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Posted: 14 years ago
Where are ya? I miss your updates today :-{
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan
hoping u are o.k
if you are under the weather please take care of urself.
and if ur are celebrating something then enjoy ....
missing ur updates and wondering if u r doing fine ????

luv yah
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG THATS MAANS i mean GC DOG???? Its SO UGLY🤣 sox i only love puppy :D even thats ugly lol. sox
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 38


geet - raji ka pet
maan - and u named him MAAN
he was angry but did'nt know what to say
geet - actually bro got maan last month & at that time
I was quite pissed off with that guy u remember..aur yeh bahut naughty bhi tha
humesha mera room main aakar kuch na kuch karab karta tha so I named in maan
maan gave up that she will ever like his name
geet - lekin now i love maan
maan cuffed
geet - sachi main maan bahut sweet hain, maan mujhe bahut pyar karta hain
maan - so to hain(naam ka asar hain shayad...maan geet se pyar to karegha hi)
geet - maan to kabhi kabhi mera saat he sota hain
maan mumered how I wish!!!
geet - mujhe nahi pata tha main maan se itna pyar karongi
maan - mujhe bhi kanha pata tha
geet - aap yeh sab kya bol rahe ho
maan cleared his throat
geet - I really love maan
maan - enough of that dogy now
geet - dare u say anything about my Maan & turned her face
maan - OK baba maan sirf tumhara hain bus (smiling iwardly)
geet - nahi actually woh raji ka hain, I wish mera hota
maan mumered jo hain, uski to kadar nahi hain mam ko
geet - BTW what are u wearing tomorrow
maan - not decided yet
geet - I am planning to pick a dress from the mall
maan - aacha mera liya matching shirt le lena
geet - umm, I will pick u in the evening shirt ke saat
maan - umm
geet - good night
maan - sweet dreams
maan mumered I really need to tell her my Name. Bahut hagaya kal ball main.

next day geet picked the dress & his shirt. she got ready & went to his place

Maan was getting ready
dev - bro aap kanhi ja rahe ho
maan - umm
dev - kanha?
maan - naval ball
dev he started laughing loud maan shot him a stirn look
dev - bro u realize u can't go there alone right
geet barges in his room - woh akela thodi ja rahen hain, mera saat ja rahen hain

dev checks her out with his jaws drop open, bubbly sparkling with joy & the red dress
untill her knews made her look sizzling. maan wipsers moo band kar
dev clears his throat - bro yeh aapki date hain
geet opens a deep red shirt & holds it for maan - socho tho GEET HANDA inki date
maan slips his hand in the shirt. dev smiled at maan's plight
maan moves on to wear his coat & combs his hair
geet - waise to mujhe nahi pata tha inka itna hot hot brother hain
dev totally flattered
geet checking on maans collar - pata hota to aap ko hi ball ki liya poch thi,
lekin kya karoon geet to phas gaye is bachan ke chakar main
, maan smiled
she pulled his cheeks - isi smile ke chakar main pasi hoon
dev - bro smiles??? I need to see that
geet pulls out her phone yeh dehko inki smile aur yeh suno inki hasi
maan was embarrassed - challen
dev - ek min bro I really need to show this to daadi ma
maan - abhi nahi dev we are getting late
geet - bye
dev - BTW I am dev
geet smiled & slipped her hand around maan - nice meeting u

maan opened the door for geet.
geet - itna formal hone ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hain
maan - aachi lag rahi ho
geet blushed - now u are making me concious
maan loved to see that feminine tinch in her, very rare to see like his smile
the red shade to her cheeks just merges with her red dress.
geet - waise aap bhi teehk teehk lag rahe ho
maan mumered Maan Singh Khurana teehk teehk...only she can make me feel like this


Naval Ball with the word Naval in its title made the notion of lighting the night the centerpiece of the event. The first bit was the timely cooperation from nature-as dusk approached, the rainy skies cleared to reveal the full moon. setting in the sky in the deepest shades of blue, probably they planned the party on a full moon day. The benefactor tables surrounding the pool glowed with the soft light from hundreds of votive candles . set on their surfaces. The blue tablecloths, umbrellas, garden flowers,the elgant dresses of the ladies and water reflected light in every direction. This kind of romance makes every one feel good. As they walked in togather the votive-lit lanterns skimming the surface of the pool were repeated ingound. and lighting in the path from the entrance to the event, to its center. the whole walk was creating an special feel in them. She slipped in her fingers into his as their visual gears shifted from their every day landscape to this specially made and momentary landscape. This transition just began to build anticipation for the this special night, tickling their senses, evoking forbidden desires.
they meet up with mukti & prem.
prem - this place is so romantic
geet holding maan tighter - yah
prem - how do u always manage to get the passes
geet smiles
armaan comes with ridz & introduces them
geet - fianally we get to meet u
ridz wondered
armaan rolled his eyes
geet - nahi actually we keep on hearing about u , atul, muskan, rahul
ridz smiled
armaan thanked her to have managed the situation & not spill the beans

they all move near the bar & have their drinks
mukti kept a watch on prems drink & armaan was being nice drinking coke
music began to play with every one hitting the dance floor
prem pulled mukti to the dance floor, ridz was sweet enough to oblige to armaans
request. geet mumered yehlo sab log dance kar rahen hain & looked at maan
he sat & silents sipped his drink & smiled at her. agar kisi ko pata challenga ki
GEET HANDA ka BF dance nahi karsakta to..chi chi babji yeh kya kar rahe ho mera saat
main kisi aur ke saat dance bhi nahi kar sakti, itna gussa karega ki pata nahi
kanha phasadiya mujhe, pata nahi mujhe bhi kya padi thi puri duniya main inhe hi
mera BF man na tha. music changes to a very tempting pumping number
she moves really close to him very tempted to dance. looks at him & gives a weak smile
maan very well knew what was bothering her, he just played along to see her reaction
geet - aacha music hain na
maan - it is too loud & noisy
geet mumered inko dance ke liya poch na to bhansa ke saamne been bajana, uff & turns to leave
music changes to a soft number, maan pulls her back & slips his hand around her waist
she was shocked beyound words & rested her hand on his and turned her head side ways to meet his graze to read his intentions. he took her other hand into his right hand & moved a along the music. his touch was driving her into another world she rested her head tilting it backward on his shoulder, he turned her in a jerk to face him she fluttered her eyes & looked at him musmerized, he smiled & winked at her and turned around hold her by waist & one hand holding her palms in his she was totally floored when he lifted her & turned around, he let her down gracefuly & swinged her away & pulled her closer - aise kya dehk rahi ho
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjunNYYPyWc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

she was speechless drooling over his moves & she was effortlessly moving with
his touch. she wondered how gracefully he turned her around & tamed her to move along
she loved this contradicting feeling of both his strength & softness.
his dominance was evoking her desire to be more in his arms & she never felt this way
ever before. maan was so confident with his lady love in his arms. every move just
depicted his feeling for her. his unsaid, unasked, ownership on hers. he did'nt
even once took his eyes off her. he was so much in control of every move of theirs
he finally lifted her with the last line & turned. rising her into a world of dream totaly
magical & slowly sank her feet finally rest on the floor. she rested her head on his
chest feeling his strong, muscular chest. she could feel her envolped in his
warm scent seducing her every nerve. she hugged him involuteraly. music changed to
a still softer music. they remained in eachothers arm moving soft closer steps

precap
geet - hope u are not proposing me.....OOPS

VM CREDIT utubebroad1. Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well. Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago



update dear

maan - anything related to u is of interest to me crosses his hand over his chest

maan - kya karlogi tum
geet - I will not talk to u
maan smiles
geet she looks at his smile almost melting down
maan - tum mujhse baat bina kiya nahi rah sakti
geet - haan nahi rah sakti

geet - bachan u are the one who did'nt meet me in the morning. I did'nt even get
angry at u...
he held her arms - main tumse nahi mila iska matlab tum kisi aur ke saat
ball main jaavoghi


maan pulls her closer - ek taraf mujhe aapna BF kahti ho, aur ek taraf kah thi
ho u don't have a partner???? hmmmmmmmmmmmmm maan u r tooooo good


maan - tumhare liya kuch bhi karsakta hoon, I don't think I need to keep reminding u
that. I thought we knew each other little more than that


geet - itna attitude mat dikavo, warna I will go with rahul
maan stops the car at once with a sudden break - tum sirf meri GF ho, aur sirf
mere saat javogi samjhi tum.

geet - possessive..ummm..lekin mujhe pasand hain

geet runing around - maan out out of my room now
maan looked around checking where he was
geet shouted - raji aapne maan ko yanha se le ja abhi
maan nahi ...raji ka maan...NO NO...geet ka maan
maan - tum yeh sab kya bol rahi ho
geet - ek min, love u maan ummanh & locks her door
maan dead...falls on his bed..thud😍

maan snaps out - woh maan sab kya tha????
geet - raji ka pet doggy








where is todayz update

waiting for next






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Posted: 14 years ago
yeye...iam the first one to comment!!!!i will read and write on ur update...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice update
waited d whole day for this update &hope he will surely propose her realllyyyyyy soonnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Before I read your update, I want to wish you a very happy Eid Day.

Eid Mubarak Muskan !!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
waoooooo update a gya .

baqi comments parhne k baad





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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

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