10 Things I hate About You (AR) Part 1 Updated

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liveforever

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello. For a few days I was thinking of starting a fanfic, based on a movie named 10 things I hate about you. This fanfic is a Armaan Riddhima, Fanfic with RM, and AA. So here I found the guts to start this fanfic of AR, RM, and AA, based on 10 things I hate about you. This is going to be exactly the movie, but with AR RM and AA in it. Please do tell if you want me to continue, or if you prefer just watching the movie and imagining AR as the main characters.

Character Sketch

Armaan Malik

Armaan Malik is the school's bad boy. Age of 17. He can sometimes be freaky and scary, but the girls drool over his good looks and amazing 6 pack😳 Although he doesn't prefer dating, as he does not like girls. He can be greedy as well.😲

Riddhima Gupta. (You can imagine Riddhima as any one of the three, Jennifer Winget, Shilpa Anand, or Sukirti Kandapal.

Riddhima used to be Popular in the school, but then she kind of got tired of it. Or is there another reason behind it? She is very beautiful. Now she is very tomboyish. She never wants to date. She travels in a really old fashioned car. She could care less what people think about her.

Muskaan Gupta

After her sister, Riddhima, got "tired" of being popular aroudn the school, she is now the most popular girl around the school now. Its not like she hates her sister, its just that they don't get along quite well. A reason for that might be because their personalities and their standard of the school are totally opposite. Shes a total girly girl. Everyboy falls for her good looks. Which is why her sisters good looks are totally unnoticed.

Rahul Garewal

Rahul is the new boy. In eleven years he has been to ten schools. Tyhe reason behind that is because his dad is a travel agent, so they mopve around the world a lot. But his dad has promised him that this is the last place they are moving to. Rahul is good looking. But is unnoticed. Kind of like Riddhima. What happens when he falls for Muskaan at the first sight?

Anjali Malhotra

Anjali is a total William Shakespear crazy. Along with that she is a very good friend of Riddhima. She is Riddhima's only firend after that Riddhima got tired of being popular. Being her good friend she knows the real reason she got tired of being popular.

Atul Saxena

He is the one that gives all of the information of the school to new kids. He also becomes Rahuls first friend. He helps him for giving information about Muskaan. Apparently Rahuls Love at first sight. He is secretly crushing over Anjali.

Raj Sen

All Raj cares about is girls. Well meaning taking girls out and then one day having u know what with them and then leaving them. Despite that all girls want to go out with him. Reasons behind that are some girl think hes hot, some girls just want to gain popularity. Yup Raj is popular. Now reason behind that nobody knows. Hes totally abnoxious. Although maybe his good looks are what the girls dig.

Senna Ray

Muskaans Friend. They are always seen together. She also just wants to be popular so she hangs out with Muskaan.

Shashank Gupta

He loves both of his daughter. He is over- protective about them. Although he spoils his daughter, not Riddhiam because she never even asks for anything. But Muskaan is totally spoiled. He wants to give his daughters every happiness after his wife Padma left this world.

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Theres the Character Sketch. Now Please do tell me if I should

continue or not.😃

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Index

Character Sketch - Pg 1

Part 1 - In Progress

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Posted: 14 years ago

heyya

dat was a nice start!! interesting intro!! do pm me weneva u write more!!!😊

P.S i might nt be commenting much due 2 exams so dn think dat m nt reading ur ffs!! its just dat i do read bt lately m nt commenting much!!😊

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iceprincess101

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice start... waiting to read more... do add me to ur pm list....

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Parneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey...wowww i luved the movie..and now this luks really interested...:)
i wud luv to read more..:)
plzzz continue soon..:)
add me to ur pm list..:)
tc :)
Preet <3

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice concept add me o ur pm list

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liveforever

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks Guys and I will Make a PM list and be sure to add you guys in it 😃

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liveforever

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Posted: 14 years ago

Promo

You see A beautiful City, with the high building, and a burning Sun. It's hot Monday morning. You hear songs in the background. You see a girl sitting in a sport car's with a stearing wheel in her hand. With her friends sitting with her. She is seen moving her shoulders with the beat. With her friends doing the same. The girl is none other but, Muskaan Gupta. As the car comes to a stop, Muskaan and the girls wait for the signal to turn Green, so they can Go. As their waiting, you see another car. But this car is not so sporty. It looks like it came out of the dump. It's a very oldfashioned car you see. Inside you see a beautiful girl, wearing baggy clothes, with her hair up in a updo. She is sitting inside also waiting for the signal to go green, with a smile on her face. Yup, She is our one and only Riddhima Gupta. Muskaan Guptas sister. Finally the signal goes Green and both the girls move on, going to their High School.

You see a big beautiful, yet old looking High school. With all of the children waiting for the bell to ring so they can barge in. You see girls talking, with their friends, you see boys meeting up with their buddies, playing hockey, playing basketball, playing soccer. The you see Riddhima walking upto the front door as the Bell has rung. As she walks up, she sees a poster saying " The Dream Prom " With the location and date. As she sees it, she rips it off of the wall. As you can see, she doesn't seem like a very prom loving girl. Why? Well You'll find out late on in the story.

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey dear awsome one

plz do pm me

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liveforever

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1

You see a boy sitting in front of the school principal. The principal tells him to just wait a second, as she is writing a scene for her novel. The boy sits there, fingernails tapping on the desk waiting. Just then the Principal finishes writing the scene, and closes the lap top, and looks at the boy. The boy's name is ...Rahul... The principal smiles at the Boy.

Princi- So Rahul 'hands him a form saying he is accepted in the school' So 10 schools in 11 years, my my, Realtor?

Rahul- Yeah my Dad--

Princi smiles at him- That's enough. Im pretty sure you won't find this school, any different than your other schools, Except that shit lies everywhere.

Rahul - Excuse me, Did you just say... Umm am I in the right office?

Princi- Not anymore your not, I've got another student to see, and a novel to finsh so scoot! Scoot!!

Rahul stands up quickly and leaves from there as quickly as possible. On the way out he sees the next student that the Prinic has to see, that students name is ,,, Armaan ,,, They stare at achother for a session that last 5 seconds. Rahul seemes to be scared by that student. Then Rahul leaves from the office.

Princi- Armaan Malik, I see that our visit are weekly ritual,

Armaan just flashes a smile at her and nods,

Princi - It seems that you exposed yourself in the Cafeteria...

Armaan - I was joking with the lunchlady, it was bratwurst,

Princi - Bratwurst huh, next time keep it to your self... Now scoot!

Armaan leaves there with a wierd look on his face, The Princi starts to write her Novel.

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Atul is standing, wearing a button-up shirt, and Trousers. He saw Rahul, and new that he was the new kid. Atul walks up to him and streched out his hand to shake Rahuls hand.

Atul - Hello, I'm Atul Saxena, and I'm here to tour you around the school.

Rahul - Oh hi, Thanks.

They both walk out of the school, to show the students...

Atul - to the left we have the Coffee Kids, and here, These kids are huge Marley fans, they think their black. And here we have the Cowboys, And these are the buisness freaks with their business suits and their laptops. And now over here-

Rahul - Oh My GOD!!

Rahul was lost in something, or should I say somebody. He saw Muskaan walking with her "friend" Senna. She was looking like a total Angel to him. Atul looked at the direction Rahul was looking at.

Rahul - What group is she in?

Atul - The dont-even-think-about-it group. Names Muskaan Gupta, shes beutiful and deep. Listen forget about her, they have a very rich father, And its a wide fact that the Gupta sisters aren't allowed to date.

Rahul- uh-huh yeah (He was still lost in her) Whatever.

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Everybody is sitting down in their desks in whatever class they are in first. This scene is for the English class. The students that are in the English class are seating themselves down on the desks.

Mr.Mitchell- Alright then what did everybody think of the "Sun also Rises?"

Girl - I loved it he is soooo Romantic (Random Girl)

Another girl looks at the girl that said ROmantic. This Girl is RIDDHIMA!

Ridz- Romantic Hemingway? He is abusive alcoholic.. (She continues to state huge words, )

Mr.Mitchell Sighs,

Raj Replies to Ridz - As suppose to a bitter , Hag, Who has no friends? ' Raj laughs and high fives his friends.

Mr.Mitchell - Pipe down Raj!

Ridz also replies to Raj - I suppose that in this society being a male and an Asshole makes you worthy of our time. ' The class hoots, at that comeback as Raj just got insulted.

Then Armaan enters the classroom, He was late.

Armaan - What did I miss??

Ridz blabs some words which are really big. Like a Geek.

Armaan didn't understand her and sighs- Good! ' He goes out of the classroom.

Mr.Mitchell - HEY HEY!!!!

But before Mr. Mitchell could say anythign more, Raj interrupts him.

Raj- Oh Mr.Mitchell, can you make Ridz take her mind out, before she steps in class? and laughs with the class laughing with him, Ridz just glares at him.

Mr.Mitchell- Raj someday you are going to get bitchslapped, and I'm not going to do a thing about it, And RIdz, I thank you for your opinion, It must be tough fro you to come up those middle classess, it must be TOUGH!

Ridz- Anything else?

Mr.Mitchell - Yeah go to the office, you're pissing me off!

Ridz- What but Mr.Mitchell--

Mr.Mitchell- Later!!

Ridz just sighs to control her anger and makes her way out, Raj was laughing on her, so on her way out of the classroom she hits him with a book.. Raj just ignores her.

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The princi was saying out her novel to herself. when she couldn't think of another word for ingorged. She asked her secretary to look it up, but Ridz told her the perfect word for it...

Ridz sits down on the chair in fornt of the princi,

Princi- So Miss.Gpta I heard you were terrosizing Mr.Mitchells class?

Ridz- Expressing your opinion is not terrorist action.

Princi- The way you Expressed your Opinion to Raj? BTW, a few days ago his retreviation went quite well...in case you were interested,

Ridz- I still Mantain that he kicked himself in that place,

Princi stares at her- The point is Ridz, you should use words that are..

Ridz gives her a word that might explain what she was trying to say..

Princi- Nope, But isn't it "Bitch" The term you use the most?

Ridz just smirks..

Princi-Smiles.-Thank you.. You may leave now..

Ridz leaves from there.

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Raj and one of his friend was standing outisde, after school.

Friend- Virgin Alert! Your favourite!

Raj looks at the direction, He sees Muskaan, he so wanted to go out with her but knew that he couldn't because of her father. muskaan was laughing with her friend, she walks by Raj giving him a smile.

Raj - Lookin good Ladies!!

Friend- SHes out of reach even for you!

Raj - Nobodys out of reach for me!

Friend- you wanna put money on that?

Raj - Money I've got, This i'm going to do for fun and smirks.

Friend jsut giggles at him.

....

Atul and Rahul are just a few feet away from them, looking at Raj and them.

Rahul- Whos that guy??

Atul - Raj sen, Hes a huge Jerk, and a model.

Rahul- wait hes a model! Rahul starts laughing at that!

Atul - Yup!

Rahul - Man Look at her! Muskaan Gupta!! is she always so!

Atul - vavid?

Rahul - How can you say that ? Shes totally Im mean,, what are you talking about!

Rahul - theres more to her than you think, I mean look at the way she smiles and, Look at her eyes man, shes totally pure! I mean you're missing whats there,

Atul - No! Whats there is a snotty little princess, Justput her away and move on! Move on!

Rahul - No you're wrong about her!

Atul- Im wrong? You wanna take a shot be my guest! but shes actually looking for a french dude!

Rahul - are you serious? That's perfect!

Atul - What you speak french?

Rahul - well no But I will, I'll learn!

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Ridz was walking with her friend Anjali, When a Red sports car was riding by her and stops right beside her. It was unfrotunately Raj.

Raj - Heyy Ridzz!! Your little Rambo look is out Ridzz,, Didn't you read last weeks Cosmo?

Rdz just nods her head!! - Run along!!

And walks away..

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On the other hand Muskaan was walking with her friend.

Senna - I know you can be ovedrwhelmed, and underwhelmed, but can you just be Whelmed?

Muski- I think in Europe you can!

(Both the girls were very stupid, not very smart at all)

Just then Raj was driving past them but stopeed beside the girls..

Raj - Hey ladies! You sweet little thangs wanna get a ride?

Muskaan was screaming inside! She also wanted to date Raj so she can become moe Popular!

Muski - Sure!!

Muski and Senna get in abd Raj drives off with them to drop them off to their houses. He only ave them a ride because he wanted to get Muski...

Ridz and Anjali saw that. Ridz and Anjali were in Ridz car.

Anji- Hes very Charming!

Ridz roll her eyes... - Hes disgusting!

Atul was on his bike and was riding by their car...

Ridz- move your dirty helmet then DIRVE!! She said that very rudely bewcause she was ina very bad mood.

Atul moved away and to Rahul...

Rahul - you okay??

Atul- Yeah just a minor encounter with the shrew! Thats your dream girls Sister..

Ridz drives off..

Rahul - Wait thats Muskaans sis??

Atul - Yup! Aight bye man!

Rahul - K cya dude!

Atul rides off..

Rahul also gets in his car and drives off..

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Scene Shifts to Ridz house.. Ridz was sitting in a spagetti strap and short shorts. Reading a book..

Ridz dad comes up tot her goign through the mail...

Shanky - Hey RIddhima, Did anybody cry today??

Ridz- Sadly no.. but it's only 4:30 yet and winks at her dad..

Shanky just skakes his head..and sighs..

Muski comes there..

Muski- Hi Daddy!! She pecks Shankys cheek...

Shanky - Hey precious!

Ridz looks at Muski and smiles evilly in her head..

RIdz - an dwhere have you been??

Muski - No where!

Shanky - Whats this ? It says Sarah Lawrl..

Ridz snatches the letter away and looks at in shock and excitement!! Ridz reads it and screams!! and does the happy dance!! Shanky and Muski look at her..

Ridz - I got in!!!???

Shanky - Uhhh Honey Ridz.! Thats great buts isn't Sarah Lawrls at the other side of the country??

Ridz- Thats the basis of its appeal...

Shanky - But i though that you were going to stay at this school??

Ridz- No you decided.,...

Dad- Well okay.. So what? You're just going to leave??

Muski- Lets keep our fingers crossed..

Ridz glaresd at her then smirked..

Ridz- Ask Muski who drove her home?

Muski's smiled then just Vanished...

Shanky- Ridz don't change the subje- Muski who drove you home??

Muksi- Uhh!! Now don't get upset daddy theres this boy-

Ridz- whos a flaming imbusle!

Shanky - Please!!

Muski - I think he might ask me--

SHanky - I think I knwo what hes going to ask you.. and I think I know the answer! NO! Its always No! What are the two main house rules?? #1 No datinguntill you graduate, #2 No dating till you graduate!

Muski - Uugghhh!! DADDY! THATS SO unfair!! sulked muski

Shanky - you know, Ill tell you a story.. This morning a delivered two babies to a 15year old GIRL!! And you know what she said to me?? She said... I shoud'e listen to my FATHER!

Muski- She did no!

Shanky - Well thats what syhe would've said if she wasn't so DUmb!

Muski- Umm can we focus on me for a second please?? I am the only girl int he school that has never date!

Shanky- No NO! Your sisters not dating!

Ridz - and I don't plan to!

Muski- where did you come from Planet Loser???

Ridz - As opposet o planet look at me look at me.. she mocked Muski..

Shanky - OKay this is how we solve this one.. Old rule out new rule in.. Muski can date.. When Ridz does! And smirked at his brilliant plan!

Muski - But shes a dork.. what if she never dates??

Shanky - Then you'll never date..

Shanky mumbled to himslef - boy I like that!

Shanky - and I'll get going bye!!