SS on maaneet TOGETHER FOREVER part 15 page 51 - Page 8

Originally posted by: vinithaa

awesome👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: taibaaa

awesome........

Originally posted by: pickachu

Wonderfullll update.
I hope maan is alright.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome story can't wait to read more!!!!👏⭐️

Originally posted by: sweetcherry96

sorry for comenting late dear...!!!!!!

this part was damn gud just like previous ones.....

this dishum dishum was too gud.. loved it........

but agli bar maaneet together pakka na????😉

wid luv,,

Adeena.😛

geet saw that maan was trying to get hold of the gun from that man
they were struggling to get it
and she heard the sound of gun fire
her eyes widened in shock and fear

geet screamed: MAAN!!!
geet ran towards maan and knelt down besides him

geet: maan please uth jaeyay maan please....
please maan mujhay chor k mut jaeyay
maaaaan (sobbing)

maan didn't move
the man advanced towards geet
jerked her up by her shoulder and pinned her to the tree
geet started shouting for maan to save her but maan didn't open his eyes
he was still lying down eyes closed
the man was holding her too tightly so she could'nt run from him
he streched out his hand to touch geet's face but geet turned it away from him and closed her eyes
tears were flowing down her cheeks
the man was about to caress geet's cheek but then fell down
geet still had her eyes shut tight
she didn't dare to open them
she felt that no one was holding her anymore
she was about to open her eyes when she felt someone hold her wrists
the hands traveled from her wrists to her shoulder and then embraced her in a tight hug

maan was struggling to get the gun from the man
during the snatching session the gun was pointed towards maan's stomach
and the man had his finger on the trigger
maan tried to take the gun away from him but could not
then he heard the gun shot and the next thing he knew was that he had collapsed to the ground
he closed his eyes in pain

he heard a familier voice from somewhere

maan please jaldi say meray paas aa jao
may nay yahan tumharay baghair bohat waqt guzaar lia hay ab tum meray paas aa jao

maan recognized the voice
he opened his eyes and saw a man standing near him in white with a smile on his face
he looked exactly like him
he saw his father standing there
he looked at his surrounding and saw that there was nothing around them
every thing was white every where he saw there was nothing
but maan was so hapy to see him he didn't care where he was
he was about to hug his father when he heard geet's voice from far far away
he tried searching for geet
he looked everywhere but couldn't find her

father: maan beta jaldi chalo meray sath warna hum late ho jai gay
maan: nai baba may aap k sath nai jaa sakta abhi
mujhay geet ko dhundna ho ga warna wo kisi na kisi musibat may phuns jai ge hamesha
ki tarha
meray baghair wo aik qadam b museebat ko bulaey baghair nahi chal sakti
mujhay usay dhundna he hoga

maan closed his eyes in frustration because he couldn't find geet
everywhere he saw there was nothingness

father:theek hay beta as you wish
but i'll be waiting for you
open your eyes maan and you'll find your life and your geet

maan felt water droping on his face
he opened his eyes and felt that he was lying flat on the ground
he had severe pain in his stomach area
he didn't care as he heard geet shouting for his help
he got up but then again fell down
he got up but couldn't walk
he was even having difficulty in standing
he was feeling weak
he looked in geet's direction
his eyes burned in fury seeing her in that position with that man
he picked up a stick and dragged himself in geet's direction
smacked the man hard in his head with the stick
he collapsed to the ground
maan saw that had geet her eyes shut and tears were trickling down her cheeks
he held geet's wrists and caressed her arms all the way up to her shoulder and then embraced
her in a tight hug

geet knew to whom those hands belonged to
she recognized the touch as his
she felt his broad chest as her home

she didn't even open her eyes and knew that it was maan who had hugged her
she responded him back and hugged him tightly
her hands snaked around his back

maan: geet tum theek tou ho na?
geet : hmmm

and she sobbed in his chest
maan tried to calm her down

maan: geet shhhh
bus ab chup ho jao
maan rubbed her back

geet now hugged maan even harder
maan winced in pain
geet looked up to his face and noticed something wasn't right with him
maan felt weak in his legs
he couldn't stand anymore and almost collapsed to the ground
geet made him sit on the wet ground
and was horiffied to see a big red spot on maan's shirt

jutas and chappalz are also welcome along wid the comments/ criticizms
and sorry for not updating yesterday because had some guests and the aunty took me for shopping. i just hate shopping and shopping for clothes.... ARGH.... and no one asks my choice in clothes coz its not good... and she was like ASKING for my choice in CLOTHES (and it was for her daughter)
now who should know her daughterz choice me or aunty?
answer this simple question along with your comments/ criticizms
eagerly waiting for them
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