~Madhoshi maaneet thread # 2~ - Page 35

~madhoshi~
part 25

maan went to the gym for his work out
he was very upset about geet leaving like this..

maan gets ready & goes to office..
he started looking into the new projects & met up with the clients
kuch hi pal guzara tha...fiza main uski mehak gul ne laaghi....
jaan tha tha chanchal si khil khilathi huwi aabhi andhar aayee ghi
ek pal ke liya uska dil thum sa gaya...uski ek aahat ke aas me..
nazare jhukathi..aapna dupatta haath mein sambale
geet - aap ka new appointment schedule
maan - umm
sasha walks in - MK..aap ki papa se baath huwa HP land ke bare main
maan - umm..there seems to be some problem
geet was still standing there
maan - tumhe kuch kaam hain
geet - nahi
maan - then leave(really stirn voice)

sasha calls daadi again
sasha - hi daadi..how are u?
daadi - meri palpetation!!
sasha - daadi main MK nahi hoon
daadi - nahi seriouly Maan ne mujhe pareshan kar rakha hain
sasha - aur yanha Geet ko pareshan
daadi - why wat happened?
sasha - bichari ko bhut bhuri tarah se dant diya
daadi - I am trying so much to get them closer & he keeps on doing things like this uff
aacha suno aaj we are having some ladies coming for putting mehendi
sasha - daadi yeh to sirf engagement hain na..phir mehendi?
daadi - yah!! but all the laddies were coming home any way so we thought mehendi bhi
laagha lenghe..then we have a small party dinner at night
sasha - aacha
daadi - tum geet, pinky, tasha aur sab ko leekar ghar aajavoo
sasha - we will be there by 3pm
daadi - that will be great

sasha informs every one & goes to geets cabin
baby~papa ki girl friend...sorry sorry friend!!!😳
geet gives a weak smile
sasha - we have to go to khurana mansion at 3pm for mehendhi function
geet - ji
pinky - arrey yaar tujhe to mehendi laaghna bhut aacha laagtha hain na
sasha gives a stirn look & leaves
pinky - wow maza aagaya..main to dono haat main mehendi laaghavoonghi
geet smiles

at 2pm geet sneaks into maans cabin..maan ignores her
geet - ji woo
maan - i don't have the whole day for u
geet - woo daadi ne mehendhi function ke liya ghar bhulaaya hain
maan - tu
geet - main jaavoon?
maan - subha mujh se bhol kar gayee thi?
geet looks down cluctching her duppata

every one leaves for the function
geet sits in the cabin & completes her work..it was 9pm
maan gets a call from daadi
maan - ji daadi
daadi - geet khanha hain? aabhi tak tum loog function main nahi aayee..
maan - main uka secertary nahi hoon
daadi - but she is ur secrtary right
maan - so
daadi - why did'nt u let her come for the function..itna kya kaam hain?
maan - maine kab use rooka(he closes his eyes)
daadi - the whole staff is here enjoyng ..tumhara kya jaatha agar woo yanh aajathi tho
maan - lekin
daadi - hume aap se yeh umeed nahi thi Maan
she cuts the call

maan looks at the time & looks at the blinds..it was still closed
he rushed to her cabin..she was sleeping resting her head on the table
kya karu main is pagli ladkhi ka..
meri har baath dil main le lathi hain
naraz main tha is se ..aur mujhe aapna ghunhe gar bana diya

he lifts her & takes her to the car...
sees her face which had trails of tears around ..he knew wat she would
have been doing the whole day..uske ek ek aasoon ki lekhir uski seena main
aag laaga rahi thi..

she cuddles up in the seat ..maan tries to put the seat belt..
baby~mama uttoo seat belt
geet in her sleep removes the seat belt...
she wakes up when they were in the mid of the traffic
she sets her duppata & looks at maan
maan - tum function ke liya kyun nahi gayee?
geet - aap ne mana kiya tha isliya
maan - maine kab mana kiya
geet - jaane ke liya bhi to nahi khaha tha
maan - tumhare wajah se daadi ni mujhe daanth laagyee
geet - serves u right
& turns her face

it was 9.30pm when they walked in..
there was a complete silence when maan walked in
daadi - geet thanxs..aaj tumhare wajah se maan bhi function main aagayee
geet looked at maan ...& looked down
maan & daadi start talking ...
pinky comes & pulls geet away
maan ke nazare mano usi pur thi...daadi noticed that..
daadi - too aap shaadi kab kar rahe hain?
maan - umm(still looking at geet)
daadi smiled & so shall I announce ur engagement?
maan - umm!!! nahi daadi...(maan snaps out) I don't want to get married now
please don't force me into all this and he walks away still his
eyes looking for geet...

pinky - yaar mehendi wali to chali gayee...
geet - its ok ..phir khabhi laagha loonghi
pinky - sorry yaar I know how much u love putting mehendi

geet ke aankhee bhi mano maan ko dondh rahi hoo..
kuch to baath thi dono ki ankhoo main..aapni manzil
is beehd main bhi unki aankhee dondh lathe thi
dil ki batain bata deti thi unke aankhen
dharkanon ko madhosh kar deti thi unki aankhen
dil pe chalta nahi zoor kisi ka,
yeh dil ko bhi tu deewana bana deti thi unki aankhen
Woh laboon se baat nahi karte tu na kare,
haal sara unke dil ka suna deti thi unki aankhen

precap
maan manofying again....

you are really growing as a writer..since pyar ka eshaas to Madhoshi- there is just soo much difference. Well done.