Written Update - Oct 18 (AviTa Union)

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hi everyone...im Jaz 😳...since today was such a monumentous episode for us AviTa fans...and i didnt see a written update...i thought id go ahead and do one...for all those who dont know me...i tend to input personal comments to bare with me...for those of you that do know me...Enjoy! 😉

oh oh..this episode reminded me of this song so thought id share

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xdQEQ-PRkZU

October 18

Part One
Episode opens from where it left off...OUR Hero...i mean...Arpi's Hero enters with full dhamaka (i love his "dagar dam" score 😳) ...his goons are with him and the lion is roaring...instantly a bunch of other goons with dandas rush out...one dressed in a brown/maroon kurta charges at Avi with full intention of hitting him with the danda...with out missing a beat Avi just punches him square in the face knocking the dude out (😲...so i know violence is not the answer...any 4yr old will tell you that...but OMG...im swooning! 😳😳) ...the song "Nahin Hona Tha" from Pardes beings playing as Avi advances to Arpi... (the other loser goons are smart enough not to attack 😆😆😆) ...Avdesh is about to enter the Mandap but gives Arpi's dad a dirty look then enters...meanwhile one of Avi's goons (sorry dont know his name...Ashu...some help please 😆😆) ...he stands between Jagu (jagtap) and Chiru (chirag)...putting his arms around their shoulders...on the Mandap...Avi walks right past Mr. Creeper (Pappu) ...Avi cant take his eyes off of Arpi... (omg...the look on his face just melts my heart! 👏👏👏) ...Avita have eyelock as all else looks one...Avi looks down and sees the zeher ki bottle in Arpi's hands...she looks up at him slowly...he holds his hand out...she places the bottle in his hand and Avi throws it in the fire... (haye haye...kya scene hai 😍) ...

Pappu is being a cry-baby and asks Arpi's Dad
(whats his name too? ashu? 😆) ...to do something...Dad tells Avi that coming into someone elses mandap is gundai and that he cant do that...Avi isnt paying attention...Dad says that the girl belongs to everyone (tauba...🤢 what is he saying? 🤢🤢) she is the izzat of the society...you cant entice her like this...Avi give Dad a glare...he then holds his hand out and looks at Arpi...she looks at her father and then very deliberately puts her hands in Avi's hand... (Pappu ki muh dekhne layak hai 🤣) ...More AviTa eye lock...Arpi's dad says that this isnt right...Arpi is a kid and doesnt understand the difference between right and wrong...but you are big bad gunda (damn right he his issi liyeh toh hum saab usse itna pyaar karte hai! 😳) ...Dad says that even a woman like Sita had to endure taunts...Arpi is just a plain girl...everything will be ruined...you cant take her like this..Avi thinks about what Dad is saying...Dad then asks Arpi's Mom to make Arpi understand...Mom says, what can she do...more AviTa eye lock (dono ki akhoon akhoon mein baatein..haye main marjawaan 👏👏👏) ..Avi then reaches down...gets a pinch of sindoor...hesitates for a second... and...FILLS HER MANG! (*woot woot*...i say again...*woot freaking woot* Rosh...tu kithe hai!? )...everyone is shocked...Avi's goons are happy...Chiru is maha impressed by Avi (so random 😆😆) ...Mom is happy...Pappu is blabbering to himself...then he cries that Arpi is his wife and what not...no one is paying attention....AviTa are lost in each others eyes... (someone send a search party 😛😛) Arpi bends to touch Avi's feet but he stops her...he touches her face and shakes his head 'no'...then he takes her hand in his and they squeeze tight...

Avi leads Arpi out of the mandap and they stand in front of her mom...Avi says he doesnt have much to say...all he can do is promise that he will always protect Arpi...he will always give her respect and love
(hell ya you will!! 😳😳) ...Mom is maha impressed...Avi puts his hands together...he says that if Mom gives permission...he will take Arpi with him...Mom nods 'yes'....AviTa bend down to take ashirwad...Mom blesses them to be happy always...AviTa turn to leave but Arpi runs to Mom crying... (haila...sad..sad bidaai song playing 😭😭😭) ...Arpi asks for forgiveness...she did what she did because she was desperate...Mom says she isnt upset....but asks Arpi to never to cry again...

Part 2
Pappu crying that people will definitely make fun of him (lo...karlo baath...thats a no brainer!! 🤣) ...

AviTa walking past her Dad and everyone glaring at each other..Avi simply tells Arpi "chalo"...and she does
(haw...never has that word been so...*sigh*...dreamy 😍) AviTa walk off...

Dad goes to Mom...he is pissed...he says that all these years you have supported me...but today when i needed you the most you back stabbed me...
(im gonna murder this man! 🤬) ...i understand...you caused all this...lets go home...ill teach you such a lesson that you wont be able to wipe anyones tears all your life...suddenly a hand comes on Dad's shoulder...and...its our Sher (of course 😛) ...he says that along with being his (dads) wife..she is also Avi's Saasu-Maa...if after today i come to know that you have bothered her...then ill come after you and then some (he said it in hindi much better 😆😆) ...Arpi is maha impressed...Avi pats him on the shoulder and then folds his hands to his Saas...then they leave...

Part 3
Pappu seeing them walk off goes after Arpi saying she is his...he goes between AviTa and grabs Arpi's hand (🤣...yeh chichora toh marega...he's a dead man 😆😆) ...Avi sees him touching Arpi and is not a happy camper...Pappu repeats that she is his and cant go anywhere...he tells Avi that Arpi is his (pappu's) wife...Avi looks at Arpi...they have their knowing eyelock...then...TASH! Avi's hand to Pappus cheek (kya thappar mara...wah wah...👏👏👏...so hard ke haat ke chap bhi rehgaya)...the camera pans down and we see that Pappu has wet his dhooti (😲😲 are you for real
🤣🤣🤣) ...Pappu lets go of Arpi's hand...Avi puts his hand forward which Arpi takes...they walk off hand in hand...

Puri is complaining that the band is not playing...he says that this is the first time Avi is leaving without killing someone...the band begins playing and Puri is dancing
(haye...ther...me do nazar uttaring for my Puri 😉😉) ...his other goon tells everyone to dance because today love has won...no one dances do he says he will kill them if they dont (
🤣🤣 i need to hire him for one of my parties 🤣🤣🤣) ....everyone is dancing while Arpi's family and Pappu's family watch on in horror....

Precap: Bhauji is saying to the pundit that one of these days dont be surprised if Avi comes home with his dulhan without consulting anyone...Avi hears this and feels bad...Bhauji's goon says that Avi is here and theres a girl with him...Bhauji goes and Arpi comes out...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jaz, he's sarvana😆, who stands in btw
Arpi's dad name is Mahesh😡😆
Edited by remosalsa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks! hopefully i can remember that! ha ha ha

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jaz, this was Avdhesh's dia to her dad🤣
Avdhesh 😳😳 to Arpi's dad😎...........................{that lion roars music suits him perfectly😳👏, here on this dial} 👏 aap sayad bhool rahe hai engineer babu😡😎😎, ki ee aab sirf aapki dharam patni nahi😎😎 humri sasu maa bhi hai😎😎 agar aaj ke baad pata chala naa 😎😎 ki inhe paresaan kiye ho 😎 purana 😎 mool 😎 sood 😎 jod 😎 ke hisaab kar denge 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎 { Omg, i am so happy, finally he got what he deserved😡😡😡, still her dad needs to get more😡😡.but for time being, this dhamki will work hopefully}
he pats on his shoulder🤣........................🤣🤣🤣
& com'g to ur update, its just awesome👏👏, i missed reading them so much😳😳, & loved the comments which u have added👏👏
today i made only posts of Avdhesh's dialg on the epi here😳😳
Loved all the dial he spoke today😳👏😍☺️
& Kanpuriya, was always an awesome👏😆👏😆
Edited by remosalsa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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luvvvvvved it Jaz⭐️⭐️
Vista
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the update Jaz.
Let;s hope they keep the pace going. I don't want this serial to be another sisters in law drama. I want the action to kick back in with the romance in the background.
Perhaps, Mahesh the snake with Pappu the Perv will retaliate and we can get some action.
BTW Jaz don't u think Avdhesh's BG and right hand men are cool and reliable unlike Dutta's chickens. 😆
It is possible to put the written update thread as a sticky so that everyone can see. It has been pushed way back.😊
Edited by fuzzyface - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Vista: glad you enjoyed it 😃😃

@ fuzzer: yaar...kya kaar rahi ho...today...GKD was awesome...LTL was just...*blush* 😉...im here drooling over Puri...and you mention the chickens! 😆😆😆 Avi's goons are flawless...Dutta's chickens are just...🤬...and ill let the GM know about making the written updates thread a sticky 😃

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks jaz for the update

i had missed out on some points so i put just the highlight


and i knew ashu wud get the dialogue right

we had discussion what wud avdesh speak

all he said was chalo heheee

see he atleast respected arpi mom

others he glared and growled


chirag was very happy he was clapping hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chirag is such a loser...but i swear...he 's getting ideas...dont be surprised if he finds himself a girl and tries to do the same thing that Avi did...then again...dont be surprised if that girls brothers beast Chiru into a pulp...ha ha

JAZ

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Jaz...aaj ka update toh bantaa tha boss!!!
first, That sher music everytime Avdesh walks, is OMG....Its just goes so well with his furious look....
then pappu ka toh banna pappu....but i didnt expect Pappu to be left so easily...just one tamacha?? I mean, all tht he did to Arpi, just one tamaacha??....no-no...nOT HAPPENING.....
*shakes head in negation*
*stands on strike* we want more punches and kicks to Pappu....Pappu ki maange poori karo...
btw, did he wet his loogi??...what was tht camera was looking on the ground near his feet when he leaves Arpi's hand in fear????
then did anyone observe Arpi's youngest bro's reaction...he was so enjoying...I am telling u, saala is already in love with jeeja....
and Now I wanna see Avdesh doing Arpi's father's dhulaai....woh jo chamkaadad ki tarah jeeb nikaaltaa hai na, woh hi kheench le!!!
BTW, I loved how he notices the poison in Arpi's hand and then extends his hand for her to hand over the bottle............awwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
aaj toh mazaa aajaya!!

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