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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
dear amrita

_____simply superb and excellent----and so much like shaank couple toooooo

Thank you dear....Ahhhhh....If it really sounds like Shanak, then I'm really done😃

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

Mysterious Towel!!!

(this scene is specially for Vandu....on her special request I wrote this....hope you all will enjoy reading this)

Shaan rushed into the washroom to have a shower as he was feeling stinky. He wondered how he has forgotten to have a shower for so long. How could he forget to take a shower since the previous day? It could be the reason why Khanak refused to say 'I Love You' to him. He scratched his head with his fingers, clenching his teeth with anger. 'Argh! Khanak! 'He murmured slowly and smiled at his own madness.

Shaan closed his eyes as he turned on the shower, enjoying the cold water to run all over his manly body. He experienced a different feeling today, thinking of his wife while taking a shower. He opened his eyes thinking Khanak was next to him, watching him enjoying the shower. He turned around, but saw no body there so went back into the shower again. He was going to make her to say the three magical words to him, no matter what he has to do for it.

He opened the door secretly thinking that Ms.Musibat could enter his room at any time. He peeped through the small opening of the door and saw Khanak sitting on the bed with her back facing to him. He closed the door at once and let out a sigh 'oh! Khanak! Now what am I going to do? Neither I could get out like this nor could I wait here all the day' had he muttered to himself. He straightened himself and cleared his throat to get ready to face her.

'Khanak! Please pass me the towel' Shaan called from the washroom. Khanak ignored him and continued with her own thinking, with her naughty smile. 'Khanak!' His voice became louder this time 'give me the towel now' he ordered her. She tilted her head to one side and held her cheek with one of her fingers before answering him 'why should I give it?' she giggled after answering him.

'Khanak! Come on give it to me' Shaan called out again. 'Ok, I will give it, but you have to stop forcing me to say I Love you again' Khanak told her condition to Shaan. Shaan smiled hearing her saying I Love You and then called her again 'Khanak, don't you know that you have just said it to me?' Khanak covered her mouth hearing his voice. 'Shantanu, listen! I'm not going to give you the towel, if you have the courage come and get it...Or else you can spend the rest of your day in the washroom...The choice is yours' Khanak challenged Shaan.

Shaan banged his fist on the wall and started walking up and down the washroom thinking what he needed to do now. A huge grin appeared on his face as he came up with a new idea to face the challenge 'ok, Khanak! I'm coming out now' he warned her before coming out of the washroom. Khanak widened her eyes and decided to walk out of the room.

'Khanak! Don't want to see me winning back this time also?' Shaan's voice froze Khanak on her steps. Afraid to look back at him, she closed her eyes. Shaan walked to her, wrapped in the towel and touched her shoulders 'Khanak, scared to look at me?' he asked with his attitude. 'I have some work to do, let me go' Khanak murmured still with her eyes closed. 'I have a condition, if you want to go then you have to do what I ask' Shaan took the advantage of the situation. 'First cover up yourself, Shantanu' Khanak pointed a finger at him, with her eyes closed. 'Look at me now' Shaan pleaded her and she shook her head in disagreement. 'How can you say that I'm ....... without looking at myself' Shaan was eager to make her to melt in front of him, so that she could say those three magical words to him. 'Tell me your condition now' Khanak's voice gave assurance to Shaan. 'Tell me you love me ...."I Love you" and that's it....or else I won't let you go away' Shaan explained his condition to her, with a 'can't let you down' smile on his lips.

Now don't dream of x-rated things and blame me for making you all to go for it.....Enjoy this and have a great weekend😆

Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago

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shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

👏👏😍😍.omg amrita superb....ur gonna make me nauty again.......its so cute n funny at the same time fultoo shanak.hai monday kab aayega

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Rukhsar Ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

aww thanks for the pm that was so amazing and cute

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: shanakforever
👏👏😍😍.omg amrita superb....ur gonna make me nauty again.......its so cute n funny at the same time fultoo shanak.hai monday kab aayega

Ahhhh Karishma,......thanks a lot girl...... I know you have been away for sometime and now you are back.....You can drool over Shaan as much as you want....but don't take this as serious because the chances of happening this in the serial are less than 1%.😆😆😆

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Manita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

@ Amrita --- just one word for you.............AWESOME !!!

think of a professional writing career girl.............u have a way to use the power of words in the most beautiful peices !!

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: ruky786
aww thanks for the pm that was so amazing and cute

Thank you Ruky.....Keep on drooling over Shaan.....that's all I can say😉

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: rbo_fan
@ Amrita --- just one word for you.............AWESOME !!!

think of a professional writing career girl.............u have a way to use the power of words in the most beautiful peices !!

Ahhh Manita, my sweetie....I also have a single word and yes, you have guessed it right.....It's no other word than A BIG BIG THANKYOU to you😛

Writing? Then what will happen to my poor profession😭 Jokes apart.....If I ever write a novel or anything like that, you will be the first one to be informed😉.....I take your words as a compliment sweetie

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Manita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: amrita2010
Ahhh Manita, my sweetie....I also have a single word and yes, you have guessed it right.....It's no other word than A BIG BIG THANKYOU to too😛
Writing? Then what will happen to my poor profession😭 Jokes apart.....If I ever write a novel or anything like that, you will be the first one to be informed😉.....I take your words as a compliment sweetie

@ amrita.....please do that and do not forget to inform me as i will be waiting for the day when u write a novel or something................i am not usually a gr8 fan of FFs and OS etc.............may be due to lack of time, so i keep reading while skipping many parts....( sorry to everyone who writes them)........i know it takes a lot of effort. But if somethng is absolutely brilliant, I just get hooked, reading each line again and again............................i have read few novels who were masterpeices otherwise i do not ususally complete what i start to read......
so my compliment to u is all the more genuine.......................very few ppl are capable in churning out emotions in the readers by simple use of words. you have this ability........

thanks for spreading happinezz.........

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#150

@Manita.....

Girl, I really don't think I would be able to do it soon.....

I hardly find time to write OS and FF also, but it's just my interest in writing that helps me....
Regarding the hard efforts yes, people put so much into it, and that's the reason why, I too cannot read much of the ff's and OS. I too don't want to give a comment without a thought to it, so I better stay away from it......Great minds think alike, is all I can say to you regarding this......I do understand what you have tried to say.......cheers

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