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Posted: 14 years ago
superbb!!!

cant wait for confrontatioN!!!


update ASAP!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I hope this knocks some sense into his mind..i hope he finds out about the baby soon
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 37


drivers drives maan to the hospital around 8pm
darr sa gaya maan...himaat nahi juta pata use dehkne ki
kya kahtha... kya samjhta us pagli ko
khud bhi to kuch nahi samjh pa raha ta
Kya kahta woh kaise use se door ho gaye tha
haalaat se, kuch khud se majboor ho gaye tha
madhoshi rula deti hai, kab ye maana tha
uske dil ke afsaane wohi dastoor ho gaye tha
dil tera reza reza hai, kaise sambhale tujhko
khudaya usse kaise yeh qusoor ho gaye tha
phir bhi khadam khud ba khud uski taraf badthe
najane kya kahaghi... najane kya sunna chahe gi
kya woh kah pata jo woh sunna chathi thi
kaise kashmash thi Maan ki maan mein
kaise lauta tha usku uski zindhagi ki khushi
kaise shamil karta use aapne bemaiyne ki duniya mein
phir bhi kuch kashish thi jo chala gaya uske kamre main
nazare maano khil si utti uski deedar se
baby~papa aagyee not able to dance..
very sick & weak
her blood red eyes still twinkled with delight looking at him
kuch na kaha kuch na sunna
Maan ek pal use door nahi rah paya use is itna behaal deehk kar
aapne bahoon main leekar choomne laga
... his hand snaked into her
back and into her her hair... his lips kissing away every drop of tear
that rested on her cheeks she rested her head in his chest & he suddenly
felt her weight falling on him completly... he held & pulled her face
up to see she just collapsed, maan panicked & called the doctor
doc checks her pulse & heart rate, checked the monitor readings
doc - aap kahan the itne dino se, laparvahi ki bhi haad hoti hain
maan - ji... confused
doc - she is finally fallen a sleep
maan gets up to sit on the chair she get anxious
her heart rate shoots, breathing abnormaly
doc - aap please thodi deer wait kijiya..please don't disturb her
she has'nt slept for more than 72hrs now, do you even realize what
it can do to her in this condition, it can be fatel

doctor left the room
maan stroked her hair & looked at her pulling her curls away...she was so pale
her cheeks were soaked in her tears
he looked at her still dressed in the saree and hugged her
kyun aise karti ho? kaise pagalpan hain tumhara?
kyun mujh iskadar se juda rahena chati ho
he looked a change for her...found her still cluctching his shirt
hidden under the spread... he closed his eyes in pain & held her close
to his heart & pulled the dori of her blouse as he pulled the sleeves
the skin still bared the faded marks ..he kissed her very softly, she snuggled
with his touch & blushed with a slight smile. he unrapped the saree
and changed her into his shirt she was cluctching
he sliped in the spread next to her ...he could'nt sleep a wink
rah rah kar uska yeh haal use tadpa jata
woh yah nahi samj pata ki geet ko jada kya pareshan karta
woh khud yah phir uska pass na hona
she pulled him closer into her mano ek jism do jaan ho jaise
ek duje ke bin adhure hon jaise
na kuch kaha na kuch suna ek tujhe main sama gaye ho jaise
jo ehsaas unhe jodhe rahta har ghadi mano woh ehsaas ka naam ban gaye ho jaise
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bp9XoMd1d1Q&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

maan got up early when the nurse walked in clearing her throat
she shied & looked away seeing them like that
maan sat up...geet still did'nt let go off him
maan slowly pulled away from her & went to the wash room
to freshen up....when he came back geet was up looking for him
maan closed his eyes & rubbed his forehead
maan - tum kyun utt gayee
geet - mujhe bhook laghi hain baby~mujhe bhi😳

maan looks around gives her the fruits
nurse - nahi nahi...give her juice first...solids ek dam se nahi
nurse tells the attendant to get some juice
she checked the montior & says 11hrs of sleep is good to start with
maan was relieved
maan makes her drink the juice
she vomits the whole thing...maan got worried & tensed
nurse - its ok...normal hain, she has not had any thing for so many days
nurse sponges her with a soapy water & gets her dressed while maan was
waiting outside, daadi calls maan
maan - ji daadi
daadi - how is geet now? did she sleep?
maan - umm
daadi - subha se media persons are calling for u
shall I ask dev to look into it?
maan - I will see to it in the office don't worry
maan calls sasha
maan - arrange for a press meet
sasha - lekin hum kahege kya
maan - tell the whole truth, we don't have anything to hide
sasha - but
maan - do as I say
sasha - ok MK


maan came back to find geet looking fresh & cherpy
he smiled & kissed her forehead....

baby~mera mama papa dancing weakly!!!
maan kuch der niharta phir muskaratha
phoolone tumse mahek churaye ho jaise,
surajne kirne payee ho tumse,
kitna bhi door hojavoon tumse pas rahthi ho kaise?
geet - jooth nahi tha na with teary eyes
he wiped her tears... leaned forward cupping her face for a moment their
eyes met in the bright suns rays falling across through the french window
beside the bed he slowly took her warm lips into his filling their heart
with the warmth of their togatherness, he slowly deepened the kiss making
it breathless for either of them. they still did'nt want to break free from
the feel it was different, how many times have they kissed before..still this
was different... mano hooten se hooten nahi rooh se rooh mil rahen ho,
saasoon ki to mano zaroorat hi na ho...
maan nahi!!! sab sach tha, har pal har ehsaas, woh har jasbaat
geet - phir kyun mujhe pareshan kiya
hugging him with sigh of relief resting her cheek on his chest
maan - kyun itna zid karti ho
geet - main aise hi hoon
maan - aise hi rahna...hate u pulls her curls behind kissing her cheeks
geet - can't stay without u
maan - jaan gaya hoon!!!!
aapna sab kuch uska kar beta tha,
neiend uska, khwaab uska, hain ibaadat bhi usi ka
jism aur rooh sabhi kuch hai amaanat usi ka
badlaye main chatha to bus khushi usi ki
bus yeh khilkhilatha chehra... jisme Maan ki duniya bus chali thi
aab to bus yehi duwa karta
rahe woh muskurati sada na gam ki parchi chooyee use
bhale isme me mere tu dukhon ka zanjaal de de
kaise tadap thi jo khuda se khud ke liya dard bhi kabool tha
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L1Egb9ok6XA&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

maan made her have some juice...she was too tired ...dossed off again
maan tucked her in the spread & went to the doctor
geet pulled him back
maan - umm
geet - aap mujhe chood kar nahi jana
maan - umm!!
after some time maan checked with the doctor
maan - how is she now?
doc - she is much better, you can take her home today evening
after the final check up
maan - umm!!

maan calls brij
maan - brij maan here
brij - aap itni subha subha
maan - woh mujhe tumse geet ke bare main hi...
brij - woh hospital main hain
maan - I am in the hosiptal with her now
I wanted to say sorry, mere laparvahi ki wajah se
brij - please maan aap aise mat boliya
we are really thankfull to u & savithri devi for all the support
maan - tum meri baat nahi samjh rahe
brij - I am on my way to the hospital will see u in 10mins
maan wondered wat will he tell him & how will he explain the whole thing
it all seemed so complicated

precap
Shaadi ka proposal..umm!!! 😲😲😲
VM CREDIT GOES TO NaimaKaShMaaneetSR & Rosh88ravi
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan.. beautiful update dear.... please update the next part soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor lil one !!!.............muskan where did u find the one with crutches !!!

beautifully written ...
.........i think u still let Maan off lightly. seeing the weakness of the lil one i m totally mad at Maan.

looking forward to next update !!???!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update next part soon wanted to see maan shaadhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
So atlast shadi ka proposal! Whn wil he knw abt geet's pregnancy? Plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT👍🏼👏SOOOOOO SWEET & CUTE👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
i really dont want anything to happen to this baby..! it will actually hurt me- so cutee na..Maan better not mishandle geet again..!!!
loved the update- loved the way you described it- loved your quick update ;)
Precap- lol kis ki shaadi ?? ;)lol
~Sadaf~
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muskan di,
my mouth is open what a precap
Shadiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww jaldi se inke shadi karado plsssssssssssssss
baby to dance hi karta rehjayega
lovly di
pls update soon can't wait aap to hame pure pagal karje chodogi
plsssssssssssssssssssssssss di update soon
can't wait
love u

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