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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

I know yaar..I write too!!Haha..well don't worry you won't face problems finding people ur age..lots of people in the Geet forum ur age or around there!Haha...Please update soon though!

WHAT? which FF? i wanna read. but I read completed FFs mostly as I like to just sit for hours and read .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashish_s2

WHAT? which FF? i wanna read. but I read completed FFs mostly as I like to just sit for hours and read .

Haha..then I really shouldn't tell u about it coz I'm the laziest updater ever but can't help it..
Here's the link : Hum Tum for Hamesha >> http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1461878
Here's the link for the one that has more parts(Yeah,I write two FFs) >> http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1481585
Please do read it and do comment!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
wow prida already fighting
precap is really nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
love it....
cant wait for the nxt update..
thx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi......i just came across....... Nice story although i m maneet fan....... Continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys!!!!!!!! Kashish is back with her bakwas story. Thank you all for commenting. Im so happy ! 😃 Umm ok so here is the next update.
Precap: Maan and Geet ka pehla apna jagda and maaneet episode

Chapter Five

Geet called KS construction and asked for the CEO and was transferred to Maan.

Maan: hello

Geet: hello im from Gujral empire. Is this Mr Saxena?

Maan: oh yes , no this is MSK and ill be handling this project miss damini.

Geet: oh ofcourse. But im Geet Gujral, ill be handling from our side

Both think- gosh something must have happened for these two to ….and look towards their cabin

We then see a split scene of prithvi and damini both thinking about the spark between them earlier. This was the first time another person hadn't drool over them, trying to touch them or give them a compliment or try to flirt. This was new.

Back to Maaneet

Maan: umm how bout we meet tomorrow morning and we can share my office till the project finishes. Geet agreed. They both didn't know that cupid was waiting for them to meet.

Morning>>>>>>>>

Geet arrives at the KS constructions. She asks for the CEO cabin and walks towards it slowly twisting her dupatta between her fingers. It was her first project ever and it was with MSK- he was well known for his entrepreneurial skills and that freaked her out even more.

Geet: hey babaji please please meri madat karna. Please babaji

Geet is finally at his door and she is about to knock when…

Maan has sensed someone there and he thinks its his new secretary as he doesn't expect this Geet to be on time. "get me coffee right now" he goes back to reading his file without even looking at this girl.

Geet jumped in fright. He was so… oh god! Hey babaji!!! She slowly nods her head and walks towards the kitchen if she can find it. She makes coffee and is not sure how much sugar to add. She decides on two. Du cubes choddogi tu meri thara meethi hojayege aur itna khadwa(bitter) nahi rahege hain?. She laughs at her own joke and proceeds towards his office. : aur wese bhi geet, tujhe coffee kyun banana hai-tu toh uski associate hai na, secretary nahi. Uff patane kya samajthe hai aapne aap ko. While walking she hears someone say DD. She goes to pinky(the person who said it) and asks her wat is DD to which she replies dhak dhak. Geet goes inside the cabin. Maan sense her and puts his hand out- she gives the coffee. Their fingers meet and they both feel something. He takes a sip and his anger mounts. He starts to scream

Maan: kisne choda isme 2 cubes of sugar. Dimak nahi hai tumare paas agar nahi janti thi tho kissise puch lethe. And he turned around to see the most beautiful eyes filled with tears. Geet was terrified. No one had ever yelled at her. Maan felt his heart wrench with pain but why- he started walking towards her and she walked backwards and soon met the wall. Maaaahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (me singing with them too.lolmaaahhhhiiiiiiiiiiii and my glass breaks. Oops) he pulls his hands out and brings his finger to hold her one tear. For some reason he couldn't bring himself to wipe it. When he touched her, he felt pure and priviledged. He then snapped out of it. Ummmm.. woh , Geet composed herself too, wat was happening to her . Her anger was now mounting too.

Geet: aap kya samajthe hai aapne aap ko. Pehle tho aapne associate ko coffee banane ko kehthe hai, Geet Gujral ko coffee banane ke liye kehthe aur phir yese chilate hai mujhpe. Maan was shocked- Geet Gujral. She is Geet Gujral ! yeh kya? He was clueless he looked up to be more lost in her eyes with her face in a frown, she looked so cute.

Maan to himself: maan yeh kya hogaya hai tumhe . kabhi bhi ek ladki ko dekhe yeh nahi howa hai tu phir aab. Yeh kya..Geet turned around and a fresh gust of wind flew her duppatta and it landed on Maan's face. He was lost again.(guys don't worry Maan is loyal he wouldn't have an affair with Geet's dupatta.lol) and the other side of the dupatta was stuck to some ornamenty thingy in Maan's office(u know those fake flowers and all) Geet was about to walk off when Maan spoke again

Maan: duppatta , salwar..ummm he didn't noe how to say this and Geet didn't let him either

Geet: tho kya huh? Jst cause apke office mein sab ache modern kapde pehenthe hai tho who ache aur professional hai aur jst kyonki main salwar pehenthi hoon main gawar. Maan was about speak again but we all know geet once she starts no one can stop her.lol Main salwar hi pehenogi, samje aap. Meri sanskar, mere kapde- apko kya hai huh? Aapko koi problem hai tho aap pehenlijiye who short skirts. Maan was shocked. This girl dared to tell MSK, the MSK to wear short skirts

Maan: GEET !!!!!!!!!!! geet stopped and looked at him with widened eyes . He walked towards her and before she could move back, he grabbed her and pulled her close. Main bas yeahi kehrahatha ki tumhara duppatta phas gaya hai- and he looked towards it. Geet looked at the vase. She lowered her eyes. And walked towards it but it wouldn't come out. Maan came from behind and casted his hands over hers, a tinge went down her spine as he inhaled her beautiful scent. The moment had stopped with both capturing the seconds as they stood there looking at eachotehr. MAHIIIIIII!!!!!She finally got it out and they both stood looking the other way.

Maan: tumhare cabin next door organize kiya hai aur main blueprints bejwatha hoon. She looked at him and walked out.

Geet: dii thik hi kehrahathi- arrogant. Yeh DD tho zarror hai par dhak dhak nahin dusht dhanav hai

Precap: ok now that PRIDA and Maaneet have started their love journeys lets move on to shanak. I have something different planned on for these guys.=). This is a Shanak episode next. and the next four updates might shanak but please read it cause this is one of the high points of story, you cant miss it. sooo pleaseeeee readdddddddd😃😃😃😃😃😃

Thank you
=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Hi......i just came across....... Nice story although i m maneet fan....... Continue soon.

then ull love chapter five. by the way where did you get your display picture from. i love it. she soo beautiful
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG guys that was quick- u guys are quick readers or was it that bad that u just skimmed over it? LOL😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Very Nice updates Kashish, please PM me on your updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
hey kashish nice update
loved prida's fight...and pri being the usual dhakkan!
and even maneet..luks like both guys have to bring their tempers down for their gals!
plzz do add me in ur pm list...

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