Shaadi ka pehla din...(MN OS)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey friends its been long i've written nething on MN...... i kno i hv lft my ss since a long tym... sry fr dt... il update dt also soon... neways m bak wid an OS... hope url lyk it....

It begins wid nupur in a saree...
nupur opens d curtains of her room takes in d fresh air n sunlight falls on the face of mayank who is sleeping on the bed next 2 d window........
nupur turns n luks n mayank n says

N: Mayu........ mayu utho na...... dekho aaj mera pehla din hai aur tum... tum ho ki so rahe ho... meri help karo na... muje kya pata ki tumhare ghar me sabko khane me kya pasand hai......

M: acha kitne log hain humare ghar me???

N: tum ho, ma hai, me hu...

and as she was about to go mayank catches her wrist n pulls her towards him n she falls on him...

N: mayu kya kar rahe ho??

M: ek baat batao tumhe nahi pata muje khane me kya pasand hai?

N: hmmm...... actually tumhe bahar khane me kya pasand hai muje pata hai par gharpe kya khate ho kya pata...

M: acha tumhe nahi pata...

N:nahi....
as she is about to getup she sees an insect on d window n screems n hugs mayu while lying only...

N: mayu.........

M: arre kya hua?

N: wo dekho k..k.. keedaa..... khidki pe....

M: arre wo to bas ek chota sa keeda hai...

N: muje bohot darr lagta hai keedon se...

M: acha waise wo keeda meri setting hai jab tak me nahi bolunga wo nahi jaega... to tum yuhi muje gale laga kar rakho thike...

Nupur hits him on d chest while blushing n gets up

N: chalo jaldi utho aur taiyyar ho jao me nashta banati hu

she leaves d room while mayu goes to take a bath...

she comes bak in sometym but sees mayu is nt there so she keeps d tray on table n sees dat the insect is still on d window...

she shakes d window helter skelter n finally d insect is out of d room...

N: chalo shukar hai...

n she turns n sees mayu standing n smiling at her

N: aise kyu dekh rahe ho??? help to kar nahi sakte na tum...

M: tumhe dekh raha tha ki tum kitni khush ho us keede ko nikaal ke...

N: ha wo to hai aur uske do reasons hai... ek to ki us keede ki jaan bach gayi warna wo dono khidkiyon ke beech aakar mar jata aur dusra ki mera darr nikal gaya...

M: darr nikal gaya???

N: ha nikal gaya...

mayu cums closer to her...

M: nikal gaya???

N: ha... par tum kya kar rahe ho...

mayu is close to nupur n he shouts

M: nupur chipkali

N: aaaa.........
n she hugs mayu...

M: arre tum ne to kaha ki tumhara darr nikal gaya ab kya hua???

nupur slowly parts n says

N: to ye tumhari shararat thi??? mera matlab tha jab tak wo keeda room me tha me darr rhi thi par ab chala gaya to darr nikal gaya...

M: ohhh...

N: acha tumne bataya nhi ki tumhe khane me kya pasand hai???

M: hmmm muje meeha pasand hai...

n he cums close to her lips...

N: meetha thike pehle nasta karlo lunch me meetha mil jaega

M: lunch me???

N: lunch me tym h kitna baaki hai bas 2ghante me to khana lag jaega..l.

n she goes to the kitchen...

N: maa muje kuch meeha banana hai mayu ko khana hai kya banau???

MM: kheer bana lo beta mayu ko bohot pasand hai...

N: thike ma...

she prepares d food n kheer n cums lunch tym... mayank is eating his food n his mom also n nupur is standing...

mayu silently whispers

M: nupur nupur mera meetha???

N: nupur knos wt mayu means bt she says

N: ha meetha na ma mayank ko meetha pass karna...

M: mayu glares at her... he tastes little n says

M: nahi muje nahi chahiye n leaves the hall...

nupur bcomes sad...

MM: nupur beta tum mayu ki fikar mat karo... pr tumne kheer bohut hi tasty banai hai...

nupur smiles fake n says

N: thnq ma

n leaves

she is walking in d corridoor n talking to herself

N: mayu ko shayad kheer pasand nahi aayi... koi baat nahi nxt tym ma se puchke aur achi banaungi...

suddenly some1 pulls her in a room n pins her agains the wall...

N: mayu ye tum kya kar rahe ho...

M: kya kar raha hu...

N: chodo muje muje jana hai...

M: nahi me nahijaane dunga...

N: plz mayu muje pata hai tumhe kheer nahi pasand aayi ab muje jaane do...

M: acha ek baat batao tumne kheer taste ki?

N: nahi

mayu takes a bowl of kheer from d side n takes a spoonful towards nupur's mouth

M: lo khao

N: muje nahi khani

M: mere liye plz

she tastes it n her expression changes

N: kheer to thik bani hai

M:acha

n he has a spoonful of kheer himself

M: ha waakai ab meethi lag rahi hai...

N: par mene to kuch changes nahi kiye...

M: shhh...
he puts his index finger on her lips n den traces d outline of her lips...

nupur understands n she blushes n luks down

N: mayank ye kya kar rahe ho ma aa jaegi...

M: aane do maa ko...ye tumhari saza hai... tumne mera mazaak udane ki koshish ki na... tumhe nahi pata tha me kis meethe ki baat kar raha hu....

N: hmm nahi to...

n she runs away from there.......................

M: ruko to... me tumhe nahi chodunga........... n he also runs behind her.............


Ok guys this was my OS plz do COMMENT n hit the LIKE button...

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sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very cute os dear...loved it........................
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that was very sweet, cute and adorable..just like MAYUR..keep writing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
cute and sweet update.
loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful dera plzz do continue n pplzz pm me 2....👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very sweet nad cute OS
loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice OS. It was cute and sweet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice OS

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
awwwwwwwwwwww....................cho cute...........cho chuwweeet.
mayur s really adorable..........so meetha :D
want more form u.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haha 😆, very cute, i liked it a lot

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