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bluedreamz953 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Are you updating soon,di??
PLease jaldi karo na!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

That was good update!!!!!!!!!!
Geet is so confusing.................
well, Maan is so good, so calm...............
aur yeh raj ka kya locha hai............😡

Love
lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 23

after their dinner maan drives her back to her place in her BMW
with his car following him & prithvi on his bike
the security opens the door for geet & maan
geet - come in, mama se bhi mila doongi
maan - its late now some time latter
geet - mama won't mind
maan - I do mind, some time latter
geet - are u sure? maan - noded
geets drivers parked her car, his driver got his car in front
maan turned to sit in his car..geet softly held his shoulder from back
he turned to see her, she looked down & cluctching her fingers
maan - what happened
geet - woh ...
maan - its ok, I know tum upset thi
geet - thanxs for understanding, I am really sor..his fingers stopped her
she fluttered her eyes and looked at him amazed probably it felt differently warm
maan - tumhara to haq banta hain, rubbing his chest were she bit
geet smiled & hugged & said good night
she went in & kissed rano & said sorry mama
rano smiled - now go say sorry to papa
geet - ji
geet went & stood out side papaji's study
papaji was getting restless on some office matter, she waited for him to finish it
papaji - its been 3days now
assist - sir we are trying for an appointment
papaji - the whole project is getting delayed because of this one meeting
assist - but sir I spoken to his secertary, she said he is held up for next few weeks
geet comes in biting her apple - kaun hain jo mere papa ko itna pareshan kar raha hain
and sat next to him cuddled up in the sofa
papaji smiles at her - are u ok
geet - ji papa, sorry about it
papaji kisses her fore head - be carefull & control ur temper
geet - ji she streches her legs & rests her back on him
papaji - thats all for today, just make sure u get Maan Singh Khurana's appointment
atleast by next week
assist - yes sir, good night sir
papaji noded
papaji - tum unhe kaise janti ho? how come he came for bailing u?
geet - kise? bachan ko
papaji - umm
geet mumered lift ke bare main bollongi to naraz ho jayenge
geet cleared her throat - usdin party mili thi
papaji - umm
rano walks in - come lets have dinner

after dinner geet catches up with prem & armaan on a conference call
prem - raj ne aur kya kaha
geet - u guys don't care for me at all
armaan - yah right!!!
prem - arrey yaar main aapne new Gf ke saat tha isliya phone nahi uttaya tha
geet - see raj called up even from him impt mission
armaan - come on we all know him
prem - tere liya woh kuch bhi kar lega
geet - main bhi us ke liya kuch bhi kar sakti hoon, tum logo ke liya bhi
prem - thats better
armaan - weekend ka kya plan hain
prem - farm house challen
geet - bachan ke farm house chalte hain
armaan - wanha kyun
geet - he has horse & all
prem - woh..that will be fun
geet - teehk hain I will call him & tell him
armaan - i will try to get ridz
geet - umm
prem - nahi yaar, then you will not get time for us
geet strats giggling
armaan - forget it I am not coming
geet - please yaar don't start fighting now
prem - ok ok.no problem .but no ridz ok
armaan - bye
geet - prem yaar why do u always do this
prem - I love to see him like this, he is totally lost it
geet - nahi yaar he seriously love her
prem - Oh really
geet - jab tujhe hoga to pata challega
prem - tujha bada exprenice hain
geet - PREM
prem - baat to aise karti hain jaise ur in love, ek BF to tere tiktha nahi
3 din main tera break-up hojatha hain
geet - meri kya galthi hain
prem - nahi teri galti nahi hain, wohi teri demands pura nahi kar pate
geet - I am not that demanding
prem - yah right!! jis tarika se tu aapne BF's go handle karti hain na
u can never have a love marriage, phir karlena kisi ambani's yah khurana's shaadi
geet - nahi yaar mujhe love marriage he karna hain
prem - ur last Bf ko tune ek din main baga diya tha
geet - he was trying to take advantage
prem - aapne GF se kiss expect karna advantage lena nahi hota
geet - mujhe bhi to lagna chahiya na
prem - aur tujhe kab lagega, shaadi karke do bachon ke baad
geet - pata nahi, actually nun of them deserved me
prem - geet seriously just grow up now
geet - u grow up har do din main ladki badalta rahta hain
prem - atleast I have GF aur armaan ke saat ridz hain, naval ball main don't expect us
to dance with u
geet - naval ball ke liya abhi 1 month hain I will manage to find one
prem - & dump 2
geet - bye
prem - don't forget to talk to bachan for the farm house
geet - umm

5.30a she calls maan
maan - bolo
geet - good morning
maan smiled - maska kya baat hain
geet - actually I was talking to prem & armaan last night & we decided to go to
ur farm house for the week end, wanted to know if its ok with u
maan - ok
geet - so sweet, when should we pick u up
maan - why should u pick me up
geet - then u will come in ur car, aise kaise ho sakta hain that will not be fun
maan - u did'nt ask me to come
geet - arre aapke farm house ja rahen hain to aapke saat hi jayenga na
maan keeps quite
geet - ok!! I will ask u now, challo na
maan - waise bhi tumhe to mana nahi kar sakta
geet - phir itna natak kyun karte ho
maan - GEET
geet - ok ok subha subha gussa mat karna, mera pura din karab ho jayega
maan smiled
geet - I just love this smile of yours
maan - aacha so jaavoo I will wake u up at 7.30am
geet - umm..good night
maan continues with his work out

7.30am geet - umm
maan - utto...
geet - sona dona please
maan - college ke liya late ho ra hain
geet - please 5mins more
maan continues to change & combs his hair
maan - 5 mins up, aab utto
geet - 5mins more please
maan - tumhe kya hogaya hain aaj
geet - pata nahi I am feeling very lazy today
maan - get up now & don't forget to call prem
geet yarning - umm
she gets up lazily & has her shower looks at the time & strats rushing out
maan - relax ur fine
geet - aap pehle nahi utta sakte the, phir mera first lecture miss ho jayega
maan - drive slowly
geet - umm!! hopping into her car & putting her phone on the charger
maan kisses daadi
geet - meri taraf se bhi daadi ko ek kiss
maan kisses daadi again
daadi gives a strange look..maan wispers - uski taraf se
daadi - usko bhi meri taraf se kisses his cheeks
maan - DAADI
geet - kya huwa
daadi screams - geet ko dedena..maan closes the phones receiver
geet - kya diya daadi ne meri liya
maan - kuch nahi
geet - maine to suna daadi ne kaha use dedena
maan walks to car - maine kaha na kuch nahi
geet - bachan this is really bad, aap humare beech nahi aa sakte
aab daadi ne diya hain to u better give to me
uff bechara maan!!!! yeh to gaya

precap
now wonder how will maan give it????
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
mrk-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update yaar.. reallly i had been waiting for this .. i just love this ff
hermoini thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey read ur update 1st !!!! wow maan gonna kiss geet han ...well but u just mentioned she had a breakup coz sme guy demanded a kiss ....hope shes comfortable with this 1 .....hmmm geet tubelight has no idea bachchan is maan...poor mrhanda restless fr 1 meeting with maan aur yahan unki daughter is with him 24*7 ...luved the way she was buttering maan fr his farm house .................
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Posted: 14 years ago
ab Maan gaye... how is he going to give it to her....Dadi is soooo tricky....and naugty.... LOVED the update di....
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u for the update.....

oh all r going to maan's farmhouse.. nice....


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Posted: 14 years ago
hai hai......maan come on yaar....get set go..!!!!😆😆...
muski di again a very nice update iam...🤢🤣.............thnks for such a luvely update now waiting for the very much expected update..
rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey di!!!

~~My favourite lines~~
maan - tumhara to haq banta hain This was so so so so so so sweet!!!! I felt so proud of him for saying that!

geet - mujhe bhi to lagna chahiya na
prem - aur tujhe kab lagega, shaadi karke do bachon ke baad
geet - pata nahi, actually nun of them deserved me
prem - geet seriously just grow up now
geet - u grow up har do din main ladki badalta rahta hain
prem - atleast I have GF aur armaan ke saat ridz hain, naval ball main don't expect us
to dance with u
geet - naval ball ke liya abhi 1 month hain I will manage to find one
prem - & dump 2
geet - bye
prem - don't forget to talk to bachan for the farm house
geet - umm
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!🤣 I didn't Geet was sooooo....nvm!🤣

geet - good morning
maan smiled - maska kya baat hain
Hahahahaha I always find it funny whenever this happens!🤣

daadi - usko bhi meri taraf se kisses his cheeks
maan - DAADI
geet - kya huwa
daadi creams - geet ko dedena..maan closes the phones receiver
geet - kya diya daadi ne meri liya
maan - kuch nahi
geet - maine to suna daadi ne kaha use dedena
maan walks to car - maine kaha na kuch nahi
geet - bachan this is really bad, aap humare beech nahi aa sakte
aab daadi ne diya hain to u better give to me
uff bechara maan!!!! yeh to gaya
OMfG!!!!!!!!!🤣I am so excited...kaise dega Maan Geet ko dadi ka kiss??

Please di,jaldi update karna!!I can't wait for the next update!!!!Kaise dega Maan Geet ko ek KISS!!Obviously,I know it'll be on her cheeks but still,kaise????I have got no idea,actually a few ideas but am excited to see it ur way!!
Please update soon and is it even needed to say,'THANKS' and 'I LOVE YOU!'!

Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣 Oh my... I cant control laughing... Ab kya karega Maan??? 🤪🤪
I love Daadi for this... Superb update again... U're awesome...
Please update soon dear...

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