~My Monday ~ chandini raatein ~

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)Hey guys tonight i felt a lil creative ๐Ÿ˜ณ and decided create my own Monday and step into the shoes of the RS๐Ÿ˜†
Why??? coz Monday feels to far for me๐Ÿ˜† after an amazing week of angini!! ๐Ÿฅณ warning some bits are totally taken over my imagination ๐Ÿ˜†.
here is my legend of my colour coding just in case ur confused;
intro- black description - blue
my lil comment here and there.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†-green
my imagination going beyond realistic -pink
Ragini -Red
Anmol-Gold
Vasu-Purple
Alekh-Orange
TaShi (Ran out of pretty colours๐Ÿ˜ณ will write either kushi or tammy)๐Ÿ˜†Violet
My hindi is shocking so i will stick to english but will add some phrases to capture the moment๐Ÿ˜‰

RIGHT so its start of with the Precap alekh has just spilled the beans....

alekh words echo the room, nobody moves or speaks. until vasu breaks the ice.
vasu: Kya? there must be some mistake, are you sure!
Alekh: Ha mama, i saw it on tv, the news can't be wrong.
Tammy: mere papa...tammy unable to finish her sentence..mere papa will ok won't he. vasu looks at her with sympathy but not able to give an answer.
Kushi: dont worry nothing will happen to partner. (tammy burst in too tears and runs up to ragini, who looks shell shocked, still standing with her body motionless as alekhs words are still piercing through her ears, mind, body and soul.)
tammy: papa is alright isn't he? (she shakes ragini to get a response) mummy tell me..
vasu: alekh take the kids upstairs please. (alekh silently agrees as kushi comforts tammy they go upstairs)
vasu: ragini please talk to me! ( shaking her, after 30 sec she speaks!!!)
ragini: im fastng for him... so he can have a long life, where is he? why is he so late mummiji where is he, mera pati kaha hai!( she could say that in the heat of te moment lol) she shouts, as she breaks down into tears in to vasu arms.)
vasu: nothing is certain yet we still don't know who was in the car, trust me anmol is fine, he prob just a litle late.
ragini: anmol (๐Ÿ˜ณshe says his name again!!) doesn't suddenly go missing without telling me he knew how important today was for us.. if he is late, why didn't he call and why was his phone switched of old day.!
vasu: calm down control your self ragini, dont lose hope yet i will ring the hospital.( she goes to get her phone she hears ragini say in the background.
ragini: not again, im not loosing another husband... not today!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ she turns to look at her, amazed by her affection toward anmol. (it all coming out now ragini ๐Ÿ˜†)
just then anmol enter tada like magic.( amazing timing huh?)๐Ÿ˜†
vasu: anmol!!?? (ragini looks up to see a tired๐Ÿฅฑ anmol and also a bit confused ๐Ÿ˜•(dont know why he would look confused.., hello you been missing for the last couple of hours, why do you think people looked panicked,,, maybe to see his darling wife so worried for him.) she runs (not thinking twice about what shes about to do ๐Ÿ˜‰) all the way not looking back once and falls into his arm and holding him as if she would never let go. anmol blown away by the situation he is facing. ragini still crying in his arm.
anmol: ragini kya hua? also holding her in his arm. also cupid (vasu) in the corner blushes and also breathes a sigh of relief.
anmol: why are you crying so much. he pull her of slowly (dayum) still holding her shoulders. though!! (yey)
ragini: (a bit angry) kya hua? kya hua?! your asking me what happened, you leave today half awake after helping mummiji make saargi all night then disappear of too work with your phone switched off, not a single call all day to say where you are or anything. and then you dont even arrive on time for kc only later i find out from jijaji that your car was is an accident and the man inside was severely injured. and now you are standing here asking me kya hua? i have been worried sick. (Wow angry ragini) anmol know taken back with ragini's words and stands there staring at her *eye lock*.
anmol does his signature move๐Ÿ˜‰ wipes aways raginis tears with his fingers. smiles and says
Anmol:my darling wife i am sooo sorry.. please can you forgive me. the thing is i was so busy today that i completely lost track of time. *** now this is my excuse that i came up for anmol hope cvs come up with soming better*** me being so careless this morning left my phone at home in the study last night as i was finishing of some work i dont't know why it was off prob out of battery, thats why the whole day i couldn't even talk too you. ๐Ÿ˜ณ plus make things worse my car was stolen and that car got in a accident, then the police came and asked me a few questions .. formalities, then identify the car so on i don't know why everything bad had to happen today but forgetting all that my wife was hungry at home waiting for me so i couldn't go epty handed ๐Ÿ˜‰ ... so phir i bought something very special for someone very speacial...๐Ÿ˜ณ ragini looks at him in confusion then suddenly we hear tashi and alekh come downstairs. tashi run up to him and hug him.
Tammy: papa! tum kaha tee, i was so worried.
Kushi: ha partner, we were all so worried, we were frightened that u left us went to god ke pas.
anmol: (he crouches down) im sorry i scared you guys, can u forgive me. i will never scare you guys again promise.(hug)
Alekh: ha tammy ke papa i was also scared that you went next to my sadhana and i didn't know how to tell ragini, but im so happy your ok..anmol looks up and stands again and smiles at alekh
Anmol: im sorry bhaiya i didn't mean to scare you.
Alekh: it ok, its ok ๐Ÿ˜ณ (tashi then signal anmol to give his ear as they whisper in anmols ear)
TASHI: psst did you get the gift for mummy/massi ma?
ragini looked suprised. alekh and vasu smile.
Ragini: what are you guys whispering about?.
Tammy : Today papa bought something very speacial for you
kushi: yes massi ma, partner bought you a gift as today is KC.
Anmol smiles and then looks at ragini *eye lock*partner show us what you bought.
anmol brings something out of his briefcase (today we get to see something come out of that case non work related. ๐Ÿ˜† its a small box he places it in raginis hand.)
anmol: open it (ragini looks up at him and then opens it)
she look in disbelief.๐Ÿ˜ฒ WOW ITs A DIAMOND NECKLACE JEALOUS MUCH!!! ๐Ÿ˜
Ragini: why did you bother buying me such an expensive gift, there was no need๐Ÿ˜ณ.
Anmol: nothing is worth as much as you ragini, just like these diamonds are beautiful and precious, thats exactly what you are to me ๐Ÿ˜ณ ( angini tune) *eye lock* tashi giggle in the backround
ragini blushes โ˜บ๏ธ
Vasu then interupts ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ก
vasu : ahem, now that everything is fine i believe ragini still needs to break her fast.
Anmol looks in shock.
Anmol: ๐Ÿ˜ฒ you still haven't eaten anything all day im so sorry you must be so hungry. i so sorry
Ragini : bas its ok, anyway i could of starved all day waiting for you ๐Ÿ˜ณ (aha im sorry couldnt resist adding that line)๐Ÿ˜†
Vasu: come on lets go or we will be here all night! they all leave but before ragini leaves
Anmol catched ragini's hand and pull her close to his body (ragini is facing away from anmol). he takes the necklace and puts it on ragini. ragini closes her eyes. And then anmol ses ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
anmol: wish i went missing everyday..๐Ÿ˜† (he loves that line) ragini smiles. she tries to run again but he still stops her.he comes even closer and whispers
You look so beautiful today, just how imagined, this is how i always dream for my bride to be.. just like this.๐Ÿ˜ณ
RAGINI'S DREAM COME TRUE!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ragini can't believe what shes hearing ๐Ÿ˜ณ
she then teases him and says.
Ragini: i don't know about you but im starving... chaale?
she then leaves and anmols smiles and follows behind her.
THEN THE LONG AWAITED KC SCENE ... THE END!

i hope you like my very imaginative writing some parts more than other can be a lil unrealistic but u can never stop ur self from dreaming ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

PLEASE COMMENT AND HIT THE LIKE BUTTON IF YOU LIKE MY POST ๐Ÿ˜ณ (sorry for any errors x)
Moheema x ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—this actually took longer to write than i expected. me sleepy ๐Ÿฅฑ ๐Ÿ˜†

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anizor thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very very nice, please continue, hopefully cvs steal your ideas too and give us good angini scenes.rozy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful and poise...

My fav postion!!!
anmol: wish i went missing everyday..๐Ÿ˜† (he loves that line) ragini smiles. she tries to run again but he still stops her.he come even closer and whispers
You look so beautiful today, just how imagined, this is howi always dream for my bride to be.. just like this.๐Ÿ˜ณ
RAGINI'S DREAM COME TRUE๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ragini can't believe what shes hearing ๐Ÿ˜ณ
she then teases him and says.

I seriously wish they use our scenes ๐Ÿ˜

I hope the creatives can read our mind
These two have some awesome intense chemistry when they are in teh same frame and we can get a treat watching their chemistry !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Mohema Fantastic Yaar & i will kill you if you don't Continue(warning๐Ÿ˜ก)๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sunna hai log pyaar main sayeri karne lagte hai..
yeha to sabhi angini ke pyaar main writer ban gaye hai๐Ÿ˜ณ

u r too good moheema...I will be not surprised if I get to see this scene with some little changesโ˜บ๏ธ

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Posted: 15 years ago
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moheema,that wa sone awesome scene,it has depth,i wish its how thye show,i have feeling Ragini has to run and hug him this time....please continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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moheemai loved the scene gr8 job dear plzzzzzzz do cont hope the ct use this scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@moheema..so beautiful ...๐Ÿ‘

enjoy reading it..๐Ÿ˜Š

good job..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 15 years ago
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anizor, savee_k, poo_s, pRaTiBhA.1990, shanti05, ANJANA,

sami01, jyothi_cool.

thanks guys ๐Ÿค— for the lovely comment,โ˜บ๏ธ so glad you liked it!! i loved reading all of your comments I WAS GRINNING๐Ÿ˜ƒ LIKE A FREAK FOR ABOUT 10 MIN ๐Ÿคฃ this forum has lots of talented writters aswell,๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ i thought i would give it a go.
Must admit Some scenes where a bit over the top๐Ÿ˜ณ, but eh im no director just wrote what i wanted too. ๐Ÿ˜† can't wait to see the real thing๐Ÿ˜, hope its 1000 times better than mine
xx โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ moheema:

Gr8 work with the prediction write up yaar!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...you sure can write scenes very well!๐Ÿ˜ƒ...Do continue your next part soon!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

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