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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! PRIVATE JET! Soo soo cuteeee! I m soo soo loving this! :)) PLEASE updt sooon! :DD
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Posted: 14 years ago




update is

geet - prem & armaan has said that I am with them, now if I call & say I am
hear with you, papa mama toda gussa honge lekin prem aur armaan ka to
pura reputation karab hojayega, I can't let that happen


maan nodes his head, geet calms down avoiding to create scene infront of them
geet mumered vest pahen kar pure airport main mujhe keench raha hain
abhi idhar, yeh log sab mera bare main kya sochenghe, aapna nahi to kamse kam mera
reputation ka to khayal karna tha



maan - what is wrong with you
geet - i did'nt mean like that
maan - like what
geet - nahi woh, spending night wali baat...
maan looked away
geet - aap galat samjh rahen ho, just said with out thinking
she looked down feeling really guilty

geet - I don't think of you like that, I really do respect u
& rested her head on his arms, main mazak karti hoon lekin I know
maan lifts her chin - what do u know
geet - u r not like those other guys with cheap intentions
that was direct maan cleared his throat & sat next to her crossing his legs
maan mockingly - how can u be so sure
geet smiled - actually I am not sure, lekin aap aise flirt karo teehk lagta hain
serious serious aacha nahi lagta

maan smiled & looked away
geet - BF ji aap ke is smile ne mujhe delhi is mumbai aur abhi aap ko mumbai se delhi
ke chakar lagva diya, itna gussa kyun karte ho


maan - what do you want
she saw a pillow & then found a spread under that...
she covered it over him... maan - mujhe tand nahi lag rahi hain
geet snapped - garmi lag rahi hain..remove this also,
pulling up his vest
taaki she can have a better view

maan understood her discomfart & pulled the spread around & increased the a/c
maan realized he was in for a big trouble with his possesive sweetheart..OOps misthi
his hot looks & her possesiveness very bad combination
she cuddled up clinging on to his hand & dossed off
maan - kya huwa baba, aab to maine shirt bhi phen liya hain na
geet - yeh aap ki shirt
maan - mera plane hain, to mera hi shirt hoga na
geet wondered - aap ka plane hain?
maan - umm
geet - phir aap kya ho ambani yah khurana's
maan - Maan singh Khurana in attitude
geet - thanxs I believe u, ha ha ... nahi batana hain to mat bolo
maan mumers aarey yaar yeh to had hogayee



conti soon waiting for next




hermoini thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
so muski finally u onlyn han ...chalo jaldi jaldi update kardo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey muskan di,
great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........looking forward to upcoming parts very eagerly.......ohhhhhhhhhh geet is so possesivetowards maan just love it n maan too enjoying that also lovly😳😳😳😳😳😉😉😉😉😉😉
kya kare di weekend start so
what a mean of the precap
pls di update soon can't wait for next
HAPPY DIWALI to u
plssssssssssssssssssss
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
update
love u😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
a happy and prosperous new year to you and your family.

hoping you had a fabulous Diwali too.

my personal and most selfish new year wish is that your writing grows from strength to strength, and you keep blessing your readers with awesome updates day in, day out.


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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update di!!!! jst loved geet's possessiveness 4 maan......n the best part was when maan told him his name but she didnt believe!!!! yeh to sach mein hadd hi ho gayi🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bajiiii hope u haved a lovely day yestaday!! :)x
This update was really good, loved that Geet was being possessive over Maan, and he loved every bit of it!!
He cares soo much about her i think she has finally realised, she still does not belive that he is Maan Singh Khurana 😆!!
Looking forward to the next update, update soon bajii waiting to know why Maan is bechara??!!
Thanks for the pm..xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
When will u be updating di?
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 28

she pulled away slowly from the hug & turned to leave
maan pulled her back in a jerk making her fall on him & holding her
close from her shoulders... kya matlab
geet - ji she looked confused
maan - u don't hate me now ka kya matlab
geet - woh maine hotel main kaha tha na, uske liya
maan moved her closer - so it means...u like me
she pulled his cheeks offcourse i like u, I really like u a lot
u are such a darling, aab main javoon


maan shocked - umm!!
still trying to get over what she said. he knew what she meant & how she meant
but those words meant so much to him. he could'nt stop falling for her
the way she made him feel was so special so different
every thing about her was adorable, her never ending calls, her nohk-jhok
like the way she goes out of the way to get that one smile back on his face,
oops her possessiveness... he did !!he truly magicaly was in love
he loved the feeling of just being around her. listening to her, being playful
with her. the best part of all this was she hated Maan Singh Khurana..he smiled
but he liked that too....he knew Maan Singh Khurana ...can get any thing he wants
but winning her heart as him, just him was magical.
geet reached home
rano - picture kaise thi
geet - aachi thi
raji - kuanse picture thi
geet - kal baat kare , I am really tired now..& hugs them
geet took a shower, the water reminded her of the fun they had in the beach she smiled
she changed into her night dress..satin shorts & floral lace pink satin top
laid back on her bed cuddling the pillow, she was so happy & delighted.
she was reminded of the kiss he gave in the plane. she shied and hid her face
in the spread. how stupid of me...bekar hi unhe pareshan kiya.. he was avoiding
& i went on & on..I should have just understood daadi would have returned my kiss
how dumb...geet tu bhi na pagal hain
suddenly she became worried, kanhi woh meri kiss ka koi galat matlab to nahi
nikalenge. na..he is not like that, waise bhi jab maine unke kiss ka koi
galat matlab nahi samjha to woh kyun aise sochenge, hope not..and dosses off

5.30am
maan - sona dona waise bhi raat bhar u did'nt let me sleep
geet - hai hai babaji aab maine kya kiya? aap aise kyun bhol rahen ho
maan with his eyes closed - I reached hotel only 3am after droping u
geet confused - hotel? where are u
maan - Geet subha subha kaise sawal kar rahi ho?
geet - aap hotel main kyun rah rahe ho
maan yarning - mumbai main mera ghar nahi hain
geet - aap mumbai challe gaye, mujhe kaha bhi nahi
maan - kahta to tum mera saat aati kya?
geet - aayee to thi na
maan smiled with his eyes closed
geet - aacha u sleep I will talk to u latter
maan - umm

geet met up with prem in the college
prem - jai ho!!!
geet rolled her eyes
prem - arrey yaar tera aur bachan ka kya scene hain
geet - kuch nahi
prem - phir tu uske saat mumbai kyun gayee
geet - all big confusion, pata hain we had great fun in mumbai
went to the beach & can u believe he droped me back in his private jet
prem - sach much ka Amitab Bachan hain kya
geet - week end main mil lena
prem - now I am really curious to meet him

mukti comes to meet them - we are going for a welfare camp to
help spread health awareness in the near by villages, 2 din a trip
hain, challo ghi
geet - nahi yaar, i really won't be able to
prem - kaun kaun chal raha hain
mukti -lists out all girls name & 2 uncommon guys
prem - count me in
geet waked him, prem rubbed his arms
prem & mukti were planning for the camp
geet called maan - aap ne subha se phone nahi kiya
maan - meeting main tha.. his voice was low
geet - are u having fever?
maan - umm
geet - medicin liya
he kept quite
geet - when are u coming back
maan - kal
geet - but u said, u will be back today
maan - meeting got extended
geet - where are u
maan - hotel main
geet - address bolo
maan - why do u need that now
geet - it won't take me long to figure that out
maan - ok...he gives the address
geet - thanxs, aacha ek min
she puts him on hold & makes some calls
she gets back on call - suno I missed ur wake up call
maan gave a weak smile
geet continued telling about her class & prems plan with mukti
with in 30mins, Dr had come to visit maan to his hotel room
maan - yeh sab kya hain geet
geet - chup chap check karva lo, I am waiting
dr checks his temperature, BP & takes a blood sample for testing
maan - I don't think it is required
geet - let me decide that
dr called geet & gave her the report
geet - itna high fever hain, what ae u doing in mumbai, come back now.
maan - I am fine..he shoots a glare at the dr & tells him to say he is ok to her
geet - don't even try that
maan - geet just relax before he could complete...delivery boy delivers flower bouquets
one after the other...his room was filled now
he reads the notes..
get well soon..geet
miss u ...geet
take care ...geet
come back soon ...geet
don't stress ur self...geet
when are u coming ...geet
take ur medicin ..geet
dr ko ghoro mat ..geet
i like that smile ...geet
.....
.....
.....
maan - what is all this
geet - I was concerned
maan - main bikul teehk hoon
geet - nahi dr nai kaha hain ki u need rest
maan stared the dr
geet - us bichare ko kyun dara rahe ho
maan - tum chati kya ho
geet - come back now
maan - not possible dear, I have an important meeting lined up tomorrow
geet snapped - aap kya chate ho, main wanha aa kar aap ka kayal rakoon
maan - i would love that
geet - is haal main bhi aap ko masti sooj raha hain...bahut ho gaya, come back today
maan - please try to understand, I promise I will be there in delhi tomorrow

precap
geet majorliy worried!!!!

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear love Geet ,how she is ordering him to come back.
read this from start😉 at last
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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