Emotional Athyachar - The story of Abhiya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pyaar ki ek kahaani suno

The story so far
Pia an Orphan girl arrives to town to attend with her scholarship
It was a dark dark night and having missed the train
She had no alternative but to take through the dark jungle.
What she was unaware of that there was someone..something lurking in the shadows with
her


She recieved a mixed welcome at college
On Arrival she got bashed by
Misha - But Little Pia was no mouse either - She gave as good as she got
and soon she made friends with Misha and Kabir .
Misha the Tom-boy and Khabir The Ladies Man.
The Trio went mountain climbing but Pia's rope broke and she started
falling...falling...falling in to the dark jungle below. Her untimely death was stopped by
The unknown in the midst of the darkness. The Prince of Darkness. He caught her in
his arms and lifted her down again and walked off. Pia was mesmerised...........
Next day a posh car pulled out in the parking lot out side Mount College and
the
dashing boy emerged and all the girls including Pia were BUT
he just walked past all his fans.
Pia found the strangers phone dropped outside his car and made it her business to return it.
So She reached his house and was welcomed by his Mum and Dad
They seemed shocked on seeing her, But The young lad seemed
angry...oops that's his normal expression . HE took her outside and threatned her ...
"I don't ever want to see you here again!" So coldly, Pia was shocked at his lack of gratitude
"What kind of man are you?" She asked.
He replied "The man that you will never get!".
It was decided she will start to dislike him.
But destiny kept bringing them together....... She kept falling and he kept saving her.....UNTIL
shecompletely fell in Love with him ABHAY She promised to unlock his rusty
heart and fill it with her love.
Soon enough the audience know that ABHAY is no ordinary boy, He is a 100 years old and his family want him to stay away form Pia.
This love hate relationship continues and so did the snow.
Pia makes a new enemy DANISH, who is Panchi's fiance, he made Pia's room mate pregnant
Pia has promised to bring his truth out to the world and stop him from
marrying panchi. But Danish is after her blood and ABHAY takes it upon himself to save Pia yet again.
He takes her away and keeps her in his bedroom for the night
and he sleeps infront of the fire - But a nosey Pia slowely creeps up and
removes a picture of a girl under Abhay's pillow and stands in shock The girl in the picture is
identical to her and has long straight hair! On the other side of the picture there is writting reading
'ABHAY LOVES YOU MAITHALI'

That's all for today folks.
This is the first time I have done an EMOTIONAL athyachar for this forum, I hope you like it.
Carisma.
Akka Dosa (Director of story animation)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What do we call this? 😲 Anyway, this was too funny and interesting - you've done a splendid job! I think should kinda make a series outta this, its a veryyyy fine concept! Loved it! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love the way emos are used........write more wid ur super duper emos
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kanky-

What do we call this? 😲 Anyway, this was too funny and interesting - you've done a splendid job! I think should kinda make a series outta this, its a veryyyy fine concept! Loved it! 😆

Thank you. I do these regularly for the Pratigya forum, if you wanna see my work if you see the hyperlink to my gallery you can see the Emotional athyachars and vm's I go. We have called this story telling using emotions emotional athyachar.
It's just a fun way of lighteining up and having a bit of a laugh.
I'm happee that you liked it.
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Luved u're emo's..they'r fab..!!
Do tell me one thing Hw did u knw that Behind Maithili picture it's written I ❤️ Maithili..it wasn't shown in show..??
Did I missed something do reply..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: romaila

love the way emos are used........write more wid ur super duper emos

thank yu - so happee that you likes it. I will try and so them regularly here, as I do these regularly on the PRATIGYA forum, it's become the life and sould over there.
If you wanna see more of my work please visit my gallery - the link is on the signature
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much
I normally make my own twists in them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Luved u're emo's..they'r fab..!!
Do tell me one thing Hw did u knw that Behind Maithili picture it's written I ❤️ Maithili..it wasn't shown in show..??
Did I missed something do reply..

HEHEHEEH, with my emotional athyachars I add my own mirch masala - I try and bring my own twists and turns. Depending on the mood - It's just for fun hehehe, so dun worry u not missed anything., and Thanksa lot for appreciating it.
Edited by carisma2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you. for the whole real story there are always written updates - but with these animations you just get a diff version.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HOW cute!!! keep it up...loved it,loool

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