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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey muskan di,

that was so awesome...really so good...
i really loved it...maaneet ek dusreke bina nahi reh sakte
they both love one another alot...
and maan manoying her again... lovly maza aayega ab
so waiting for next one... keep writing
update soon di
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update muski!
really luved it!
amazing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome....finally got the time to read all the part
pls keep on sending the pm i am waiting.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
so new char intro maan's dad😲😊
till now he was angry now he will only manofy geet😆😆😆😆
would be waiting for nxt part

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Posted: 14 years ago
i knew it why maan was angry bt silly he ....
der was no need to get angry she cant stay wid him all day until they are officially married 😳 😆

geet's baby is really maan's chamcha haan i agree too always takes maan's side ......
it was so wonderful update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
as always i loved it ........muh ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i'm so excited abt precap
i love der ruthana manana plz update soon ..................



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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...
btw when maan wil com to know geet is pregy with his child???
waiting for that....

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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 26

Geet disappeared into the grand hall and Maan ached to follow.
the urge to chase her down right then was as strong as the need
to draw his next breath, he quelled it. She had spotted him.
He had seen in her eyes that she would find him..
unki aankh micholi mano khatam hi nahi ho rahi thi..

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EymQZMkGdo4&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
the function got over at around 11pm..
geet hugged daadi said bye..she looked around restlessly
daadi - maan ko doondh rahi hain aap?
baby~papa ko bol kar nahi gayee to fir naraz hojayaenghe😆
geet - nahi nahi..main pinky ko doondh rahi hoon
daadi - oh!! pinky is right there next to u
geet - Oh! did'nt notice..bye daadi...
daadi - geet beta kal please jaldhi aajana..
engagement party will start around 7pm ..u please be here at 2pm
gifts sab arrange karna hain
baby~aap khahe to main aap ke saath rah javoon😳 geet~chup kar
geet - ji daadi maa

geet & pinky left in a taxi..when they reached home..
pinky - yaar geet to pay kar de..mera haat main mehendi laaghi hain
geet - umm
pinky goes in & geet pays the cab fellow ..
geet half heartedly walks in maan pulls her hand & takes her aside
geet - aap? (she was so delighted to see him.. it was evident in her twinkling eyes )

baby~papa aagayee papa aagayee
maan - challo mera saath
geet - mujhe aap ke saath khanhi nahi jaana
strugles to let go her hand..maan holds it tighter
maan - chup chap challoo
geet - main aise aap ke saath nahi jaa sakthi...
maan - don't make me force u..
geet - aacha main andar jaa ke ..sabke sona ke baad aathi hoon
maan - promise
geet - umm..paka promise..please mera haath chodiya na..dard ho raha hain
maan leaves it at once...she rushes in & says main nahi aavoonghi
maan - I will be waiting
geet - don't bother

it was 1am ..geet was restless if maan was still waiting..
she sneaked out & looked around..she did'nt see him
bada kharahe the will be waiting
maan hugged her from behind - tum bhi to kha rahi thi nahi aavooghi
she turned back into his embrace..aap tab se idhar wait kar rahe hain
maan - Maan singh Khurana keeps his word
she kisses his nose..aap aise kyun karthe hoon
ok ok..I guess I know..because u hate me...
maan - & u hate me 2,3,4,5,..10
baby~fedup..goodnight🥱

they reach outhouse..
geet - aap mujhe kyun bola rahe the...
maan - tum challoo too..
he takes her to the room & makes her sit on the stool..
he pulls another smaller stool & sits infront of her..
geet looks at him wat he was upto..
he folds the salwar upto knee level..she pulls her leg away & shies
geet - app yeh kya kar rahe ho?
maan - pehli bar nahi deehk raha hoon, chup chap beethi rahoo

geet was red in embaressment
he picks up a bowl of mehendi & applies it in her hand
geet - yeh aap kya kar..& she pauses..lost looking at him..
he puts simple dot in the center of the palm & smaller dots around & caps on each fingers nails...
tears roll down her eyes..she tries to look away
then he does the same thing on the other hand
he lifts her leg & places on his knees...keeps the cap on each toes
and a dot in the middle..she shies with his touch
uske nam aankhoo ka yun sharmana..maan khoo gaya un ankhoo main..
shadghi ki murth ho jaise
maan - ho gaya..
geet - hate u ..says it crying...& hugs him
maan - yeh aacha hain..tum har baad pe roo dethi hoo
wipes her tear..& some mehendi comes on her cheeks..he smiles
geet smiles looking at him
geet - aap muskarathe huwa aacha laagthe hain
maan - wait let me wash my hands & come..

maan comes out & asks do u want to have some thing
geet nodes her head for a no
maan - wait I will get some milk for u
geet - nahi maine dinner kiya tha
maan - chup!!!
geet makes a baby face & waits...
maan gets her milk & makes her drink with a straw
geet starts laughing
maan - kya huwa..
geet - I will be the only person in the whole world having milk with straw
baby~milk with straw !!!
maan - hogaya...aab finish karoo

after she finishes maan wipes her mouth & makes her lie on the bed...
she hugs maan with her hands spread ..not to spoil her mehendi
maan - yeh kitni deer aur rakhna hain?
geet - kal subha tak..
maan - kyun..jabb dry hojayaga wash karleena
geet - nahi...mujhe yeh ek dam dark chahiya
maan - kyun? how does that matter
geet - khethe hain..mehendhi dark hone ka matlab hain...pati bhut pyar karegha
maan - kya gurantee hain ki dark hoga to pyar karegha???
geet - 100% gurantee hain
maan - kaise ? logic kya hain?
geet - aap har baat pe logic kyun dondthe rahthe hoo?
waise aap to pyar ko hi nahi manthe phir meri baathe aap ko khanha samjh aayeenghi
maan - thats better sleep now...
after few mins geet was restless
geet - suniya
maan - umm!!
geet - suniya na
maan - umm!! bolo na
geet - mujhe loo jana hain
maan - jaavoo
geet - meri mehendi karab hogayaghi
maan - u definitly not expecting me to get a bed pan for u
baby~shocked😲

geet - nahi & turns her face
maan lifts her & takes her to the loo & opens her salwar
geet was shocked & embaressed..he goes to pull it down..
geet - nahi main kar loonghi..
she sat & said aap yanha khadhe rahenghe to main nahi kar paavoonghi
maan smiled & went out...and waited
geet - aap apna kaan band karo..
after she was through...maan lifted her & got her back to the bed & dressed her up
he looked at her..moved up kissing passionately, kissed the line of her jaw, then again moved lower, planting more kisses down the side of her throat she held on to him as if she had no strength left. Her body shervred against his. she burried her head in his chest..maan hugged her tighter holding back his wild emotions...he moved her curls & said hate u a lot..2,3,4,..10
kabhi karti hai baatein badon si aur kabhi bacchi ban ja thi hai,
apni adaon se woh aksar Maan ko rijahaya karti hai,
aankhon me chupake izhaar jab labon se Inkaar kar jaya karti hai,
na jane kyun Maan uske inkaar main bhi ekraar man leya kartha hain


precap

busy day in office!!!
THE VM CREDIT GOES TO RoKa0407 thanxs thanxs a lot for all ur support & love...hope u like this update..
please please do comment love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski..


in a shock after todays esidoe,. will read and comment soobn

our Geet si such a cutiepie..loved the part when Maan applied Mehendi ...Dekhenge mehndi rang layega ya nahi????.....Loo sequence was also tooo cute... I am eagerly waiting for Brij veerji's return.. wanna teall there is someoen else also who will take care of his Behen :)...

loved the VM also...please add more VM's dear.. I think for MANEET you can add funny VM's 😃😃😃
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Me too still in shock after today's Epi........... BTW baby was a bit quite today........... want more of Baby.............. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooo!!!luved today's part...i was embarrrased by the last part u wrote..😳😳😳😆😆😆😉nice one again.di.
👏👏👏
rohini

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