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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

That was brilliant Sookie 👏

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Sri

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Hey sookie *

Yes..it been a very long time and i have to accept i missed IF n so did i missed u r stories..(n VM's too)!!
Loved the previous one -daddy and now jail bird..it seems to add a whole new point of view to me..now when i remember those episodes (or scenes) and relate to your words!!
They are so beautifully put together..loved it..totally..

Vrushali ....loved u r verses as usual..
N yes i got the link of "Wishful Thinking 2"..will soon try to explore it.......well for one i did read vinu ki niha..and it was too good ..(to be true in reality 😉)..hehe!!

Good wishes,,
Sri:-)

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

both the parts were brilliant..................

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anu.happy4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

I am having a difficulty in choosing which is the best written piece here. Every time I read a new one, I think, "This is my favourite!" and the next one is even better. And this is how i reached Jailbird. For now, that's my favourite! 👍🏼It was perfect in the way the scene was described.

BTW, an afterthought..., are you planning to continue the story and finish it in your own way? 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

These little snippets you write are so poignant...
It's the perfect length for me, when I don't have much time but want to read!

Thanks for all the PMs so far and for the updates! ⭐️

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

10. Jailed (II)

The profile of the owner of the ocher veil which he held in his hands, stood behind bars of a window her eyes clearly reflecting tarnished familial allegiance. She wasn't a pet rabbit which was cared for in a coop anymore.

She was an angry tigress held against her will in a cage.

Next part updated - Tears

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

My apologies for not responding to you guys today. Running a little short of time these days.

When things look brighter and better, I will come back and respond to each and everyone of you. Till then, I apologize.

Have a nice day everyone! See you tomorrow with a new update!

Sookie

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

once again a nice one................

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#139

Ah! wonderful combination of emotions and rage....

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#140

Sookie Sookie..what an imagery...

warring with himself he looked up
between lies and half truths hooked up

a contradiction of helpless and defiance
he smirked at the look of arrogance

did she need help or was she helping him
to lead to a place that could be just a whim

the savior needed some saving after all
in his arms he held her but captured in her fall

her tears moved him, her fear instilled rage
he fought her battles only to lose himself in her gaze

fate, destiny or sheer coincidence
he was entwined with her needed no further evidence

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