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I am steppinmg out.. will come back and check !!
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hey jst wait for few minutes let me finish last part plz
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~deewangi~
part 5

Next day she went to pick him up at 8.15am, maan was early he came at 8.10am & hid behind the wall & kept watching her until 8.25am & then came out. She smiled delightfully. They pedaled
together to the school. She was never out of topic to talk to him. He never said anything
to her just caught her glance every now & then, without her noticing that. She locked their
cycles together again, after her left to his class.

In the class, she summited her HW in the class. Teacher checked her work & told her how could
she make such silly mistake root 2 multiplied by root 2 is 2 not root 4. Geet disagreed & kept
quiet. Teacher took so much of interest in her because she was the topper in her class & she
making such mistakes was a shocker interestingly she doesn't agree to it.

She waited for him under the same tree during the lunch break. They shared their tiffin.
actually she snatched his tiffin box checked what he had & made him eat hers.
He never complained. She would always kiss him a good bye before they break to their classes.
She waited for him at the cycle stand with a chocolate just to say a bye.
Then they meet up near the karate class, ride back together to maans home for the tuition session. It was more of a drooling session. She watched him very evidently & he watched her secretly. This was a great thing between them. He never spoke, never refused her for anything just enjoyed her mere presence. It's been more than a month now.

Maan continued to perform horribly. Daadi was getting worried about his studies & his admission in the new place. They had their pooja break for 10days. His karate classes where moved to morning time for those days only. Geet went with him for the class waited for him to finish & came back with him. It was 12noon they were coming back from the class. Maans peers noticed them getting back together they just teased geet from far away. Geet & maan ignored it.
Peer 1 ' why are u with that guy
Geet didn't even bother looking at him
Peer 2 ' why don't u talk to us, humbhi to tumare senior hain
Maan gave a stern look to him
Peer 2 ' maan u definitely can't handle her, why are u even with her.
Peer 3 ' actually to think about it, the only good thing about u is ur GF.
Maan begins to pedal faster without noticing where geet was
Peer 1 ' why are running away, school main to haat uttah raha tha, aab kya huwa
Geet stops the cycle at once - he will not fight with you just because u want him to fight.
Peer 2 ' he can't fight
Geet ' he need not fight
Maan had moved away from them. He just realized geet was still arguing with them there.
He goes back wondering what was she upto.
Peer 2 - just accept it he is a losser
Geet - Maan Singh khurana cannot be a losser
Maan just heard what she said & wondered yah pagal hain kya, mujhe samjhe thi kya hain
Geet - Maan fights only if he wants to fight, not because u provoke him to fight.
Maan probably doesn't even remember when he was called Maan Singh Khurana last.
His peers just gave up & left from there teasing her.
Maan & geet reach home.
Maan pushes her inside the room & locks the door - tum mujhe samjthi kya ho
Geet was shocked with his rude behavior.
Maan ' tumhara bus chalta u would got me beaten up by those guys today
U don't even know me well enough. Why do u just talk anything about me.
we just met like a month ago
geet with tears in her eyes ' I know u for 2 months before that.
Maan just looked away wondering how she knows him
Geet - I first saw u in the karate tournament
Maan was little shocked - the one I lost.. mind it I LOST
Geet - u lost because the sir told u to fight defensive & u were too fast for defensive
had he placed u as an attacker u would have definitely won.
Maan liked her confidence in him - u know karate
Geet - I just learned the basics phir mera haat fracture hogaya to mama na discontinue kava diya.
Maan - still u don't know me .. so stop all this nonsense.
Geet - it took me 1month to find out where u practiced karate & then me & my friends
followed u every day for a month until we met in the school. I know every thing about u.
Maan - but why do u have to follow me
Geet hugged him crying because I love you. He could never see her cry that too because of him
was unbearable. Her hug had magical effect on him. He began to enjoy the hug , more physically also. But still never held her back. His hands always lay low on his
sides. The hug always left him wet & panting & craving for more. He probably began to realize
her effect on him now. Another month passed with them being together.

Pre-boards preparation holidays.
Geet all tensed & worried - will u be able to continue the tuition
Maan did'nt like that question - why
Geet - aapke pre-boards hain na
Maan smirked - so u had enough of my tuition now
Geet - aap aise kyun bol rahen ho.
Maan looked away getting annoyed
Geet ' ridz's sis is having her pre-boards, because of that we are not even allowed to go to
Ridz's place, she can come out to meet us but we can't to their house until her boards.
Maan still angry how could she even think of missing their drooling session? But could never shouted at her in anger on her except that one day. After that he never did show his anger.
Geet smiled delightfully ' so I can meet u every day
Maan looked in her eyes & wondered its been 2months they meet every day & still she
has the same delight & happiness in her eyes when she looks at him. She still always wants to
be with him, marry him, meet him, give him chocolate. She still talks endlessly about every thing.
she really cared for him. she kind of began to be part of him unknowingly. He couldn't think of
a day without her.


PRECAP
pre-board results😲

~NEXT PART 6~
hope u like deewangi...please please do comment
I enjoy reading ur comments makes my day..& makes me write more..
see I started khamoshi..thanxs to u all...
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yahoooooooooo!!!

I am first.

wonderful update muskan. Our poor Maan. But i hate to see Maan so weak. Please make him strong. I have a feeling that you are going to take a leap and after the leap, we are going to see a different Maan.
Loved the update
Edited by hasiii - 14 years ago
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part 4 : Oh how swee😍😍😍😍😍t i jst want to read more nd more ........dis teenage lovestory

Geet is crazy she reached his home no actually bedroom .........

She is tokgn abt marriage😲 😲 maan was shocked why din he luf🤣🤣

Maths tuition...... liar maan uski maths na bigad de🤣 🤣🤣

huh .... she is really deewani apt name for ur this ff wow he is collecting her memories ,does he lyk her ?? i knw no but surely will

this was so lovely ........just adorable 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
awww geet and maan are so cute... i want maan to be cleaver
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plzzzzzzzzz maaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn koooooooooo passsssssssss karva dooooooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
so this is how she saw him first
she actually understands him better than he himself does
loved it
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di...aap kau hain??u heard it right...!! i mean u saw it right!!
aap kaun hain??
I mean aap kaunse planet see aaye ho??
Itne saare F's and everything written so beautifully...!!
Aap khud ke competition ho...First i liked truly magical but now i like deewangi more than that n now khamoshi...!!Arey baap e...how can u write like this Di??
Plz plz do continue soon!!

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago
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Part 5 :Oh toh maan drools over too❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Geet - Maan Singh khurana cannot be a losser
Maan just heard what she said & wondered yah pagal hain kya, mujhe samjhe thi kya hain

Geet - aapke pre-boards hain na
Maan smirked - so u had enough of my tuition now first time he replied her properly 😊😊😊😊😊

Geet - Maan Singh khurana cannot be a losser just loved it
Maan still angry how could she even think of missing their drooling session?

Why is he so quite quite geet is fida over him haan .........jst want to see geet changing maan completely .....

Loved it , it is really so sweet nd adorable .........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

PRECAP
pre-board results
hope maan scores well this time ....nt so well bt expct a little progressed result 😊

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