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Posted: 14 years ago

ANYONE INTERESTED IN A SHORT UPDATE....

JUST FOR U ALL...WHO HAVE BEEN WANTING IT SO BADLY..
DID'NT WANT TO DISAPPOINT U ALL..SHORT ONE NOW..NEXT ONE KAL,,,
SHOULD I UPDATE OR NOT????
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

ANYONE INTERESTED IN A SHORT UPDATE....

JUST FOR U ALL...WHO HAVE BEEN WANTING IT SO BADLY..
DID'NT WANT TO DISAPPOINT U ALL..SHORT ONE NOW..NEXT ONE KAL,,,
SHOULD I UPDATE OR NOT????


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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes update plz!!
even if its a short one:)
but that means a long one tomorrow!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan,
update yaar......
waiting for the update....
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

muskaan waiting for the update.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muskan...
Abhi short chalega but please kal 1 lonnnngggggg one... :) :)
~Sakshi~
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan plz update it yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zaqxsw

Hey Muskan...

Abhi short chalega but please kal 1 lonnnngggggg one... :) :)
~Sakshi~



noooooo.............we waited so longggggggggggg.......we want longggggggggg update.......cann't wait for tomorrow Lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
r u going to update truly magical as well?????...........
If yes then short one😭😭😭😭😭 bhi chalegaaaaaaa😉😉😆😉😉

😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

~khamoshi~
Part 2

Geet - leking papaji
Papaji - u said u trust me'geet nodded for acceptance.
Geet went back to her room & looked at maans picture. Haan tho kardiya!! pata nahi
Kaise honge, may be he has some one in his life & his family is forcing him into this marriage
Hope he is normal, hoga koi bada businessman with some problem which they are hiding
Uff..how will I find out all this. Papaji ne tho unhe dehk ka hain, aise kuch hota tho he won't
agree for this wedding. Lekin aise kisi se koi shaadi kar sakta hain
she keeps looking at his
picture getting more confused & disturbed.

OFFICE
After sasha leaves maan quickly envelope & takes a long-deep breath in & pulls the snap out slowly, he could just see her eyes & adi came in; he quickly closes the envelope getting frustrated & puts it back in the drawer. Adi briefs him about the meeting which he was about to have & all he could think about was those eyes. Those eyes where so beautiful he thought. He was already
drowning into them. Adi completed his briefing & said sir challen
maan didn't reply.
Adi - sir we are getting late of the meeting
Maan just nodded
He walked lost in those eyes to the meeting. He couldn't follow a word. After the presentation client asked for his views he just looked blank & lost. He cleared his throat & mind. Told adi to look into it. he went to the wash room & washed his face, splashing cold water again & again.
He went back to his cabin & hid the photo far away from his reach. He didn't want to see her, actually he was scared he may just lose himself completely to her without even knowing her answer. He wondered if her eyes were so beautiful then how beautiful she would be. He was already falling for the eyes of the beholder.

MANSION
Daadi received a call from papaji after couple of days.
Papaji - humari taraf se bhi haan hain
Daadi - bhadayee ho
Papaji - aapko bhi
Daadi - main pandit se baat kar ke aapko phone karti hoon
Papaji - ji
Daadi called the pandit ji & looked for a suitable date. Pandit looked for the dates & said next
Suitable date according to their kundali was within 7days & after that only after 2yrs.
Daadi was shocked & wondered if that was possible. She immediately called Handa's
Darji - Namaste ji
Daadi - Namaste, humne pandit se baat ki hain & he says next suitable date is after 7days
& the next one is after 2years. Mujhe kuch samjhe nahi aa raha hain
Darji - let me just discuss this, 7days is really difficult
Daadi - if u want we can have the wedding & all the ceremonies in delhi we can arrange every thing but I don't want to force you. U tell me what is convenient for you all.
Darji half-heartedly - we will call u back
Daadi - umm

Darji , papaji & brij sit & discuss. It was just first alliance they had seen so it was not required to
hurry up. Papaji called their pandit & checked the kundali's again.
Pandit - 36 ke 36 gun milte hain. itni aachi Jodi main ne aaj taak nahi dehki, yah the suitable
Date is after 7days. After that its bad time for their wedding. May be 2yrs.
Major confusion not sure whether to hurry up for the wedding or look for another one
They didn't even have time to decide. They were planning for the wedding only after her
MBA, she still had her exams. She will not be able to prepare herself so soon.
Finally they weighed all the pros & cons & decided to go ahead with the wedding. Papaji
was highly impressed with Maan. He wanted geet to only marry maan no one else, he doubted
he could ever find any one as nice as him ever again.
Papaji called daadi
Papaji - we are fine with it.
Daadi was thrilled & overjoyed. She didn't expect all this to happen so soon.
Daadi called the whole family member & briefed them about the situation.
She prepared for the wedding & got the house decorated already with lights & flowers, she forgot
to update maan. He came back from the office & wondered what was happening

maan in his stern tone - daadi yeh sab kya hain?
Daadi realized she forgot to tell him. She cleared her throat - who aapki shaadi
He had butterfly effect hearing those words. Those eyes were already driving him insane & now
the thought it would be his forever for just making him tickled, excited, nervous & confused
Maan - WHAT?
Daadi ' we spoke to the pandit & found out the next suitable date for ur & geets wedding was
after 7days.
Hearing geet with his name was just driving him to another world. He had never felt anything like this before. It was thrilling & exciting him. Not sure it was this whole wedding thingy or her eyes which was having this effect on him. Whatever it was he just loved it. he just gave a strange look & went to his room. He wanted to see her speak to her, know her better so many things to tell her & know about her but didn't know how to start. More than everything it was the thought those eyes accepted him. He was happy, shy, embarrassed. Already began to dream her around him.

MUMBAI
Geet came back from her college to get the shocking news.
Geet - saat din main shaadi NO WAYS, I definitely need time.
Rano - aur koi date nahi hain, agle do saal thak
Geet - I am ready to wait for 2years. (Interestingly she didn't say look for another person rather was willing to wait for him.. muskan liked her thought)
brij - geet we are leaving in 4days to delhi, shaadi delhi main hain
geet - my friends won't be able to attend my wedding she cried
main ne tho unse baat bhi nahi ki kabhi, aise kaise
papaji - yeh maan ka number hain
rano - aise kaise ladeki phone kar sakti hain
papaji messages maan.. geets number.
he looked at the message & kept looking at the number. He read like 100 times. Wondered to call her or not. Geet looked at his number fed it in her phone & kept playing with the phone.
2 days passed & geet looked upset & not ready for anything. Maan was really happy & didn't know
how to express himself niether did he have any one express himself.
Papaji saw her restlessness but could not help because he didn't want to call being a ladki wale
Daadi was in constant touch preparing for the wedding & booking hotels for them to stay & other
arrangements. Daadi told maan to take care of their tickets.
Maan was not sure how many tickets were required. He told sasha to call & find out.
Then he just decided to call himself. He called on papajis number. Papaji noticed it was maan.
He immediately answered ' I will give to geet one minute.

PRECAP
first call😳
~NEXT PART 3~
OK this is a short one promise another one in the weekend. thanxs a lot for such a warm welcome to khamoshi.. I am speechless...Hope u like it.. please please tell me how you feel
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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