Maaneet SS: Shaadi&SuhaagRaat COMPLETED pg:1,10,19

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part One
Geet Handa found herself nervously sitting in front of the dressing table, with Meera hovering over her, styling her hair and applying her makeup. Her stomach felt as if it was in a tight knot and there were many thoughts running through her head. Her life would change after today, she hoped it would change for the better. How would her future be from now on? Would she able to adjust as the elder daughter in law of the Khurana family?

She shook her head thinking it was just last minute jitters. She took comfort in the fact that she was going to marry someone who loved her and would protect her always. Maan Singh Khurana maybe arrogant, possessive and overbearing, but he was fiercely loyal and loved her unconditionally.

Their journey from the argumentative boss and secretary to that of lovers may have been a turbulent one. But Maan Singh Khurana was always there for Geet whenever she was faced with any trouble and with each passing day this became more and more obvious. She knew and the world knew that Maan would anything for his Geet, like putting Dev and Naintara in prison for the torture they had put her through. However Geet still felt a twinge of sadness at not having any family members to fulfil any of the customs.

Meera's soft voice bought Geet out of her musings.

"You look beautiful," Meera said while placing the gorgeous red duppata on Geet's head.

Geet walked up to the full length mirror to admire herself. She looked stunning in her red lengha that had heavy gold embroidery. She had minimal makeup and jewellery on, and looked very elegant.

Suddenly the door opened to reveal a chattering Pinky and Pari standing at the doorway.

"Wow," Pinky said in awe, "Arre Geet yaar, you look so beautiful."

"Pinky tu bhi na..." replied a blushing Geet.

"Arre dekho toh, kitna sharmari hai yeh... vaise Geet... aaj toh tu Mr Dreamy ki hosh uda de ghi ha," giggled Pari.

"Ab bas bhi karo tum dono," reprimanded Meera, "but Geet I'm gonna be honest with you, lagta hai ki aaj raat hubby dearest will loose control" winked Meera whilst giving Geet a slight nudge on her shoulders.

"Uff, stop it guyz" Geet blushed again. As she raised her hands to fix the khandani neck piece Dadi had given her to wear on this special day, Pari couldn't help but let out another series of giggles.

" Ab tujhe kya hua? " muttered Pinky while munching on some ladoos.

" Kuch nahi, I was just checking out Geet's mehndi, look at how dark it is. Vaise Geet, you know what the saying is about dark henna right?"

Without waiting for Geet's response, all three girls shouted "Arre... gehra rang ka yeh matlab hota hai ke Maan toh tujhe bohot pyar karenge!"

The girls then broke out into a fit of laughter causing bechari Geet to turn a even darker shade of red if that were possible. As their their laughter and teasing continued, Tasha came stumbling through the door.

"Oh silly me" she chuckled.

"I was sent up to say that everyone's waiting downstairs." Having said that she quickly ran out of the room, as she heard an angry Sasha call for her.
Meera, Pari and Pinky rushed to help Geet with the final touches.

As for Geet, if the dancing butterflies in her stomach were doing the waltz before, they were doing the Salsa now.........

Note: This Short Story will be posted in 3 parts (Pre-shaadi, shaadi, suhaag raat).... next part will be posted soon, if i get get plenty of lovely comments.... hmmm maybe like i dunno four pages šŸ˜‰šŸ˜† and do let me know how erm explicit (ratings out of 5, with 5 meaning bhery ahem ahemšŸ˜†) you would like the suhaag raat scene to be šŸ˜‰ā˜ŗļø...
Please do press the like button... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maaneet suhaag raat šŸ˜ i'm in maaneetland again. awesome first part! and I would give a 4.5 rating as to how explicit the suhaag raat to be (because if I'd give a 5 I would probably enter maaneetland and never come out ā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø) continue soon pleasešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: yasu09

let me know how erm explicit (ratings out of 5, with 5 meaning bhery ahem ahemšŸ˜†) you would like the suhaag raat scene to be šŸ˜‰ā˜ŗļø...




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u seriously asking? I think u already know the answer! šŸ˜‰

I like it a lot so far....write phasssssstttttt!! I wanna read more. 😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
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i havent read it yet.....but from the title i can tell im gunna love it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is soo good!

can't wait for this to actually happen in the show!

con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaz baby šŸ¤—

Love it so far 😃

I want the next part to be longer šŸ˜” .... this one was wayyy too short. But I loved this part. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Oh cannot wait for the wedding 😃


Jhan
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!!!
I just couldn't help but open it after reading the title...
plz do continuešŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely and awesome first part!!! ā¤ļø

Please continue soon!!!šŸ¤—

For the suhaag raat, I would like to rate 6 out of 5 if that's possible...Hahaha.... šŸ˜†Then, i will definitely be in MaaneetLand forever...šŸ˜
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SUPERB WRITING....Good One yaar...Waiting for the remaining 2 parts...PLEASE post them sooooon...

Part 1 : Rating : 5 - Awesome...😊

Simply love Gurmeet & Drashti.....They r the rocking jodi on-screen....šŸ˜‰
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awesome pls do cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

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