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Posted: 14 years ago
Read all 5 parts
Looks lik stry is taking a drastic turn
Hop u live upto our expectations
Updates were Good
Liked new Geet a lot
Hop Maan didnt do sumthg wat he cannot undo frm his life ever
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmm i wonder where maan is. what was on the tv. great update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi......miskaan...please bata do ab where is maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am scared...where is maan....what happend to him..muskaan pls update soon..i can't sleep...and ya thx for the two updates and pls continue madhoshi toooo..it's just an awsome ff....love to read ur ffs
Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm trying to figure out what has happened, my theory is Sasha killed herself and maan has been arrested, i'm probably soo off the mark i can't even see it lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,

Please Please end this mystry yaar,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

i am so so so worries. what happpened to MAAN? why is media out there? and what's on news that made geet cry so hard. i'm in too much tention now. please yaar update soon...................

Nice Update........... too much crying............... 😭 😭 😭

Thank you for P.M. and please update soooooooooooooooooooooooon

Greattttttttttttttttt update overall! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski di plz plz update karo i can't take it anymore where is he???
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update but where is maan lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

daadi - NT..take her to the room...before media..ponces on her with questions..
NT takes her to the room & closes the room....

part - 129

she walked in shock..anger..fury agony...pulled the curtains & tore them apart...
she lookd at the bed & pulled the spread & threw it on the floor...
GEET was disgusted with wat she saw..she could'nt take that sight...
she broke ever thing down...lamps..smashed up the mirror,..spilt opened the curtains..
smashed the flower vase on the wall ..tearing things up & wrecking the whole room..
she went crazy..she hated every sight of her room...her bed..her dressing table..
she was devastated..nothing was untouched..

she ran down to the kitchen & brought a can of kerosine & match box..she
spill the kerosine all around the bed..& emptied the whole can on the bed...
she lit a stick & threw it on the linen soaked in spirit..it caught fire instantly
flaming up the whole place..she did'nt move.. she stood there glaring at her room
burning down..she did'nt blink.neither did she get suffocated with the fumes..
she looked at the fire..but the fire in her eyes looked more intense & dangerous..
NT came running looking at the flames..she tried pulling her out of the room
but geet glared back at her in disapproval..NT had never seen this side of her...
probably geet herself did'nt know she could ever get so annoyed..distressed..
so tempered I thing it was not her temper..it was her LOVE...her passion..
her possessiveness..her obsession..her MAAN...her life...only that ever mattered to her
every thing seem shatterring down just because she was not hear ..just because he was alone
just because of her stupid over reaction...which is totally unlike her..
she was angry at self..at Maan ...at every thing around her...
Nt left at once & called daadi..how was outside...handling the media...

daadi excused herself from them & rushed to geets room...
daadi - yeh kya kar rahi ho tum
geet did'nt say anything..she just bend her head down..she could'nt have said
and done to disrespect her..she preffered keeping quite...
daadi commanded her to come out at once
daadi - hume aap se yeh umeed nahi thi...maan wanha kuch nahi bhol raha
aur tum yanha kuch nahi bhol rahe ho..kya hogaya hain tum dono ko
geet still did'nt say anything...
daadi - humne sab ki bus tum hi ek ummeed thi...aur tum aise react kar rahe ho
please tell us wat u know?
geet was still quite...she was looking down..knotting her duppata
daadi - wat is all this kab se chal raha hain?
geet looked away
daadi - did u know about all this ?
geet still did'nt know how to answere any of her questions...
daadi - GEET!! agar tumhe kuch pata hain to bolo beta
geet - mujhe unse milna hain (her voice was spitting fire)
daadi - woh kisi se nahi milna chahtha..hum bhi gaya the..
but he refused to meet us..he has'nt spoken a word to any one
tum dono aise chup rahoghe to....it is really not helping
geet - mujhe unse milna hain abhi
she leaves at once..it was a 40min drive...she was furious..
restless & annoyed...disgusted...not happy with the mess her life was in
through out the drive she kept on deeply....she knew she loved him..
but she could'nt believe that she could react so adversly too...this was totaly not her reaction

car stopped..she got down..media was covering the entrance to get to know one
news of Maan Singh Khurana..she could actually walk pass through them ..
they did'nt know her as Mrs Maan Singh Khurana...she introduced herself..
the person said..he is not willing to talk to any one
geet - woh mujh mana nahi kar paayengee...
it was dark..cold & dim..the place was giving a horriable feel ..
the person went to seek Maan's permission..
before he could say anything...
maan shouted..mujhe kisi se baaat...he paused..he knew ..without turning..
that it was her ...his heart was delighted..his eyes filled up with joy..moist..
he could'nt believe she actually was here to see him...
wanted to turn to look at her...he did..their glaze met..her eyes was on fire...
if looks could burn u..then that was it...there was no complaints in that eyes
it was pure anger..probably a bit of pain..guess more of pain...
geets eyes did'nt mosit,...it was infact turning red...it was unlike her ..totally
not wet...after seeing his moist eyes she still was spitting fire..
he could'nt stand that anger in her eyes...he actually looked down..(like hiding his face)
she came closer & gave a tight slap on his right cheeks
maan - GGGEEEET(he snapped back)
she shock her hand in pain..maan immediately held hand
she pulled back..held is collar...mana kiya thana maine..
maan - lekin
geet riased her hand..asking him to stop right there...
geet - aap ise baat pe kehna ka haaq koo chuke hoo...
aab jo kehna hain main kehoonghi..aur jo karna hain woh bhi sirf main karoonghe..
geet turned & left...
maan broke down & sat on the bed...
geet meets the lawyer and makes few calls....she was really cold & num

precap
World meeting Mrs Maan Singh Khurana😲

NEXT PART 130 thanxs for all ur resposes...I am really really greatfull to all of u...for motivating me..
hope u like this part too...please do comment love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res yes i'm first well i hope so gonna read then comment
EDIT: di what the heck was that? no i mean it wasn't bad ur parts are always wonderfully written but it's like one of those episodes that are wonderful but very sad and messed up. di i have a question are u planning on an update tonight? cuz if u r not that wud b like srsly messed up. i'm feeling so messed up after reading the update i mean GEET slapped MAAN. but don't b thinking i'm mad at u di i'm just mad at the situation.
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 14 years ago

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