Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07 - Page 12

Both parts were fab

Sookie...

how touching...my girl...i am sure daughters always remain daddy's little girls...

sparks of defiance
finds some credence

in asserting independence
of not taking benevolence

of being out on her own
of charting a course though unknown

Daddy's little girl she would always be
but had to grow up fast and leave thee

Originally posted by: jasw

Loved the choice of words in Choice, Sookie. Too good!

Rush, this was awesome!

" they say a picture says thousand words..here..54 words..creates 25fps motion picture that was for 30 minutes or more"!

👏 to both of you!

thanks jasw...i try like sponge to absorb as much as i can from the master at work taking notes as sit at the knees..gazing in awe and seeking inspiration from Sookie..

Originally posted by: sri_4

Hey sookie*
Its been an era i have been to IF and OMG what i see,,
This one absolutely left me speechless..
U always surprise me with u r creativity dear...and now geet n 54 words combination seems to be speaking more than it seems to be..the whole story of geet..as someone pointed out..the whole journey of geet !!
Vrushali (hope i got u r name right dear..)..u write toooooo good :) ..ur poems they just compliments to sookie's verse and makes it more interesting to read..i have to say i am looking forward to read your work soon..god bless :)

Loved this thread..
Good wishes to both of you....
Sri:-)

P.S:Sookie..Hope to catch up u r stories i missed soon and thanks a lot for all ur PM's :)

Hey Sri...

you got it right... and thanks...i do write...or at least used to and have a few threads going...

you will find it all under Wishful Thinking 2 if interested...

Originally posted by: amrita2010

I wish I could find a better way to appreciate this....to show my love for this....May be I shall find 54 words to comment on these soon

Its really glad to experience the journey with both of you, right from the beginning...

It feels more like that they are happening right in front of my eyes

Great work by both of you!

Thanks Amrita...

it had been a lovely journey..

now the road is a little bumpy..
but i am holding on to my seat...

daddy's little girls have to grow up, whether they like it or not

9. Jailbird

Her fists are bruised from violent slamming on the door and voice hoarse after pleading the elders to release her from incarceration. In the war where principles clash, she prefers to be in no man's land. But alas!

Using all her might, she throws.

One prayer. One wish. One hope.

Her veil finds him.

Next part updated - Jailbird (II)