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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
One word Amrita....BEAUTIFUL!!!!
I really enjoyed reading that. You've written it so well......with grace and decorum!!!!

There was romance and passion in every word.....10 out of 10 hun!!!

👏👏

I have three words, Zeba...AGL....

thanks for the beautiful comment, me loving it and I'm so glad that you keep on reading and commenting on all my OS....means alot to me :)))

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: shalini_s
you too Amrita.. worrying abt the TRPs... LOL...
btw, a good one...

Shalini, there is nothing we can do without TRPs nowadays....lol

Thanks for the comment :)

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: rbo_fan
@ amrita....haven't I already told you that you are simply Awesome babes!!....the way you write....one can actually feel the emotions.....
Kudos.......!!!
and give me a break.........LOL.....one of the best FF /OS writers talking about TRPs......!!!!...ppl will request you, plead to you, force you, push you......and may in fact blackmail you into writing them if you ever stop doing it.......!!!...ROFL...!!

ahhh...you didn't tell me😭...just kidding babes

Kit Kat kaao aur break lagaaooo....My Hindi is so broken😆😆😆

Supari lene ka damki mat de mere ko, bachaaaoooooo....

Thanks for the sweet comment babes...you lit my day :)))

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 15 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: amrita2010
Together with the gentleness that matched the desires, they travelled up into the heavens, which was a place just for them, only for them. Like an incomplete puzzle that was completed after so many years, they danced together to the song that was not hearable to the rest of the souls enjoying the night's sleep.

Amrita darling...a beautifu piece indeed 😃and loved loved it to bits👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏 especially the end...it was so perfect in describing Shanak...and ....you know what...😉😛😳😆 😆😆😆 I mant Love dear....😉😆😆😆😆

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: kubare

Amrita darling...a beautifu piece indeed 😃and loved loved it to bits👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏 especially the end...it was so perfect in describing Shanak...and ....you know what...😉😛😳😆 😆😆😆 I mant Love dear....😉😆😆😆😆

Krishna,....AGL....I was waiting for your comment and finally you have come with it😛😛😛

I know what you meant dear, only you and I think of such things here....lol....and when gals who see any of my posts they run away saying now the takurain, or the besharmi gang leader has come or something like that😆😆😆But I always have my motto *innocent muh and mind* in front of me all the time

Thanks alot for the sweet comment :)))) It means alot to me

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 15 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: amrita2010

Krishna,....AGL....I was waiting for your comment and finally you have come with it😛😛😛

I know what you meant dear, only you and I think of such things here....lol....and when gals who see any of my posts they run away saying now the takurain, or the besharmi gang leader has come or something like that😆😆😆But I always have my motto *innocent muh and mind* in front of me all the time

Thanks alot for the sweet comment :)))) It means alot to me

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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ashwini

@raparthidolly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#397

i like the moon light scene

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#398

Colours of life

Shaan pushed the gate with both of his hands and waited outside for a minute or two to decide whether he should enter the house or not. He knew that he could not stay away from his family and his wife for so long, so he took one slow step toward the house that looked more like a mansion, which has been coated with the colors beige and ivory. A sad smiled curved onto his lips while watching the glowing colors on the walls, but it neither symbolized anything like the people who live in the house.

He sat on the edge of the porch silently to think about his family, his wife and his life. The sky turned into gray color and the blowing wind became harsh, scattering the leaves and dust all around. The calmness he enjoyed a while before was now diffused into insignificance and it seemed that the tempest would take over in no time. The innocent ambience was overshadowed by that of a vile more like his life. The clouds roared for one last time reminding him to seek shelter for him, but he remained there unaffected and stubborn.

He looked at the brownish-orange colored leaves that get covered with dust and water, some of them got even buried and he drew conclusions on them. "Weak" an inner voice from him spoke out loud enough for just him to hear it as he observed the leaves getting buried in the dust. With an accusation in his mind he looked at the huge tree just in front him, which was dancing with the green and fresh leaves in the rain but it never bemoaned on its fallen leaves. He continued watching the leaves on the ground once and then at the tree after that, before comprehending what he witnessed. It is life, the color of life changes in every single second, whether he is aware of it or not, he only needed to do is that to avoid being among the group of the leaves that got buried with dust and water.

Khanak sat beside him unlike him, she was calm but worried by seeing Shaan like that; his face was an array of a mixture of emotions and feelings still they were quite concealed for her to make the true meaning of them. There were like strangers to the viewers as there was a dead silence lingered among them for a while, as the downpour too had ceded washing away all the dust from the surrounding like Shaan's shadowed mind. She spoke out of the blue "Shantanu, don't you think that we need to go inside?" he kept quiet not even bothering to look at her for a while, still eyeing at the leaves on the ground; he was still thinking about his life. He knew it was better to answer her, "Khanak, you go, I'm coming" he murmured without even looking at her and she rose onto her feet like an obedient child.

He then took out the ten rupee note out of his pocket and smiled at it thankfully, for showing him light when he was in the dark and for reminding him that he was not alone but Khanak is also with him. With a quick jerk, he stood from the porch and ran into the house, ignoring his dad calling him for a talk for a while. He stopped by the door searching for words that he has to say to his wife, with him he behaved harsh the previous night.

Shaan peeped into the room and saw it empty; he ran towards his dresser, took out his note book and wrote a small note for his wife.

"Khanak,

We are invited to a very important function tonight, just you and me. Please be ready by 7.30pm.

Shantanu"

Khanak read the note several times, knowing that Shaan wasn't mad at her at all, but he might be too tired the previous night to behave so awkwardly.

Khanak was putting on her earrings when Shaan walked into the room just to check on her, he was stunned when he saw her embraced in a golden salwar suit. She sparkled like a star in the golden outfit as it was perfect on her, and she looked more beautiful when she fought against the earring for not being under her control. Shaan lifted his hands to help her with the earrings, their hands brushed against each other sending a wave of current inside them. "Beautiful" Shaan whispered into her ears after putting the earrings onto her ears, while looking at their reflections through the mirror.

"Let's go" Shaan offered his hand to her and she placed hers on top of his, he twined it with his hand and headed towards downstairs. Their sight got caught of Sunil who was sitting on the couch in the living room; a grin appeared on his face seeing Shaan and Khanak going out together.

"Excuse me Khanak, I think I need to go to the washroom" Shaan rose from his chair, leaving his already shocked wife alone and walked towards the washroom. Khanak wondered about why Shaan lied to her by telling that they were to attend an important function, but smiled at his way of surprising her. "Ladies and gentle men" it was Shaan's voice, Khanak could identify it among the millions, she turned to look at the man standing in the middle of the restaurant, with a microphone on his hand. He was looking at her, smiling with the most beautiful smile ever, she too smiled back at him, lowered her gaze with her cheeks turning to red in color.

Shaan continued "I know I have been such a fool not to realize the unconditional love my wife has for me, I just want to say sorry to her. I'm sorry Khanak, please forgive me" he reached out his hand for her to hold onto it, and the people in the restaurant stared at her pleading her to accept him and forgive him. Khanak rose from her chair, she took one slow step towards Shaan and then the other, until she could reach her hands to touch his. Shaan held onto her hand tightly and pulled her into him, for which she twirled and landed her head on his shoulders.

Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago

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@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#399

beautiful beautiful beautiful

totally heart wrenching n pure
loved it to bits

ur association wid the wrds is as always the best
superbly written

love u amrita n missed u very very very very very much🤗🤗🤗

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
beautiful beautiful beautiful

totally heart wrenching n pure
loved it to bits

ur association wid the wrds is as always the best
superbly written

love u amrita n missed u very very very very very much🤗🤗🤗

Thank you so much Karishma....

Your words mean alot to me :)

My lappie crashed down, and still cannot use emos , coz I have problems with that too...lol

Missed you too....love you loads ....*hugs*