OMG.. OMG OMFG!. duuuude, why on earth has IF not invented a "love" button.. that is one ... 😍 😍 😍 oneshot!
i couldnt believe the beautiful closeness between maneet - hayyyyye IF ONLY that would happen.. even if it wasss maans little thought!! damn i love the way u broke maan's amazing fantasy with geet asking for a match stick.. i was like hain??? o nooooooo not real??? geeeeet!!!! lol
love the way the u stayed true to their characters.. and uffffffff absolutely love this scenario u created!!! just love it...!!! maneet onscreen moments make me super hyper and this has just been a beautiful addition!!!
aaahhh SUPER HAWTT!!!! lovvvvvvvvvvvvve it!!!! wonderfully and definitely very very very well written! if this was just one part of a maneet novel, i would buy the book just to read this over and over again! pleeeeeease defo continue writing more!!!!
Saz
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