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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
tat was very bad muskan....
y did u do this????after all those passionate moments,maan left geet?????
in serial too,they r not together....n u r doing this in ur ff too????
plz do something naa....
i want 2 see them 2gether again....
although know tat,they cant live without each other....but make it soon okk???
but loved ur update...
n hope u r better now...😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update.....but di..u didn't PM me.😔..😲...Y?????becoz of tht i thought u haven't updated and missed to read it....!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Muskan di,

love u great update sorry for late comment love the scencs btw maan n geet maan is to passinate n love to see how geet always known that what maan felt on that time😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

feel bad for maan he realy love madly for geet but bebas ho jata hain n when he known that geet is pregent
kitna bhagta hai ow dur use lekin fir wapas aajata hain lekin what happen now how come he leaves geet alone
poor geet I m crying for her 😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I don't want to sepreation btw maaneet pls di kuch karona pls bring them together as always u made plssssssssssssssss di
pls update soon di can't wait to see what is next plssssssssssss u made my weekend but sad for maaneet
plssssssssssssssssssssssss udpate soon
love u😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 33


maan - mat bandoo mujhe khud se..mera koi aks nahi
geet - lekin is aks ka main kya karoon holding her stomach looking down
jo mujhe pal pal aapke taraf kenchtha rah tha hain
maan did'nt notice wat she was pointing at
maan walks out..is aks ka koi wajood nahi
mujhe nahi rakhna tumse koi vastha
& bangs the door
geet drops down crying....woh mujhe aise nahi chod sakte..she kept mumering
her mumering faded in the darkness of the night..with her tears leaving trails
on her cheeks...geet snapped up when she heard some cry in the hall

dev - meera don't break down like this
meera - wat will I do now?
dev - nothing will happen, trust me
geet came out of maans room & looked down
meera - lekin, if we don't get married in next 15days!!!
it will start to show that I am pregnant. its already 4 months.
geet stopped at the steps hearing wat she heard
dev - we are definitly getting married
meera - lekin NT
dev - she won't be able do any thing
meera - sab mere ghalthi hain, I should'nt have involved u in all this
dev - tumhare kya ghalthi hain if u were raped ..he stopped
meera - why did u have to get into all this
dev - I am ur friend meera..I am just doing wat I could
meera - aab to mera saat tumhare family reputation bhi stake main hain
dev - wait we will talk to bro he will surely be help us out of all this
meera breaths restlessly
dev - let me get u some water for u
dev goes to get water & meera faints & falls down
geet rushes down to see her bleed...geet screems DEV DEV!!!
dev comes listening to geets voice in stress
geet - is halat mein iska bleed karna teehk nahi
dev lifted meera & put her in the car geet supported her head
the reached the hospital dev rushed her to the OT & geet filled the forms
geet raps up the saree around as she joins dev infront of the OT
it was more than couple of hrs he was getting restless & worried for meera
doc - Mr.Dev excessive bleeding ka wajah se she has lost her baby
we are really sorry
(geet was shocked)
dev - how is she now?
doc - she is stable now... you can take her home tomorrow morning
dev - can we meet her now
doc - sure..we will be bring her to the ward in 15 mins
geet
murmured babaji yeh sab kya hogaya
dev walks in to the ward after meera was moved from the OT
dev moved close to her & held her hand meera hugged him & broke down
meera - my child...why did this happen?? in sab mein uski kya galti hain?
uski kya galti hain
geet watched them from outside & wondered..how much meera was attached to the baby
when it was not even her mistake in the whole pregnancy...
geet looked at her stomach & felt guilty for her madhoshi....
which the baby will have to pay for now!!!
mano aapne galthi ka ehsaas ho, mano aapne gudhgarsi ki tadap
nahi samjhi to woo ki kya kar guzar rahi thi...
aab jub samjh mein aayaa to samjh nahi payee ki kya kare!!
kaise saware is masoom ki zindaghi??
geet~sorry baby
baby~love u mama
geet~i will get u the best parents in this world
baby~mujhe mera mama papa hi chahiya
geet~tumhare papa to humse koi wasta hi nahi rakhna chathe hain
baby~papa hume chod kar nahi ja sakte..he promised
geet~wo hume chod kar chale gayee..
& cried out loud..
she took a cab & wet to the outhouse...looked for him waited for him
it was saturday morning 5.00am..
geet pulled out his shirt & cuddled up & sat down next to the bed weeping
she sat there the whole day crying & waiting endlessly...
woo mujhe aise chod kar nahi jaa sakte..he said he hates me..
he said he will be there with me always..
fir kyun mujhe aise chod kar chale gaye
kaise pagalpan tha, kaise intazar, kaise tadap
jo door rahkar maan ko pal pal mehsoos hoti !!!

IN HP
maan was cutting the woods maddly


Kya main uske qaabil hun ?
Kya main uske manzil hun ?

fir kyun sanson me rahta hai naam uska?
Kaise kahoon ke main ghafil hun?
kyun tanha palon me aaye zikr sirf uska?
kyun lagta hai tujh me shamil hun?


munshiji came scared looking at him in that temperment
munshi ji - sab teehk hain na?
maan spat back - kyun kya hua mujhe?
munshi ji - nahi mujhe laga ki aap pareshan ho
maan - do u work...don't bother about me
munshi ji - the landowners will be coming to meet u at 11.00am
maan - umm!! strin tone
har pal har lamha mano bus geet ka khayal uske zehan main rehata
na kuch kha pata na kuch kar pata
har jagah, har taraf usika chehra nazar aata

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LMERn8xpDMY&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
IN OUTHOUSE
aise kya khata hui hai humse jo wo humse itna ruth gay
befawa to hum na the, phir bhi kyun wo hume bewafa kar gaye
wada kiya tha unhone kabhi juda na hone ka
to phir mujhe ku mili saza usse juda hone ka
bepanha madhoshi jo thi hum dono may
to bhala ye gile shikwe kaise ho gaye
ek rah may chal rahe the ek dusre ke karib itne
to phir kyun ye fasle hum dono may ho gaye?
yeh kaise ehsaas tha ki simat si jaati geet uski saya main bhi!!!


IN HP
Maan met the land owners(LO)
few of them protested & quoted high demands
maan - the dam construction will be good for ur fields
LO1 - wats the point in having the dam when we don't have the land
maan - u all wanted a dam to be made & now every thing is approved
u guys are backing off
LO2 - we did'nt expect u to make the dam on our land
maan - it is a loss for u guys!!! if this plan fails then govt will not
approve for any other dam project in this area
..
darji - we need some time to think about it


maan - I can give u time untill tomorrow
darji - we will talk among ourselves
maan wispers to munshiji - yeh kaun hain?
munshi ji - sharpanch hain yehan ke..inki badi chalthi hain..
agar yeh maan gaye to sab man jayen ghe
maan - umm!!!

maan comes back to the room he was getting restless thinking about geet, he decides to stay out & drives away to camp in the jungle lands up tenting in the same place where they met for the first time
kaise shadhish thi khudrat ki...jis lamhoon ko bhula na chatha
use ki itna kareeb aagaya!!! Kitni raatein beet gayin, Kitne din beet gaye, bus beeta nahi to yadon ka wo pal, wo guzra hua kal, biti nahi to aankho ki nami aur uski ki kami !!!!

precap
geet missing!!!!

CREDIT OF THE VM goes to lvzlyf12
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
*edit*
That was very well described...i wonder how maan will react when he comes to know about the baby??!
👏⭐️👏
Sadaf
Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update...............

simply brilliant.............
u r too good ..................
plzzzzzz continue soon
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww sad,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, poor Meera loosing her baby........... 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskan😊

Just read part 32 and then saw you've updated part 33 too😊
Sorry for the late comments😳

Part 32
Naintara is the evil mind here too. Hate her so much😡
Liked how Maan was asking her to stay away from Dev's life but I didn't like him slapping her!
MSK image is like that of a gentleman so hitting a woman doesn't suit him.
I loved when Geet said aapki nafrat par toh sirf mera haq hai!!
Wonderful dialogues!!!👏
Geet had to face the angry Maan😭
It was heart breaking to see Maan guilty and then leaving Geet😭
The VM was really nice😊
And the Hindi lines you wrote in the end of the update had a great poetic touch!👏
Perfect!!!

Part 33
This was a pretty serious update with lots and lots of things happening.
Maan leaving Geet😭😭
Dev-Meera part was sad😭
Dev is so good. I respect him a lot!!!
Feeling sorry for Meera but because of this, realization dawned on geet about the attachment a mother has for her baby!
For the first time, baby-mama talk was emotional, too heart-touching!
I love you baby!😊 Papa will come soon😊
Hoshiarpur scenes were good. The pics made the perfect picture for the scene!
I just loved the lines you've written for Geet in the outhouse part.!!!
I read it so many times. They were so good!!!👏
Darji ki entry. Lets see what happens next....


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Posted: 14 years ago
aww bechari meera - i feel sorry for her - idhar bhi NT kissi ko sakoon se jeene nahi der rahi!!
haha let me guess thats darji - geets darji??
i wonder if he'll meet brij n sumhow find out bout geet's pregnancy?

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