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-Zoya- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Nice part
Was not boring at all
Continue soon
Thanx for the PM!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Kool_Naina thanx naina and ur added 😊
@ -Zoya- thanx sweety and mention not
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maan was coming back with a water bottle in his hand for the lady
but when he saw the couple's happy reunion he smiled and turned around
as soon as he turned around he saw an angelic face that caught his attention

TOGETHER FOREVER
Part 3

he coulden't keep his eyes off of that sweet beautiful innocent face
that was geet standing there smiling..... HIS geet.....
he turned to look in the direction in which she was smiling and saw the happy couple
when he looked back at where geet was standing he saw that she was'nt there
he looked around but couldn't find her
he didn't want to lose geet again
he went outside the durgaah and searched for geet there
but no luck
she was not in the durgaah or outside it
he got in his car and slowly drove on the road looking around searching for any signs of geet
by that time it had started to rain
maan became really worried for geet as she was pregnant
and he knew how much she loved rains
he knew that she would probably be playing in the rain
and..... then what if she caught cold or became sick
this won't be good for the baby
he needed to find geet and fast
it had been one hour since he had been looking for geet
he stopped his car andd stepped out of it
there was a walking track near there
he didn't know why he had stepped out in the rain.... rain which he hated
he would have done anything for not to stepping out in this pouring water
then he remembered the dhabaa night and geet
when she had played around in the rain and asked him to join her
he smiled at that thought and started to enjoy every drop of rain that fell on him
he closed his eyes enjoying the rain
he opened them and and something caught his attention
he could'nt believe his eyes

geet smiled at seeing the old man with his wife
and then stood there looking at their love for each other
she came out of her train of thoughts when someone pushed her
she regained control on herself
and walked out of the durgaah while praying for the safety or herself and the baby..... and maan
she saw the clouds in the sky and knew that it would rain soon and she should find some shelter
soon enough
she got into a rickshaw and told the rickshaw driver (RD) to take her to the girls hostel
after some time it had started to rain

the rickshaw stopped after like an hour
geet: bhai sahab kya hua?
RD: madem ji rickshaw kharab ho gya hay
geet: kya!! rickshaw kharab ho gya hay!!!!
hay baba ji ab may kya karu?
shaam kay 7 buj gay hay aur hostel kay darwaazay 8 bjay bund ho jatay hay
ab may waha kaisay pohanchu ge?
aur kitna andhera ho gya hay..... baba ji meri hifazat karna
RD: madam aap is walking track kay paar uus bench pay baith jai
jab koi aa nai jaata hamari madad ko ap waha he rahay

geet walked towards the bench and sat down
the rain seemed so beautiful that she could not resist but get up and enjoy the rain drops
she started to play in the rain like a 10 year old
she started swirling around and closed her eyes enjoying every drop of rain that fell on her

maan couldn't believe his eyes
there he saw geet enjoying and swirling around in the rain
she looked like an angle.... no..... more like a greek goddess
seeing her like this made him smile
his smile faded as he saw a group of 4 men looking at geet with their filthy eyes
they came towards geet who was still swirling around with closed eyes
their eyes travelled from her head to feet and saw her every curve that had become prominent
becuase of her wet clothes that were hugging her
geet still hadn't opened her eyes and she hit one of the men
he took hold of geet's wrists
geet opened her eyes and saw who she had collided with
she didn't feel comfortable
she tried to get away from him but he didn't let go of her wrists
he smiled a evil smile
and one of the other men came near geet and caressed her arm and and then kept on going
upward towards her face he then caressed her face
she wanted to cry she wanted to scream for help
but no voice came out of her mouth
she wanted to go... run away from these animals but they had held her tightly
she struggled hard to run free from them but they were too strong for her
one of the men seemed like thier gang leader who had held geets wrists now ordered one of his
men to hold the girl
geet struggled hard to run away
when the other man held her from behind she kicked him hard over there
he left geet and began to cry in pain
geet got the oppertunity and ran
she kept glancing back while running away from those men
when she saw that no one was behind her anymore she leaned against a tree and then rested
her hands on her knees and closed her eyes while catching her breath
she felt a hand on her shoulder
and then someone had held her wrists tightly and moved them behind her back and tightened
the grip
she opened her eyes in shock and saw the same men
she was scared
the leader of the gang seemed furious
he snatched off her dupatta and threw down
geet started to scream
tear drops started to fall from her eyes
she began to feel dizzy

maan seeing this stood in shock
but then geet's screams came to his ears
he ran towards her
turning the man holding her towards himself maan punched him on the face
he fell down
the others could not see their leader being punched by that man
they left geet and advanced towards maan
geet who was already feeling dizzy fell down
she looked up to see what happened and saw a man fighting the gundas
he had his back to her
it was three on one fight
two men had pick up sticks from nearby
and the unarmed man had tried punching maan on the face but maan held his fist and
kicked him hard in his stomach
the two men came with sticks in their hands and stricked maan hard on the back
it really hurt him
maan turned and took hold of the stick from one of them
it was his turn to strike now
he hit him hard on his head and it started bleeding
he turned to the other one who was coming towards him
maan kicked him on his face and heard something crack he knew it would be his neck but he
didn't care as long as his geet was fine
geet was watching all this fight
geets view was becoming blurred
maan turned to face geet but saw her sitting on the ground
geet saw the man turn in her direction
but she could not see his face as her focus was becoming blurred
she tried to focus hard


maan turned around as he heard geet yell
MAAAN PEECHAY DEKHO
and saw the leader, who had fallen down when maan punched him, pointing a gun at him
maan tried snatching the gun from him but the man had held it too tightly
they were now strugling to get the gun out of each others grip


geet tried focusing her eyes as to see who had saved her from those men
her view was becoming clear now and saw the face of her saviour
as soon as she recognized that face she saw the gang leader coming towards maan with a gun
pointed at him she couldn\t think of anything at that moment and yelled
MAAN PEECHAY DEKHO

geet saw that maan was trying to get hold of the gun from that man
they were struggling to get it
and then she heard the sound of gun fire
her eyes widened in shock and fear

sorry guyz
i said that it will have maaneet scenes so am sorry for that
but i really wanted to put in tha gundas 😉
i know i dragged that part
so i hope you enjoyed it 😃
any idea if some1 got shot or not??
eagerly waiting for your comments/ criticizmz 😃
will update when i see LOADZ of comments/criticzmz
n huay tou................... phir b update karu ge 😆
do hit the like button if you like
love
Noor
link to PART 4
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great! 👏 oh no...yeh munda bhi na..geet ki kabhi sunta hi nahin.. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

great! 👏 oh no...yeh munda bhi na..geet ki kabhi sunta hi nahin.. 😆

thanx sweety
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
-Zoya- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Awesome yaar...
Continue soon!!!
Me cant wait for the next part
Thanx for the PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome yar 👏 beautifully written... i enjoyed it ⭐️
update soon...aur pm karna mujhe 😆
ab mai previous updts bhi parhti hun.... 😉
Edited by nigii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zoya-

Awesome yaar...
Continue soon!!!
Me cant wait for the next part
Thanx for the PM

thanx jaanu 😳
ur welcome
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'll be waiting 😃
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Fabulous Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏
Hey U did'nt drag at all
Thats perfectly written👍🏼
But y did u stop there
Pls Update Soooooooon

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