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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 15 years ago

#191

Amrita darling....God another great one....and so Sunil and Shaan....😆😆😆😆...loved it...and can't wait to see...if something like this happens.......😆😆😆

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#192

just read it amrita !!!..............it is Awesome....and didn't i tell u that you know exactly how to engage the reader with your explicit descriptions.....!!!

I am loving every bit of it !!!

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#193

@Sonali and Shalini; thanks sweeties

@Sampar; thanks dear, in fact this is really happening in the serial😉

@Shriyaa; Thanks sweetie, I have fullfilled your wish gal

@Krishna; thanks darling, I had to change my OS as I knew about the coming track, so came with this and yes, it would be nice if we get to see Shaan too enjoying halwa with Sunil, while Madz will be shocked😆

@Mani; Thanks honey, now don't say that my thoughts are driving you nuts gal😆 (JK....means Just Kidding) I really take your words as a compliment for me😛

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#194

Lovely............I really enjoyed it ............
thanx 4 d pm.............

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#195

Amrita Gurl !!

Both those writeups were soooo brilliantly AWESOMEEEEEEEE !!!

Sorry for the late reply ...just logged in today after a week....Gonna be irregular for some time now....My laptop has conked off and I have just shifted base for Work....

So need to get meself a new laptop and a net connection..

Right now...M illegally accessing net for IFing while m supposed to research on HRD and OD....ROFL !!!

I will get skinned alive if my boss sees me ....LOL !!!

Dont get mad if I reply late....!! Dunno when i'll be able to log in again !!

Plz do keep PMing me the updates tho...Will reply to them whenever I can come online ...Pakka !!

Muahhhh !!!

Luv,

Vandu

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#196

Thanks Vandu babe (sorry I'm affected with Aboo's babe virus)

So sad to know about lappie darling and I hope your boss doesn't catch you

No worries at all, I will surely pm you when ever I write and take your time to read and comment

Hope everything with you would be fine soon, tgc

Smoochies,

Love,

Amrita

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#197

This scene is especially dedicated to the weekend party club members, basically to all Odhanians😛. I know that the song is quite old but still being this one as one of my all time favourites I wrote on this.

Haan, haan, I love you!

'Somehow I must ask Shantanu's opinion about how the party should be organized after all this is Mumbai and everything here is different, but how? I can't give him details as I want it to be a surprise' Khanak murmured to herself while walking up and down in the kitchen, biting her nails. A huge grin appeared on her face as she got a brilliant idea and ran away towards the living room.

Shaan was chatting open heartedly with his brother Akshay when Khanak entered into the living room searching for him. She stopped at the corner not wanting to disturb them but was expecting to get a chance to talk to Shaan. Sensing what Khanak was feeling Akshay gestured to Shaan so that he too could know she was standing there. 'Oh, Khanak come on and have a seat, by the way you would having better ideas than us' Shaan adjusted himself on the couch so that she too could sit there. 'Yes, I mean no, you will know better than me as I am new to this city and I don't know much about what people prefer and how it should be done, I would have known better if it was Dulwadi' said Khanak thinking that she would get ideas from both of them. 'Exactly, Khanak. You better stop talking about Dulwadi all the time and think about us now. Here in the city of Mumbai, it should be modern, colorful and the fragrance of love in the air is more important' Shaan was talking as though only Khanak and himself were present there, forgetting Akshay's presence. 'Wow! I'm proud of you Shaan, you are the best brother anyone can ever get' Akshay rose from the seat as his brain cells started to work with Shaan's statement. With a huge grin on his face he headed upstairs dreaming about his wife, babe, Khushboo.

Shaan too rose to his feet and turned to go away from Khanak as he did not want to talk or listen to her talking anymore. 'Shantanu, thank you' she said smiling at Shaan making him more confusing. He turned back to look at her in confusion and found her leaving happily from there. He wondered about what she was up to and thought she might be trying to surprise him with something unexpected this time. He hid his smile reminding himself that the war is still going on between them and he would not give up this time.

Khanak entered into the room later that night after finalizing her schedule for the very next day. Shaan was sleeping on the bed in his office clothes and his shoes on. Smiling at her budthal husband she walked to the bed and slowly removed his shoes and adjusted the blanket over him. As soon as she turned to walk away from there she felt his hand held onto her wrist. With a single pull she fell onto him, covering his face with her silky hair. Shaan breathed in the lovely smell of her hair and slowly put the strands of hair aside to get a view of her blushed face. She has lowered her gaze, trying to hide the awakening of her senses as they were so close to each other. He caressed her cheeks with the back of his palm and she responded to his touch closing her eyes slowly, tilting her head to one side. He lifted his head and gently placed a soft kiss on her forehead and again lay down on his pillow. Surprised with his actions she got up from the bed and slowly moved away brushing his fingers with hers. 'Khanak' Shaan called out reaching out his arm as he woke up from his dream. 'Oh, god, Khanak is never leaving me even in my dreams' he murmured to himself while hugging to a pillow.

Shaan glanced at the room and found Khanak was not there, so he checked the washroom thinking she might be there. His heart pondered at once feeling that he has done something wrong by avoiding her all the time so he should go and make up with her. He heard her giving instructions to Harilal when he was half way to down stairs. So she was up to this trying to arrange something grand to say ILU to him, he wondered. Smiling he went back to the room thinking that he only has to wait for the next evening to hear what his ears has longed for so long. Wishing that time could run in a faster speed he went back to sleep sensing the joy and happiness around him.

Shaan tried so hard not to ask about the party while they got ready for it. She looked beautiful as ever trying to hook up the blouse while standing in front of the mirror. Shaan was mesmerized at the sight of her biting her lower lip with closed eyes in frustration while fighting against the tight and revealing blouse. Without his knowledge he was dragged to her with an invisible force and slowly he reached his trembling fingers to help her in hooking up the blouse. Khanak opened her eyes when his cold hands brushed against hers, sending chills all over her body. He was taken back with the sudden change in her feeling embarrassed trying to cover her chest with her hands. He understood what was in her eyes so he stepped back quickly without saying a single word to her. Khanak closed her eyes thinking about why she loses control every time she feels his presence next to her with quickening heartbeats.

Though Madhvi and Sunil were the hosts of the party the spot light was on Khanak and Shaan. They have arranged a special photographer to capture the sweet and memorable moments for future needs. When it was their turn Shaan tried to be as close as he could be with her making her go weak on her knees. Khanak was uncomfortable in the sexy sari her mother-in-law gave her to wear on this special night. Her nervousness was doubled when Shaan went to meet some of his friends leaving her all alone. She did not complain but tried her best to escape from the greedy stares of the men while he was gone. 'Come on pretty lady, want to dance with me?' a guy dragged her towards the dance floor while she was refusing. 'Please leave me, leave me now' Khanak cried trying free her hand. All of a sudden she felt her hand free when a strong hand held the guy's collar tightly. With terror on her eyes she turned to look at her savior with widened eyes. 'Shantanu?' she uttered his name. Shaan stared at her angrily while still holding on to the guy's collar. 'Shantanu, leave him now' she cried reaching her hand to touch him trying to drag him away from there. 'Why? Why do you want me to leave him, why?' Shaan spoke firmly, gazing into her eyes but ignoring her pleads. 'I don't want you to do this' Khanak murmered slowly still trying to calm down her husband. 'So you are afraid that I might get hurt, right? But why?' he demanded for her answer. 'Because'because I love you' she spoke out the words loud enough alerting Sunil, who let out a sigh while witnessing this from far away. Shaan released the guy from his held and blinked his quickly finding it difficult to believe what he just heard 'What? Did you say that you love me?' Knowing his game Khanak answered back 'haan haan I love you, Shantanu' she lowered her gaze when she heard a huge round of applauds from the crowd. Khanak turned to leave from there feeling shy, but she could not take more than three steps when she was forced with the desire in his voice, singing aloud for her.

Chookar Mere Mann Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishaara

Touching my heart what was the gesture you gave it

Badla Yeh Mausam, Lage Pyaara Jag Saara

That I felt the season has changed and the world felt beautiful

Tu Jo Kahe Jeevan Bhar Tere Liye Mein Gaoon

If you say, I will sing my entire life for you

Geet Tere Bolon Pe Likhta Chala Jaoon

I will write songs on what you speak

Mere Geeton Mein Tujhe Dhoonde Jag Saara

The world will look for you in my songs

Aaja Tera Aanchal Yeh Pyaar Se Mein Bhar Doon

Come, I shall fill your fringe with love

Khushiyaan Jahan Bhar Ki Tujhko Nazar Kar Doon

I will show you the happiness of the world

Tu Hi Mera Jeevan, Tu Hi Jeene Ka Sahaara

You are my life; You are my reason to live

Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#198

aww that was so beautiful thank u for the pm

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: ruky786
aww that was so beautiful thank u for the pm

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Thank you so much, Ruky, so glad to hear it from you😊

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 15 years ago

#200

amrita di love u for this awesome os.........loved every scene of it😍........ma heart beats were running so fast at shan's dream scene ...😳.....loved your choice of song for shan too....gosh i will be imagining this scene again n again this eve nw.....😍😍

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