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update soon yaaar... 😊
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-truly magical-
part 20


Mr. Handa - thanxs Mr.khurana... handa's lawyer - they have completed the formalities
maan noded his head
Mr. Handa - I am sorry about all this mess ..
maan & papaji walking out talking to each other...
geet - papaji yeh mera friend hain ..
papaji looks shocked & then realized his daugter has the whole world in her
friends list..but Maan Singh Khurana he was taken a back
maan clears his throat & puts his hand in the pocket
papaji - thanxs for taking your time out
geet was impressed with her papa talking nicely to maan
geet wispers to maan - bachan aapne aapna jaado papa pe bhi chala diya
maan moves little away to avoid media attention or complication
geet - bachan itna kyun sharama rahe ho?? waise to bhut GF GF kehte ho, aab kya huwa
papa ji ke samne bolti bant
& giggles
rep1 - what do u want to say about ur daughters act
rep2 - ameer baap ki beti hain to kuch bhi kar sakti hain
papaji - no comments
guards shoo them away... Maan takes his leave & moves to his car
papaji - tumhe unhe insab main involve karne kya zaroorat thi
geet - kise bachan ko
papaji rolled his eyes
geet - papaji, maine kuch nahi kaha tha, woh main unse phone main baat kar rahi thi
tabhi yah sab huwa, aur woh apne aap se aagayee meri help karne
papaji - are u mad, its impossible to get him on phone
geet - aise to nahi hain ...prem & mukti gives her big hug
mukti - yaar really very sorry, meri wajha se yah sab
geet - nahi yaar just relax, aab sab teehk hain
mukti still looked very disturbed
geet - what happened
mukti - woh savitri devi hain na
geet - kaun savitri devi?
mukti - humari women association ki head
geet - umm
mukti - now media is blaming them for all this & troubling her
she is having a press meet & sab log unko resign karne ko kah rahen hain
geet - papaji aap challo main inke saat aathi hoo
papaji - no more tamasha
geet smiled

geet - mukti mujhe press meet main le chal
mukti - nahi yaar woh teehk nahi hoga
prem - don't ever say no to geet handa, u never know kanha se gun shot hoga
geet waked prem - mukti please yaar

they drive to khuarana mansion
reporter 1 - this rally was with ur permission
savitri Devi - ji hain
rep2 - how can ur association be so careless, kisi jaan ja sakti thi
savitri Devi - actually ..before she could complete
rep3 - kyan aap in sab ki responsibilty leti hain
savitri Devi - it was a peaceful rally...the reporters not letting her talk
rep1 - are u going to resign
geet barges in - why should she resign, galti meri hain, inki nahi
savitri Devi wispers to her assisatant - yeh kaun hain
assist - the girl who fired the bullet
savitri Devi she gave stare to her..scanned her top to bottom...torn jeans,
curly hair tied up with a clip, muddy sneakers & funcky t-shirt
geet was facing the media did'nt notice savitri Devi - I am the person to be blamed
maine bullet challyee the, it was a peacefully rally...agar aap logo ko
problem hain to mujhe se honi chahian...inhe kyun pareshan kar rahen hain
she need not be blamed for all this
savitri Devi tells her assist - ask her to be quite
geet - don't u dare trouble her, just buzz off
assist asks her to be quite
rep 1 - savitri Devi what will u do to undo this
geet - don't u get that stratight
savitri Devi - geet aap chup rahiyaa
geet turns to see her, she feels bad that she is scolding her when she was actually
trying to support her...she felt bad
rep2 - who is responsible for all this
savitri Devi - traffic police is responsible for all this,geet was shocked we had given a written request for this rally 2 weeks in advance, so it is their responsiblity to arrange for proper flow of traffic... they should have made adequate arrangement to take care of the traffi flow
we kept our rally latter in the day so that there is not much traffic at that hr
but still if they can't manage & an ambulance gets stuck in the mist what do u expect
a responsible citizen to do, just keep watching, risk that persons life in the amblunace
rep 1- so u support geet
savitri Devi - what she did may be wrong but her intentions were not wrong
geet kept looking at her with her jaws droped open...
geet wispered to mukti maine inha hanhi dehka hain
rep 2 - what if the bullet whould have hit some one
savitri Devi - lagi to nahi na...
geet giggles..savitri Devi passed a glance to her
geet - oye yeh to bachan ki daadi hain..bilkul uski tarah ghoor this hain
rep 4 - so u are blaming all on the traffic police now
savitri Devi - yes , agar woh log aapna kaam teehk se karte to yeh sab nahi hota
thanxs no more questions
daadi walks to the study..geet goes behind her
daadi looks back in anger
geet with a big smile hugged her - aap bachan ki daadi ho na
daadi was shocked at her grandsons choice..
daadi cleared her throat & scanned her again top to bottom & took a long deep breat in
geet - main Geet Handa
daadi mumered oh no humari badi bahu
geet - daadi yeh prem hain mera bestest of friend & puts her hand around him
this is mukti humri college ki leader
geet - daadi aap photo se bhi jada sexy lagti ho
daadi cleared her throat
daadi offered her some tea
geet - nahi daadi main tea coffee nahi pethi
daadi smiled at her
geet - aap bilkul bachan ki tarah smile karti hain, actually maine aap ko jab deehka
mujhe laga ki maine aap ko kanhi deehka hain..
daadi - but we hav'nt met before
geet - wohi to, phir aapne jab gussa main deehka tab mujhe yaad aaye ki aap bachan ki daadi ho, woh bhi bilkul aap ki tarah ghoorthe hain
daadi looked away...
geet - actually maine aap ki photo deehki thi unki purse main
daadi - purse main!!!..
geet - jab hum dinner keliya gaye the kal raat ko
daadi - dinner???
daadi looked at her & now noticed the ring in her hand
daadi - waise aap ko aise fire nahi karna chahiya tha
geet - sorry daadi, actually mujhe woh ambulance ki chinta ho rahi thi aur maine
daadi - I can understand, but be careful next time
geet - ji daadi
daadi wondered maan business sambhale ga ki ise sambale ga
daadi - did police trouble u or something
geet - nahi daadi, mera wanha pounchane se pehle hi bachan ne meri bail kardi
daadi smiled inwardly ...waise to inka pass kisi chiz ke liya time nahi hota
acha hain, business ke alawa bhi he is taking intrest in some thing
precap
geet fallen for 😳...............Daadi yaar!!!!😲😲

NEXT PART 21
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it😊
Geet's dad shocked on knowing MSK to be her daughter's friend😆😆
Liked the way she was teasing Maan!
waise toh bahut GF GF bolte hai, papa ke saamne bolti band😆🤣
I think her dad is not convinced that she is friends with MSK seeing his reaction that MSK on phone with her🤣 Ab papaji aap kya jaano aapki beti ne MSK ko deewana bana rakha hai😆🤣🤣
Reporters wala part shown very nicely, specially the questions being asked and Dadi trying to pacify them. And then Geet barges in and starts 😆
Dadi looking at her attire shocked and then double shocked on knowing that she's the same girl jiske peeche her grandson is totally deewana types 🤣🤣🤣
And the best was dadi wondering ki Maan business sambhalega ya isse😆🤣
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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geet fallen for daadi ???????????😡....... i thought for maan...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice.. geet ki bachan ab keya karega.. geet fallen for dadi..😆 con soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.... loved this part...........
beautifull dadi-geet confrontation!!!!!!!!!
plsssssss update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update
the whole part was hilarious
continue soon
Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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daadi wondered maan business sambhale ga ki ise sambale ga
daadi - did police trouble u or something
geet - nahi daadi, mera wanha pounchane se pehle hi bachan ne meri bail kardi
daadi smiled inwardly ...waise to inka pass kisi chiz ke liya time nahi hota
acha hain, business ke alawa bhi he is taking intrest in some thing

i loved the line ........."..business sambhle ga ki ise........"

gr8 update but too short yaar...........take pity on us .......and give us a long one.
please update asap !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazin! U hv somethng or d other to amuse us . Lovd d whole concept of d update hw u introducd geet wit dadi, geet is so cute. I love maan's care n concern 4 her.keep up wit d good work.
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME....
yaar I missed bachan... was there for very little time in today's update.. thanks update karne k liye ...Main kabse wait kar rahi thi..
Geet... as usual superb... Mujhe kal raat ki Geet yaad aa gayi.. the way she spoke to the reporters... However.. the situations were very very different... But mujhe Geet ka attitude aur style same laga...
MSK.. rocks as usual... Im feeling horrible for our real Maan... But here Im so happy... I guess finally Geet will be falling for our Bachan aka Maan as u hav mentioned in the precap... thanks sweetie... kanhi toh kuch toh aacha ho raha hai..
Waise... daadi ne sahi samjha... Agar Geet aisi harkate karti rahe.. toh Maan ka saara time Geet ko sambhalne main hi jaayega... But Im waiting for that to happen...
I love the way MSK takes care of Geet even without her calling out for his help...
uff... I kinda of hate these reporters for their silly, stupid,idiotic,irritating,insulting... QUESTIONS.. in yesterday's epiosde also & here also.. samajthe kya hai woh aapne aap ko...
neways.. overall a superb update dear..
I wonder when will Geet get to know that her Bachan is none other than MAAN SINGH KHURANA... Im waiting to read that..
Im mean now after all this media hype.. Her dad knowing Maan.. her friends also meeting him.. Geet meeting Maan's daadi.. I dont think Geet will take too long to realize...
Im dying to read ur next update.. Please update soon na..
I wanted to be the first to comment.. But hard luck... Will try nex time..
Yest episode was dhamakedaar na?? Crackers after crackers... My heart is still aching.. Dunno know how Maaneet future will turn out to be... But I still love them truely... Coz... there is always a sunrise after a sunset.. Times will change.. Love will prevail over ego.. Misunderstandings will prevail over Concern for each other..
till then I guess I will have to manage with truely Magical... Maaneet here too...
Love u Muski for writing this beautiful kahani...
Tressa

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