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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

ye manzilei hai kaun si
na wo samajh sakey na hum

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coolpratz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

such a sad ending.......😭

but a nice story ......👍🏼

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-ALI-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Helen , if it made you think of that song then i think that i was successfull in touching your heart by story lol. Waise its very nice song. Evergreen one.

@prats: Thanks dear. Hmmm next time no sad

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Very nice story Ali! Even though the ending was sad, I really liked it.

Suggestion: why not have two endings for this story? One sad one happy????

sad one is excellent, but want to read a happy one too. Cos the story has been developed quite nicely.

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kmh2rockzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

gandi story hai😭😭😭😭
aisi koi ending hoti hai kya😭😭😭😭

start accha tha bt end😡😡😡😡

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-ALI-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

@jhanvi: see you are crying means you liked it lol

@niki: i too was thinking of both happy and sad. But it wont make much difference. Only one will be that manav goes in koma after incident. Archu comes and looks after him and WAITS FOR HIM FOR THE SAME TIME HE WAITED FOR HER. Then Manav gets well and both unite and oohlala.
Waise, thnx for liking it.