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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Loved it Amrita, very cute😳
But I don't think Shaan will withdraw himself or Khanak will be daring enough to say those last words to Shaan😳....but one thing is sure...Indian TV walas will not show anything "dash" "dash"😆

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Undress me ----------------Part Two

Shaan took her words more of a challange than winning back his shirt. He turned around to face her 'fine, and don't tell me that I did this or that, ok? And remember that you can't win against Shantanu Kandelwal'. It seemed like his name has everything needed to win the challenges he faces. She blinked her eyes as if she was still in a state of unconciousness. He frowned at her with a huge grin on his face by seeing the craziness of his beautiful wife. 'Khanak, let me start with it' he raised his hand to reach the shirt she wore. With a shock on her face she gathered the shirt to herself and tightened it with her hands. She turned away not wanting to face him again as she would definetly loose to him.

He held the collar of the shirt, not letting her to go away from him. She tried to free herself by pulling, again she failed as he pulled her towards him. 'Let me go Shantanu!' she managed to say between her breaths. He pulled her closer to him again, ignoring her demand 'only when I get back my shirt!'. She closed her eyes as her mind forced to run but legs didn't allow her to do so.

He lowered himself and muttered 'why do you want to go? A while before you challenged me, and now you want to go away? I can't believe this Khanak' He frowned as he knew the reason why she wanted to go. She said 'actually I didn't mean anything like that'. 'Then what did you mean? I don't understand what you want to do? Tell me, what do you really want?' He turned to her and lifted her chin as he did before. She lifted her chin but kept on closing her eyes stubbornly. Ahh! So this is what she wanted.

'Open your eyes and look at me, Khanak! Tell me why? Tell me? How long are you going to run away from me? And what we have?' He said in a husky voice. He has suffered alot from her, affecting him everytime they were together. He could not take his eyes off her everytime she was present. He wanted to keep her in his arms alot of times, but she stopped him from doing it before. He could not bear it any more. He could not tolerrate her breaking his heart with her smiles and kindness.

He put his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. He whispered to her ears 'Khanak! Do you really want to see what you do to me!' He tilted her head on his shoulder and placed slow, gentle kisses from her neck to her cheek and then her ear 'see what happens to you too! Still you want to go?'

She closed her eyes as she felt herself go weak. She tried to remove his hands from her shoulders, but she felt something reached her deep within, when she touched his hands. Her touch encouraged him as he slowly put his right hand down to unbutton the rest of the buttons on the shirt.

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: arsh-fan
hey amrita its manju 😊 and yes yar have to survive imagining the hot scene wat will happen wen lights are off😊😉 its 8 hrs long yet.............😭 but till then i have ur ff to read😛

Hey Manju🤗

here I came with the next part😆😆😆

once I started have to complete it right? I took a break then and cotinued again and guess my office mates think that I have started another carrier than the present one now😆😆😆

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: missfilmy
Loved it Amrita, very cute😳
But I don't think Shaan will withdraw himself or Khanak will be daring enough to say those last words to Shaan😳....but one thing is sure...Indian TV walas will not show anything "dash" "dash"😆

Thank you Ranjini🤗

Don't worry girl, the rest is up with his new challenges and who won it😆😆😆

Yeah, really they won't show such bold scenes😆

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

amrita the second part just made me dizzy.....wow owow owow owow owow owow owow.omg omg omg the last part just blew me off i could really imagine how shaan would have done that 2 khanak.omg dead dead dead dead 🤪🤪🤪.......superb superb yaar.thanku soooooooooooooooooooo much u r just the bestest🤗

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: shanakforever
amrita the second part just made me dizzy.....wow owow owow owow owow owow owow.omg omg omg the last part just blew me off i could really imagine how shaan would have done that 2 khanak.omg dead dead dead dead 🤪🤪🤪.......superb superb yaar.thanku soooooooooooooooooooo much u r just the bestest🤗

Ahhhh Karishma🤗

Did you go to college today? I'm really worried that your studies might get affected because of all this and may be I won't write so much so soon then😆😆😆

but again let's have a party as my 'endless night' scene is really happening.....gal I'm too happy today😃

Thank you sooooooo much, sweets

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

hey amrita i did not go but c wat i got in return shanak sbb video n such an awesome os.made my day n night toh waise bhi shanak wil make😆

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Eeeeee !!

ROFL at the Title !!

The scene was very very Hawt !!

Awesomely written !!

Loved Reading it !! Was hoping that you'd write something !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Amrita, mere liye kuch zada hi ho gaya😳

Plz don't continue😳

Loved it dear🤣

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: togepe30
Eeeeee !!
ROFL at the Title !!

The scene was very very Hawt !!

Awesomely written !!

Loved Reading it !! Was hoping that you'd write something !!

Luv,

Vandu

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I knew you all will have such besharm things on your minds😆😆😆

so purposely wrote it as the title

Thank you so much darling🤗