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Posted: 14 years ago

sameera lost her baby...tat was bad....

geet also missing maan...
so,this part was really a sad one....
i really felt bad 4 all 4 of them....
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 34


pinky's house

pinky's father - where is geet?
pinky - kal raat se ghar nahi aayi lagta hain
father - why did'nt u tell me earlier?
pinky - i just checked her room now !!
father - how can be so careless about her? don't u know she is pregnant
they try calling Maan his number was not reachable
they try calling sasha, she does'nt have clue, tried out all the possible means
it was getting late in the evening & decided to inform brij
brij & darji rushed to Delhi
pinky - Savitri devi ko phone karoon kya
pinky's father - nahi woh theek nahi hoga

MEERA'S HOUSE
dev gets Meera home & makes her lie down
Meera - aab to tumhe mujhe se shaadi karni ki koi zaroorat nahi
dev - shaayad hain tumhare liye nahi ..aapne liye & hugs her
meera cries ...dev calms her down craddling her head
after their lunch on saturday
meera - woh Geet wahan thi na
dev - don't worry..infact she did'nt say a word & left from there
meera - bro aur geet ka kuch hain kya?
dev - not sure ..tum to bro ko jaanti hoo
meera - sameera ke baad to toot se gaye the
dev - kabhi kabhi toh unki berukhi se darr hi lagta hain


IN OUTHOUSE SATURDAY NIGHT
geet sat their cuddled up in the corner..
woh mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakte
unho ne kha tha..humesha mere saath rahenga
jooth kaise ho sakta hain..
she looks at the mehandi...
unhone he to laagayee thi, phir kyun khaha ki sab jooth hain
she rubs her hand in disbelief
mehendi laaghi hain..phir joot kaise howa..nahi jooth nahi!!!
maano na din ka hosh tha na raat ka..
na duniya ki phikar na khud ki chinta
bus ek hi ratth lagayi baihti rehthi..jhooth nahi tha..woo naraz kyun hogayee?
Kabhi zindagi se gila karke roti..to kabhi maut ki hum dua karke roti..
ajeeb silsila hai namaz-e-nafrat ka.. qaza kar ke bi roye, ada kar ke bi roye

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sRCRPuIzyDQ&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
TENT HP SATURDAY NIGHT
Maan samjhe nahi paata
kyun use dehkta toh lagta ki woh uske liye banayi gayi ho,
kyun yaad karta toh lagta ki woh sirf usike khwab banaaye gaye ho,
kyun use paane ke liye jaan dene ko mann karta hai?
kyun uski yaad mein dil baar baar aahein bhartaa hai?

mano fiza bhi bagawat karne lagi thi...baarish ne to maan ke dil ko
bhigo hi diya....baarish ki boondon main uski tapish jo thi!!!
chain milta saanson ko, milta dil ko Maan ke Qaraar
kar ke apne bahoon ka har jab woh Maan ke man ka aag bhuja thi
uski tasvir dehk kar Maan kuch aise duba karte hai
na jaane use Maan itna yaad kyun karte hai
bhige bhige is kadar woh barsat mein chala karte hai
har boond mein unhe kuch aise ehsaas kiya karte hai
raato ki tanhayi mein chand tale baitha karte hai
sitaro mein unhe dehk kar aapne dil ke aafsaane likha karte hai

SUNDAY MORNING HP
maan reached the guest house & got ready
munshi - sab log aa gaye sir ji lekin
lekin kya munshi ji
..he spat in anger
munshi - sab log land nahi deena chate..ek aadh log maan gaye hain
maan - darji ne kya kaha?
munshi ji was silent
kya kaha in raised voice
munshi - ji woh nahi aaye
maan cluctched his fist & met the LO
LO1 & LO2 - we have discussed with darji & we are fine in giving our land
maan - umm!!
munshi - few others have not agreed
maan - take me to darji's house his house

Maan & munshi go to Handa hawali
when maan entered the hawali...uske kadam khud ba khud badthe chale gaye
jaise koi apna pan tha..jaise uski khilkhilhat gunjti ho in deewaron mein
jaise uski mehak thi charoon taraf..jaise sab kuch geet se judtha sa laaga
samjh nahi paya ..kaise sukoon tha use is hawali main
kyun apne si lagti woh , woh chaadhar, woh chaath,
sab me mano geet samayi thi...na darwaaza khat khataya na izajat manghi bus
mehsoos karne laga us sukoon ko
papa ji - how can I help u..
maan khoya khoya..sa khada raha
munshi - woh darji
papa ji - there is some emergency so my son & darji had to rush to delhi
munshi - when r they expected back?
papa ji - not sure
munshi - sir ji challen
maan - umm!!
uska to maano dil hi nahi kar raha tha wahan se jane ka
jaate jaate kehta.kuch dabi dabi si aawaaz mein...
aapke haveli ke fiza main geet kaise samyee hain!!!
phir laga ke mano woh us ka pagal pan tha!!!

SUNDAY MORNING PINKY'S HOUSE
Brij - when did u see her last..was she upset with some thing?
I hope she does'nt do some thing silly again
pinky - no no ..actually she was very happy, she even danced in the party
Brij - wat party
pinky - Maan sirs brothers engagement party
brij - then
pinky - actually there was some tension in the party, so all of us left abruptly
darji - did she come back with u
pinky - actually not
brij - why don't u call maan ?
pinky - trying to call him ... unka phone not reachable aaraha hain
brij - unke family me kisi ko call kar
pinky - unki daadi hain..savitri devi... unhe karoon?
brij - mujhe number do main karta hoon
pinky gives the number to brij
brij - good morning ..sorry to bother u.. I am geet's brother Brij
daadi - good morning
brij - actually geet us party wala raat se ghar nahi aayee... so we
just wondered if u know any thing at all
daadi was shocked & speechless...she remembered geet walkig maan out
in that temperment!!! she just feared ..the unknown
brij - hellow?? hellow?
daadi - hain!!!!..nahi hamein nahi pata..lekin hum pata karte hain daadi worried & tensed


precap
Geet hospitalized
CREDIT TO VM H05Sana
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment it really motivates to write
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski... i'm back sweet heart.. I'm commenting it straight away !!!!

sad sad part.... I loved the update.. but feeling bad for Maan and Geet... looks like something bad is gonna happen.. Maan is not in ton and if Geet is hospitalised and Dadi comes to know that she is pregnant.. she will defintely doubt about her morale.. yaar don't do that.. I want Maan to admit her in hospital..

I know now Maan is fighting with himself.. he is not ready to accept his feelings for her.. amy be due to his bitter past... but I want him to accept his love for her and then know the truth.. I want an unconditional love ....

Hope to see Maan-geet togather ion next update.. but donno what Muskaan has in store for us 😆😆😆😆

thanks much for the update and VM tooo... love you sweety

😊
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope everything i'll okay with Geet & Maan nothing happen to the babyawesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no maan and geet together today😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.............i cant see maan and geet like that...........precap geet hospitalised.😭😭😭😭😭plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
What ever u do pls dont kill baby 😭............... otherwise Iam gonna kill u 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg plz dont anything happen to geet or da baby :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one.. hope geet is fine.. luved maan's emotions.. want maan to knw abt geet....do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one....iam sure u will bring the pregnancy issue in front of maan next..hope so...geet hospitalised..!!😲😲😲waiting for ur next part...update soon!!! rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!!!

i hope geet n baby will b finE!!

maan cum back sooN!!!

update ASAP!!!

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