OS~ MEETING IN RAILWAYS ~OS

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Posted: 14 years ago

OS~ MEETING IN RAILWAYS ~OS

Date: 17th September, 2010

PART 1

Maan running to the station...no consciouness of the vehicles...he just was saved by coming in front of a car...but running again as if something is going to leave him for ever. Yeah...It was It was geet/......whom he could lose forever if he didn't get her.😭😭..

On the other side...

Geet taliking to the ticket giver..
Ticket giver - "Main kahan ka ticket doon"?😊
Geet - aisi kisi bhi jagah ka dijiye jo yahan se bahoot door ho..."😭
TG- (he couldn't understand Geet's meaning...)...Beta saf saf batao kahan ka ticket doon?😲
Geet - Kahin ka bhi de dijiye uncle ji...😭...
TG (being an emotional person) - Beta kahan jaogi???😊
Geet - jahan ye jindagi le jayegi...😔..
TG- Beta, jindagi to hume wahin le jaati hai jahan hum jaana chahte hain...hamri marji ke khilaf jindagi bhi kuchch nahin kaarr sakti...main tumhen agli gadi ka ticket de doon..😊
(TG was keen in knowing what was the problem with her...but she was not in the state of talking....like that...)
Geet - Haan de dijiye...😭..
TG (asked for some money and gave the ticket to her.....for amritsar....) Ye lo beta...thik se jaana...
Geet - (she just took the ticket and started walking aimlessly towards the railway lines.)- (to herself) - Mujhe yahan se bahuut door jana hai...😭😭.Maan se aurr unki duniya se bahoot door......(Flashbacks coming in her mind...Of all those moments which were happy with his maan.....).😭😭..
she was also weeping..😭...bitterly.......it seemed as if the whole pain of the world has come into her heart and this was the only way to throw it out... 😭

PART 2

Edited by Mg777 - 14 years ago

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PART 2

Maan was about to enter the station. He was not able to even think clearly. He was having a bucket of tears in his eyes.
MAAN - (to himself) - Maine tumhare saath bahot galat kiya hai geet.Mujhe maaf kar dena geet. Tum kahan ho geet.??

In the middle of these thoughts he was also shouting geet's name... It can't be explained... The pain and his guilt feeling was coming out so sharply that.. one would have burst in tears on hearing him......

The train arrived..Geet asked a person if it was the same train which she had to board..N the answer was positive....Now Geet was weeping more..Why not??She was not leaving Khurana mansion and delhi with her agreement..It was only her life and fate which was insisting her to do that...The poor girl...
Geet entered a coach and sat in an empty compartment....But she was not able to forget all those days which she had spent with maan, with this city , with khurana constructions, with her friends. It seemed as if something was left behind. But Geet couldn't let herself to be weak...becoz according to her, if she stayed here it would be bad for maan and everybody.........related to him...so she just wanted to step out of his life.

Maan had entered the station and was standing before the train. He didn't know what to do? Just then seeing him so worried and in an uncommon state, a person came from behind...put his hands on his shoulder...Maan turned back....surprised...

PART 3

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Noor Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey

i liked the second part 😊

nicely written

cont with another part

love

Noor

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Mg777

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NoorFatima
hey
i liked the second part 😊

nicely written

cont with another part

love

Noor

hey sure and thanks..

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Mg777

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PART 3

He was none other than the ticket giver.. yes the same ticket giver who...had been so good with geet.. Seeing maan in such a state he had related both of them...N he guessed if they both were together...

TG - Beta.. kisi ko khoj rahe ho...??
MAAN- (was surprised to hear this....but there was no time to think abt it..so he quickly answered back ) - HAAN ..... main..main geet ko khoj raha hoon..
TG - Geet???
MAAN - Haan wo...aapne use dekha hai kahinn??Wo kahan gayyi hai...???(maan spoke these lines so fastly that the ticket giver understood that this was teh same girl...but he wanted to make it clear..)
TG- arre beta..kya tumhari geet ne hare rang ki salwar kameez pahni hai...??
MAAN - haan haan....aapne dekha hai usse???wo kidhar gayyi jaldi bataiiyee?
TG - Arre beta wo to aayi thi ticket counter parr..maine usse isi train ka ticket diya tha....... amritsar ka...
MAAN- (became happy as if a child becomes happy on getting his/her most beloved thing)....thankyou uncle..thankyou.....thankyou....(saying thsi he ran towards the train..)
TG - (wanted to ask something, but seeing his impatience he kept mum...n smiling he went back to his counter,,,..praying to god ) - he bhagwaan .....iski baat maan le....

PART 4

Edited by Mg777 - 14 years ago