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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys..thank you so much for all the encouragements you have given..i have read and enjoyed each and every comments..although I could reply to each of them'without further ado I give ull the third part

Previous part on pg 2

Part 3

AS sat in the hospital waiting for what the doctors were going to say about baji's condition..today the day of happiness how it could turn of such a day of sadness she could not understand'after dutta's anger of throwing naku and baji out of the house everything was just a whirlwind of emotions..all she could think was how the day passed and she reached here.

She could not believe how such a beautiful girl like nakusha his her face behind that ugly soot but after hearing everything that happened to naku's older sister and babi's helplessness she could not help but feel bad for that innocent girl'she knew how much naku loves her son..no other girl would have been ever right for him..but right now she even knew her son was too angry to understand of what that poor girl had to go through in her life'well she could understand how baji supported naku ..maybe aside from her n naku baji was the only one who can understand her son..maybe knowing how dutta would react even he waited for naku to tell the truth but then everything slipped form everyone's hands

Dutta had thrown not only naku but also baji from the house'that time she could not do anything but she wanted to wait for some hours and confront dutta'for then she consoled herself knowing that baji was with naku and they would remain safe

Her headstrong son didn't listen to her ..but then she decided she had to twist his hand..and she told him..you might be angry with naku and baji..but for me they are like my children..and I would never like my child harming my other children..i know you are hurt but atleast give them a chance to explain themselves..if you heard kala 's side then even naku and baji deserve the right to say their side of story..and whether you like it or not I want baji and naku back in the house..

Saying this to dutta she left the room..she knew she hurt him but it was necessary to bring them back home because only then it would be possible to heal her son's wounds'she saw him leaving the house and knew that he would bring them back..

her eldest daughter had come to her and told her..how could she let dutta bring them back..after what naku and baji did to dutta..but she cut kala off by telling every coin has two sides..you told your side of story now it is their turn to explain their side..before kala could argue she told her..this is my house and I will decide who will stay here and who will not and baji is like my other son..as long as I am alive I will never allow him to go from this house and naku she is my son's wife '.whether he believes it or not i don't care and she left kala to her thoughts.

She had gone back to her room to pray..then suddenly she got a phone call ..she picked the phone..it was her son dutta..from the way his voice was chocked she knew something was seriously wrong'he told her he was phoning from the hospital..and that baji was in the hospital..someone has beaten him up brutally and right now he is in a critical condition..then dutta told her to please come to the hospital and kept the phone

From his voice she knew that her son needed her'.but still baji in the hospital and being in a crirical condition..this news made her collapse on the bed..kishore who was passing near her room so her collapsing and rushed in the room'he asked her what had happened ..she looked at him still in shock and repeated that baji is in a critical condition in the hospital..and dutta needed her..Immediately kishore told her to move and together they went to the hospital.

On reaching the hospital they were directed to where dutta was..she went rushing towards her son..dutta was sitting on one of the benches his face in his hands..she placed her hand on his shoulder ..and when he looked up..she felt herself weakening to see him in such a distraught condition'on seeing his mother..dutta grabbed her and placed his head on her chest sobbing for his friend ..he told her of how baji is fighting for his life and the doctors telling him that they were not sure whether he could make it alive'and even how his nakusha has gone missing

Dutta looked at her and said..i don't want to know why baji and naku didn't tell me the truth..all I want is to see them safe'AS held her son close to her as cried out his pain'for she knew no matter what she would say would not calm her son down..

Looking up she saw kishore walking towards them with a doctor..she told dutta that the doctor was coming towards them..immediately dutta stood up waiting for what the doctor would tell him..the doctor said..bhao baji is now safe from danger as he is responding to the treatment but it will still take a long time before he becomes alright properly..he will have to be in the hospital for atleast a month..dutta told the doctor..just see to it that he is given the best of treatment..money is not important..the doctor nodded

Before he could turn to go..dutta asked him doctor can we just see him..the doctor said not now bhao 'after few days would be alright but you can see him from outside..dutta agreed to his condition..and went to see his friend..he looked at his baji from out and it pained him to see him attached to so many machines..his head was bandaged up..there was bandages even over his chest..which dutta knew was broken ribs..he placed his hand on the glass window which separated him from his friend and closed his eyes and prayed that he will be alright fast..he felt his hand being squeezed and looked down and saw his mother also looking through the glass window'and tears flowing through her eyes..dutta turned her to face him..and hugged her tight

As she hugged her son she prayed to her god that please heal both my sons and keep her nakusha also away from any danger.

Atharva was still hugging madhu..as he got a phonecall..he moved away from the hug..but still kept a hold on madhu..he picked the phone and listened to the other end conversation..he said ok and disconnected the call..he looked at madhu and said it was from the hospital..doctor has said that baji is away from danger now..although it will take some time he will become alright..madhu smiled and cheekily said there was never a doubt he will not make it'atharva smiled at her childishness and pinched her cheek slightly anticipating the slap he got on his hand..as she frowned at him and told him how many times have I told you not to do that..i am not a small child..as she turned her back towards him..he caught and made her towards him'I know my little spitfire'but for me you will always be that child..madhu smiled back at him

Atharva became serious again and told her..you better tell naku that baji will be alright I am sure she is really worrying..while I am now going to take care of some business ..ok and saying so he left bidding her a goodbye and the traditional kiss on her forehead.

Madhu went back to naku's room..and she opened the door..she could see naku twisting and sweating in her sleep calling for someone to help her..madhu immediately rushed to the bed trying to wake naku up..naku suddenly screamed baji's name and got up from the nightmare..she looked around in fright not knowing where she was..the minute she recognised madhu..she latched onto her and started crying..she had a nightmare of how baji died trying to save her ..madhu consoled her ..and when naku calmed down madhu told her that atharva got a phonecall from the hospital and the doctors has said that baji is alright now..and safe from danger..naku heard this and closed her eyes..her breathing coming to its normal pace.

Naku looked at madhu and said I know you don't me for long but please can you be hear with me till I sleep..madhu smiled gently and said don't worry naku you sleep..i will watch over you..knowing madhu would be with her she closed her eyes..and succumbing to her tiredness nakusha went to sleep..being sure naku was asleep madhu gently wiped the sweat from naku's brow and said don't worry vaheni I am always watching over you..just wait for sometime and I will remove all the obstacles that comes in the way of your's and my brother's happiness.

Hope ull liked this part..really looking forward to your comments 😳

Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
cool u updated!!!
wonderful update
glad 2 c the gadha gt sense! lol
thank god, baji is k... cnt w8 for these 2 buddies 2 meet...
madhu is wicked...i love her..m sure she wil giv the much needed takkar 2 kala.. btw does AS knw of madhu's existence...like does she knw tht DP had a daughter called madhu?
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
reserved😉 i'l read n edited 😊 hey yuvi very fast haan😆
edited 😉
wow...jiyo AS...she want baaji n nakku at pn👏 its ur son datta naa 😕wen he get angry naa...kisiki nahi sunta
ohhh baaji thank god he is out of danger nw😊wen u get up na dont forgive datta so easily😔..plz... ohh datta crying😭 damn ...cant bare his tears...wht to do its ur fault man
madhu n atharva r nice hun😊😊😊
ohh poor naakku,,,,,😲nightmare....wow she gt so nice nanad
hope in serial too she do so nice wrk aftre FR😃she will save her Bro n SIL from trio n frm all difficultys
amazing update jess👏👏👏
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeh Yuvi aur Sonee to bare fast nikle yaar!!
Ahhh back to the update... Awesome yaar.. Thank god Baaji is fine.. awww dutta crying.. Well its his fault.. he didn't let them say anything and now see how baaji ended up in hospital.
Awww Madhu is so sweet.😳. The way shes taking care of her vehini is soo sweet.
Madhu-Atharva scene is damn good...sounds like gf-bf but he thinks of her like a little girl? lol😆
Aww AS and dutta scene was emotional😭😭Cry ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page. .. I hope Dutta apologize to baaji soon.. And then goes to hunt for Nakku...
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon😳
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

cool u updated!!!

wonderful update
glad 2 c the gadha gt sense! lol
thank god, baji is k... cnt w8 for these 2 buddies 2 meet...
madhu is wicked...i love her..m sure she wil giv the much needed takkar 2 kala.. btw does AS knw of madhu's existence...like does she knw tht DP had a daughter called madhu?

wow such a fast repy..u bet gadha has come to his senses..but will have to wait to see how easy baji makes it for dutta😆😆..madhu is wicked..no doubt..lets say kala will have no idea what hits her..yes AS knows about madhu..how she knows is for another chapter
glad you enjoyed this part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
thanks so much😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonee

hey yuvi very fast haan😆

😆 yep hun..pretty fast....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sonee

reserved😉 i'l read n edited 😊 hey yuvi very fast haan😆

ok waiting😆😆..yup even i am suprised yuvi is quiet fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: jessica10

wow such a fast repy..u bet gadha has come to his senses..but will have to wait to see how easy baji makes it for dutta😆😆..madhu is wicked..no doubt..lets say kala will have no idea what hits her..yes AS knows about madhu..how she knows is for another chapter

glad you enjoyed this part

hehe yh..u posted n immediately i saw it so read it...😆
i dnt wnt baji 2 make it easy for dutta...he shud b angry with him a bit..afterall we always see dutta losing his temper on baji..wud b gr8 2 c a change😆😉
i wish madhu is like this in the shw---give kala sum takkar...its abt time sum1 shwd kala tht she aint the onli 1 with a sharp brain😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jessica10

ok waiting😆😆..yup even i am suprised yuvi is quiet fast

😆😆😆 thnx for the compliments😆😆😆

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