Zee's Oneshot- I'm In Love... - Page 4

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

WOW! 😲 That's can all i can say right now!

I swear u surprise me each time with the way u write each part and portray the scenes, emotions and actions, so intense and beautiful!
That was truly magical! So hot! Loved reading it..i've got gooseumps all over my body now 😆

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hi zeee...i just read this OS

its really amazing!!

u described it really beautifully

great work

loved it!!!

hope 2 see ur other staff soon

mmmuuuaahh

Originally posted by: Barbie3143

Zahra yaar.. kya kahu .. very very very nice .. and yes lil bit x-rated. i luv it.. oo 16 year se jayada hu to i can hav more then that .... 1 request ..
i needed magnifying glass to read that .. plz use bigger size if lettering he he he hugs. and kiss.. thanks ..

ok im confused - was maan imaging the kissing part :s i think soo ehh lol but that was hot! can't wait to read more :)