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Posted: 14 years ago
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It is the college love story. First Day of the college and Manav was talking with his friends. Suddenly he heard someone laughing.
He turns behind.
Long hairs, big eyes and innocent face. That was what he saw.
Tarun: Manav

Manav is lost.
Tarun shakes him and he comes to senses.
Tarun: Oye ki dekh raha hai yaar?
Manav: Wo ladki kaun hai?
Tarun: kya baat hai sirji, tu kab se ladkiyo ko dekhna chalu ho gaya.
Manav: Usme kuch baat hai
Tarun: hmm baat to hai, bohot mast figure hai uska
Manav: Tu sudhar nahin sakta

Manav in his hostel room. His friends are there too.

Satish: oye isko kya ho gaya?
Tarun: kya bolu, ladki k khayalo mein khoya hai

Manav: us mein kuch baat hai.
Satish: Oye to ja aur dosti kar.

Next day in library.
Manav sees that girl again and thinks that he is going to talk to her today at any cost.

He goes towards her but say his bad luck or good luck that he slips on floor and falls directly on her.
He quickly gets up aur apna haath aage badhata hai. Magar woh khud uth jaati hai.

Manav: Sorry.
Girl : its ok.
Manav: mera naam manav hai aur aapka?
Girl: Archana
Archana: Acha main chalti hun.

She goes and manav keeps looking at her.

Its raining outside. Manav sees that Archana is outside. He goes behind her.

Archana: Tum yahan aise?
Manav: Hi. Wo mujhe kaam tha.
Archana: magar aise?
Manav checks whether he is wearing everything or not.
Manav: kyun?
Archana: baarish ho rahi hai. Where is your umbrella ?
Manav: baarish?
Then he realises its raining.
Archana: Koi baat nahn. Jaldi se mere umbrella k neeche aa jao.
Manav: wo mujhe pata nahn chala. May i say something ?
Archana: kya?
Manav: Will you be my friend?
Archana: hmmm ok.
Then they talk to each other about their families and etc etc.
Archana: ok mr. Manav, main chalti hun. Tumhe waise kaam kya tha?
Manav: kaam? Mujhe yaad nahn
Archana laughs and says tum pagal ho.
Archana: ok then . Bye
Manav: Bye

After that both of them grew more friendly and became lot closer and very very nice friend.

Manav: Tarun, aaj main use propose karunga.
Tarun: Mubaraka yaar. All the very best.
Manav: Thanks yaar. I need it.

In a restaurant
Manav: I want to say some thing.
Archana: bolo
Manav: I LOVE YOU
Archana is frozed listening to this.
Archana: What are you saying ? Tumhara dimag to thik hai?
Manav: main tumhe pehle din se chahta hun
Archana: lekin main sirf tumhe dost samajhti hun. You have hurt me a lot by saying this.

She goes away from there.
Manav is left alone there. All his dreams seemed shattered.

Tarun: chor yaar. Tu 15 dino se aise chup chap baitha hai. Bhul ja usko. Aur achi ladkiyan hain yaar.
Manav: main sirf usse pyar karta hun.
He then starts smoking.

One day Archana comes to talk to Manav.
Archana: Dekho Manav, main sirf tumhe dost manti hun aur usse zyada ki umeed mat rakhna. I want you as my friend but. Actually my sister ran away from house with her love because dad was not in favour of her love as he is against it. But after some time her lover left her aur uske baad didi ne suicide kar li. From that day nor can i love neither I can go against my family.
Manav : koi nahn, main dost ban kar rahunga magar ek din tum meri pyar ko samjhogi.
He smiles.
Archana: tum pagal ho. Waise kal tera bday hai na. Bol kya gift chahye?
Manav: One night masti with me.
Archana: what?
Manav: please please please.
Archana: Ok.

At night 12 o clock.
Archana comes outside. Manav is waiting there.
Archana: Happy Birthday.
Manav: Thanks.
Then both of them go to disco.
Archana: why are you not dancing ?
Manav: mujhe dance nahn aata.
Archana: main sikha deti hun.
Then they dance with each other. After that they watch a movie.
At 5 am.
Archana falls asleep at Manavs arms.
Manav: archu utho. Hostel gate khul gaya hoga. Wapas chalo.

Then they go back to their hostel rooms.

In lectures
Both Manav archana are feeling sleepy. Manav is asleep completely.
Lecturer : Manav
Tarun: Manav uth
Lecturer : why are you sleeping ?
Manav: i was not able to sleep whole night.
Lecturer: why ?
Manav: i was taking care of my friend Tarun.
Tarun stares.
Lecturer : Tarun ko kya hua tha?
Manav gets confused and says SIR LOOSE MOTION.
Whole class starts laughing.

Tarun: kyun sale? Mujhe kyun phasaya?
Manav: sorry dude. Kuch samajh nahn aaya.

In this way both Manav Archana start getting more closer and closer.

1 month before last Day of college(AROUND AFTER 3 AND HALF YEARS)
Manav: Ab toh tum mujhse pyar karti ho na?
Archana: main tumse pyar nahn karti.
Manav: ye kya bachpana hai. Agar tum mujhse pyar nahn karti toh tumhari ankhein neeche nahn hoti
In this way their fight grows and Archana decides she will not talk to him and so does Manav.

Last day of college
Both of them see each other and they move on without saying anything.
Manav: yar tarun, tu sahi tha.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tarun: chor yaar.
Manav: ladki to aayegi jayegi, par tere jaisa dost hamesha sath rahega
Tarun: tuney akhri koshish ki?
Manav: chor yaar. Chal main zara bahar ghum kar aata hun. Tu chalega?
Tarun: Later. Actually abhi thoda kaam hai.
Manav: koi nahn. Main bas abhi gaya aur abhi aaya. BYE.
Tarun: Bye toh aise keh raha jaise kitni dur ja raha ho. Chal jaldi aana.
Manav: hmm

Manav is sitting in a local bus. A suspicious man comes and sits besides him. After some time he leaves the bus. Manav realises that man left his bag. He opens his bag and sees bombs. He is shocked.

Tarun sees news that there has been serial blasts around the city . He is worried about Manav. He calls him but no one responds. After some time he gets call from Manavs number. He picks up and is shocked.

College main hall.
He sees Manavs body lying down and Archana is crying and sitting besides him holding his hand. Police inspector comes and gives him Manavs mobile saying that his mobile was recovered and some how it was not damaged. Tarun takes the mobile and sees 1 message. He opens it and reads it MAINE TUMHE BHULANE KI BOHOT KOSHISH KI MAGAR MAIN JITNA BHULNE KI KOSHSH KARTI HUN, UTNI YAAD AATI HAI. I CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU. YOU WERE RIGHT. I AM IN LOVE. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU. WHERE ARE YOU ? PLEASE CALL ME. This message was from Archana.
Tarun thinks that Manav 4 saal tak is din ka intezar karta raha aur aaj Jab woh din aaya toh...
He goes near Manavs body and sits there. Archana is still crying.... But IT WAS TOO LATE
Edited by -ALI- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@archanamanav: You dont like sad ending ? Ha. Its good sometimes as it is remembered more if its sad. Btw, whats your name ? Typing your screen name is bit lengthy you know. More lengthy than my story actually. Lol

@akki: Thanks buddy. Actually it was ok ok type. Not brilliant.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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my name is usha..sad ending makes me sad also..as i love archu a lot..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I know i know you love archu . I read it somewhere. Hmmm. Dont get sad. Just a story. Thanks for telling name ushaji.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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why such a sad story Ali ? 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@vilu: hamesha bakwas humour likhta tha. For a change thought of something serious lol. Achi nahn lagi?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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achi hain par bahut dukh bhari hain 😭 nxt time funny likhna 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Acha acha koi nai. Next time funny hi likhunga
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ali a bit sad, made me think of this song, long b4 our time
Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh
Kahan shuru kahan khatam

Edited by carpe-diem - 14 years ago

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