ke konse naam kahoon...aur upar se yeh toh kuch bol nahi raha...........

Geet: Er......helloo.......anyone there???.........look I'm sorry na......what for....I don't know...but hey you started it....you called me a fish...that was not nice......and then to top it you were being all stubborn and you know na.......I don't like it when others are stubborn with me.........uffo kuch boloooooooooo.................MAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNN *Geet shouted down the phone after finally reaching her "sabhar ka baandh"*

Maan: Haaaaaaannnnnn.................I'm here baba.........gosh....... *Maan broke out after hearing her shout*

Maan had initially drifted off with thoughts to another time and place - to somewhat better times that he'd shared with Geet....but he was soon pulled out of that when he heard the urgency in Geet's voice and since then he was trying to get her attention and talk, but she just wouldn't stop and he never got that chance to speak up... partially because as he said before, once she began talking, no-one could get a word in edgewise and also because Maan was hearing Geet talk sooo freely and easily with him after such a long time, he didn't want to spoil her mood by interrupting her....rather let her be happy be what she loves........which is to talk talk and talk!

Geet: Achaaaaaa Now you talk...........when I finally shout out to you......lagta hai...you don't understand pyar ki bhasha......aur hogi bhi kaise......all the time you are in your gussa gussa moods that even if you tried to understand any other way of talks you couldn't....kyunki tumhe sirf gusse ki zubaan samaj main aati hai...haina?

Maan: What......that is sooo not true......main humesha angry nahi hota.......only sometimes...when people like you make no sense at all...and what's this I don't understand pyar ki bhasha...what pyar ki bhasha haan??

Geet: Pyar ki basha......mera matlab hai........woh...you don't understand anything put to you straightforward....only if I shout or scream down the line to you - otherwise no.....you seem to be oblivious otherwise......humph

Maan: Oh ho ho ho....enough ok.....mujhe sab samaj main aata hai...when you get time from your bhashan toh you can listen to what I have to say na......but no....you are like a speedy car...ek baar chal gayi...toh bas stop hone ka naam hi nahi....

Geet: WHAT??????????? *As geet jumps up from her bed in astonishment*

Maan instantly regretted having said too much.....he knew sooner or later Geet would certain burst.....there was no way she could take it that someone -and that Maan Singh Khurana would answer her back for as good as she got.........

Maan: Oh god...er Geet....look I was.....

Geet: OMG.......

Maan: What....?

Geet: You.....are.......

Maan: Geet bolo....spit it out....abhi!!!!

Geet: you.....you're speaking...

Maan: What???

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Sooooo tellllll meeee..............how was it............I want goood good comments yaar!!!!⭐️
P.S PM list updated on page 1 for you all - have a look - if missing......you know what to do...like it jaan-ios and you will be added to it.....
but haan my condition still remains.............only people who like or comment will stay on there.......so get to work peepz😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
super amazing love there little fight over the phone pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

super amazing love there little fight over the phone pls cont soonnnnnnnnn

THANK U SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃😃
I think the other readers should thank you tooooo- because of your comment👏
I shall post my next update tooo.....................................
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if I hadn't gotten a comment - then trust me I wouldn't have posted the update!!!!!😭

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