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Posted: 15 years ago
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guyz i had promised a new poem quite a while ago,sorry i m late couldn get tym but i read ur posts n i m loving this forum
well here is ma new poem,its on a situation that wat a person feels when he/she loses sumthing or sumone special lyk now Aruhi lost trust on Arjun.This situation is very sad n emotional.Similarly Arjun lost Aruhi.
Title : I lost sumthing

i lost sth wich was very dear,

y i lost it??,its really unfair.

i hav been searching it 4 past few days,

4 searching it i applied all my ways.

wen i got it,i was so happy that i went mad,

now wen i hav lost it,i m really sad.

i want to get it back now,

but the problem is how??

there is so much noise wen a glass is broken,

but no one could hear the sound wen i was heartbroken.

i don noe whether i'll get it back or not,

but 1 thing is sure,i'll miss it a lot.

but really wanna c them together soon.
guyz do leave ur comments

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Ovi_Tanni thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi payyal!!!
Great job n i like it...keep it up...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Payal absolutely awesome. Loved it sooooooo much. The words are so beautiful. If only sid and ridz had come together. Thankyou so much Payal!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its good, i liked the feel of this one..
Everyone hears the noise of a glass broken.... But no one even notices when my heart is broken.

Thats so true.... Liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome poem Payal!!!
i just loved it. Bravo!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely poem, payyal! Thanks for sharing and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely Poem And Post Also 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsum n amzain job girl! kp it up!👏
Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful poem Payyal!
The words that you have used are simple but the impact of them are huge. Thanks for sharing with us all! Keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow its nice..i liked it.. 😊

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